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Yumi's Starter Spells

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#1Yumi 

Yumi's Starter Spells Empty Mon Oct 24, 2016 1:45 am

Yumi
Name: Kagehou (Shadow Step)
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Apocalypse Fist Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user kicks off the ground in any direction, releasing a wave of magic from their legs to propel them up to 5 metres in the direction they face. The user is launched at their own speed.

Name: Kuushou (Vacuum Palm)
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Apocalypse Fist Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user performs a palm thrust, firing a projectile of mana. A "vacuum shell" of compressed mana is released from the palm, 1m in diameter. The vacuum shell can be fired point blank or over a distance to deal D rank bludgeoning damage. By performing another palm thrust the user can fire the shell again, once per post.

Name: Kuroi Kyouka (Dark Enhancement)
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Apocalypse Fist Magic
Type:Self Buff - Strength
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user flicks one of their wrists and allows a black aura of mana, like flames, to consume their body. Mana floods into the muscles strengthening enhancing the users strength by D rank.

Name: Mokushi Reiki (Apocalypse Aura)
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Apocalypse Fist Magic
Type: Self Buff - Strength
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: With a simply yet notable flex of their muscles the user activates this spell. An onyx black aura of magic bursts forth from the users body encompassing their body and empowering their muscles increasing ones strength by D rank.

Name: Mokushinami (Apocalypse Wave)
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Apocalypse Fist Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user unleashes an onyx black crescent moon shaped wave of mana consuming a 1m diameter area in front of them. This spell can be performed through a variety of body movements for a versatile attack. Example swiping an arm, leg sweep, punch, kick, elbow, headbutt etc. This spell deals D rank bludgeoning damage. Once per post the user can unleash another wave of magical energy.



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#2Yoshino Freljord 

Yumi's Starter Spells Empty Mon Oct 24, 2016 8:23 pm

Yoshino Freljord
Hey there Yumi! Here to grade your spells.


  • For Kuushou, I'd like you to elaborate on how it is used if sustained. It seems more like an instant spell as of the moment.
  • I'd like you to state that the buff in strength is of D-Rank for Kuroi Kyouka.
  • Please state that Mokushi Reiki's "flex" must be a notable one and not simply a small flex of the bicep without movement. Don't forget to state it buffs you by a single D-Rank too!


You know the drill. Upon completion, bump it up! If I do not reply within 24 hours time, feel free to throw it back into the Review forum for another moderator to get to it!

#3Yumi 

Yumi's Starter Spells Empty Mon Oct 24, 2016 9:16 pm

Yumi
Fixed my spells. Bumped



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#4Yoshino Freljord 

Yumi's Starter Spells Empty Mon Oct 24, 2016 9:52 pm

Yoshino Freljord
Ahh poop. My apologies for missing this.

Your first spell cannot be a sustained spell because of the distance you can cover with it at D-Rank. Please change that to instant.

With that, you should be good to go! Bumperino and I'll approverino!

#5Yumi 

Yumi's Starter Spells Empty Mon Oct 24, 2016 9:56 pm

Yumi
Bump changed to instant.



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#6Yoshino Freljord 

Yumi's Starter Spells Empty Mon Oct 24, 2016 10:06 pm

Yoshino Freljord
Congratulations, these spells have been approved.

#7Leyaria Venerak 

Yumi's Starter Spells Empty Sat Jun 24, 2017 6:50 pm

Leyaria Venerak
Pulled for revamp.

#8Yumi 

Yumi's Starter Spells Empty Sat Jun 24, 2017 9:29 pm

Yumi
Bump.

Let me know if anything needs adjusting.



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#9Venus RosĂ© 

Yumi's Starter Spells Empty Wed Jun 28, 2017 2:46 am

Venus Rosé

Congratulations, your spells have been approved for usage.



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