Yumi's Starter Spells

**Yumi** · Mon Oct 24, 2016 1:45 am

Epithet :

The Witch of Carnage

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Jewels :

5,133,750

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Daemon

Experience :

718,500

Reputation :

21,200

Class :

Spellsword

Aura :

Empress Aura

Magic :

Tyrant's Magic

Strength :

121

Speed :

33

Constitution :

170

Endurance :

123

Intelligence :

123

Mana :

5,500

Weapon :

Tyrant's Axe

Head :

Great Wizard Hat

Ring :

Brilliance Ring

Pouch :

1x Unique Custom, 1x Unique Custom Rework

Name: Kagehou (Shadow Step)
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Apocalypse Fist Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user kicks off the ground in any direction, releasing a wave of magic from their legs to propel them up to 5 metres in the direction they face. The user is launched at their own speed.

Name: Kuushou (Vacuum Palm)
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Apocalypse Fist Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user performs a palm thrust, firing a projectile of mana. A "vacuum shell" of compressed mana is released from the palm, 1m in diameter. The vacuum shell can be fired point blank or over a distance to deal D rank bludgeoning damage. By performing another palm thrust the user can fire the shell again, once per post.

Name: Kuroi Kyouka (Dark Enhancement)
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Apocalypse Fist Magic
Type:Self Buff - Strength
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user flicks one of their wrists and allows a black aura of mana, like flames, to consume their body. Mana floods into the muscles strengthening enhancing the users strength by D rank.

Name: Mokushi Reiki (Apocalypse Aura)
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Apocalypse Fist Magic
Type: Self Buff - Strength
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: With a simply yet notable flex of their muscles the user activates this spell. An onyx black aura of magic bursts forth from the users body encompassing their body and empowering their muscles increasing ones strength by D rank.

Name: Mokushinami (Apocalypse Wave)
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Apocalypse Fist Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user unleashes an onyx black crescent moon shaped wave of mana consuming a 1m diameter area in front of them. This spell can be performed through a variety of body movements for a versatile attack. Example swiping an arm, leg sweep, punch, kick, elbow, headbutt etc. This spell deals D rank bludgeoning damage. Once per post the user can unleash another wave of magical energy.

Last edited by Yumi on Tue Jun 27, 2017 8:52 pm; edited 7 times in total

**Yoshino Freljord** · Mon Oct 24, 2016 8:23 pm

Epithet :

The Absolute Zero

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Rank :

B-rank

Experience :

132,500

Class :

Warlock

Magic :

Frost Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Constitution :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

86

Mana :

900

Hey there Yumi! Here to grade your spells.

For Kuushou, I'd like you to elaborate on how it is used if sustained. It seems more like an instant spell as of the moment.
I'd like you to state that the buff in strength is of D-Rank for Kuroi Kyouka.
Please state that Mokushi Reiki's "flex" must be a notable one and not simply a small flex of the bicep without movement. Don't forget to state it buffs you by a single D-Rank too!

You know the drill. Upon completion, bump it up! If I do not reply within 24 hours time, feel free to throw it back into the Review forum for another moderator to get to it!

**Yumi** · Mon Oct 24, 2016 9:16 pm

Epithet :

The Witch of Carnage

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Jewels :

5,133,750

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Daemon

Experience :

718,500

Reputation :

21,200

Class :

Spellsword

Aura :

Empress Aura

Magic :

Tyrant's Magic

Strength :

121

Speed :

33

Constitution :

170

Endurance :

123

Intelligence :

123

Mana :

5,500

Weapon :

Tyrant's Axe

Head :

Great Wizard Hat

Ring :

Brilliance Ring

Pouch :

1x Unique Custom, 1x Unique Custom Rework

Fixed my spells. Bumped

**Yoshino Freljord** · Mon Oct 24, 2016 9:52 pm

Epithet :

The Absolute Zero

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Rank :

B-rank

Experience :

132,500

Class :

Warlock

Magic :

Frost Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Constitution :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

86

Mana :

900

Ahh poop. My apologies for missing this.

Your first spell cannot be a sustained spell because of the distance you can cover with it at D-Rank. Please change that to instant.

With that, you should be good to go! Bumperino and I'll approverino!

**Yumi** · Mon Oct 24, 2016 9:56 pm

Epithet :

The Witch of Carnage

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Jewels :

5,133,750

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Daemon

Experience :

718,500

Reputation :

21,200

Class :

Spellsword

Aura :

Empress Aura

Magic :

Tyrant's Magic

Strength :

121

Speed :

33

Constitution :

170

Endurance :

123

Intelligence :

123

Mana :

5,500

Weapon :

Tyrant's Axe

Head :

Great Wizard Hat

Ring :

Brilliance Ring

Pouch :

1x Unique Custom, 1x Unique Custom Rework

Bump changed to instant.

**Yoshino Freljord** · Mon Oct 24, 2016 10:06 pm

Epithet :

The Absolute Zero

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Rank :

B-rank

Experience :

132,500

Class :

Warlock

Magic :

Frost Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Constitution :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

86

Mana :

900

Congratulations, these spells have been approved.

**Leyaria Venerak** · Sat Jun 24, 2017 6:50 pm

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

S-rank

Race :

Demon

Experience :

500,000

Class :

Battlemage

Strength :

92

Speed :

43

Endurance :

38

Intelligence :

4

Mana :

2830

Pulled for revamp.

**Yumi** · Sat Jun 24, 2017 9:29 pm

Epithet :

The Witch of Carnage

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Jewels :

5,133,750

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Daemon

Experience :

718,500

Reputation :

21,200

Class :

Spellsword

Aura :

Empress Aura

Magic :

Tyrant's Magic

Strength :

121

Speed :

33

Constitution :

170

Endurance :

123

Intelligence :

123

Mana :

5,500

Weapon :

Tyrant's Axe

Head :

Great Wizard Hat

Ring :

Brilliance Ring

Pouch :

1x Unique Custom, 1x Unique Custom Rework

Bump.

Let me know if anything needs adjusting.

**Venus Rosé** · Wed Jun 28, 2017 2:46 am

Epithet :

The Burning Rose

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

607,500

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Vampire

Experience :

1,427,000

Reputation :

31,400

Class :

Phantom

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

501

Speed :

655

Constitution :

286

Endurance :

400

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

11,005

Off-Hand :

Serpyn's Soul Slasher

Ring :

Raven Night Ring

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Companion :

Blair

Congratulations, your spells have been approved for usage.

Yumi's Starter Spells

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