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#1Chelvaric Walderkat 

Excorcist's Magic starter spells Empty Thu May 25, 2017 3:24 am

Chelvaric Walderkat
Name: Card of the Nimbo Warior
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Exorcist Card’s Magic
Type: Other Buff - strength
Element: Light
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect:
The caster throws a golden card in front of the target and shouts card of the Nimbo warrior. Afterward, the card passes over the target and covers the arms of the ally in golden platings. But very small and not too noticeable. It starts from the shoulder and reaches to the fingertips of the ally. Buffing their strength.

Name: Card of the Messenger
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Exorcist Card’s Magic
Type: Other Buff - Speed
Element: Light
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect:
The caster throws a golden card in front of the target and shouts card of the Messenger. Afterward, the card passes over the target and covers the Legs of the Ally in golden platings. But very small and not too noticeable. It starts from the hips and reaches to the heels of the target and is only on the sides of the legs. Buffing their speed.

Name: Card of the Wall
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Exorcist Card’s Magic
Type: Other Buff - Endurance
Element: Light
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration:  Sustain
Effect:
The caster throws a golden card in front of the target and shouts Card of the Wall. Afterwards the card passes over the target and The back of the target is covered with a golden metal going over the spine branching to the sides of the back and ending in circles of golden metal. On the top of the garment there is a little container that spreads pain resistant fluid throughout the body of the target buffing there endurance.



Name: Card of the Ropes
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Exorcist Card’s Magic, Has to be a Neko
Type: Supplementary spell
Element: Light
Range: 5 meter
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration:  Sustain
Effect:
Chelvaric’s right arm starts glowing gold and he crashes it into the ground. The ground starts to crack and on four corners around him, that are 5 meters away from him, then a magic card appears where little drones come out from. They fly up to two meters and then shoot out ropes inside the square area that’s made up in between the four cards. These are random places that are hit but the drones won’t hurt anyone not even the enemy when shooting out the ropes. They won’t be outside the area in between the points.


Name: Card of the wheel
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Exorcist Card’s Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Light
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect:
Chelvaric throws a card to the target location he wants. this can also be his own body. When the card hits a small engine comes out of the card and throws them away to the opposite direction, making any object it got attached to fly away into that direction for 5 meters far. the card has to hit the target before it activates. Works on enemies also but doesn’t do any damage.



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#2Venus Rosé 

Excorcist's Magic starter spells Empty Thu May 25, 2017 5:24 am

Venus Rosé


  • Card Of The Nimbo Warrior: Instead of just 'Other Buff', please mention it as Other Buff - Strength. I think the spell is meant to buff your comrade so instead of covering the arms of the user, it should be on your target or your ally. Do fix the spelling errors to make the spell more understandable.
  • Card Of The Messenger: Again, Other Buff - Speed and the spelling errors as well.
  • Card Of The Wall: Other Buff - Endurance.
  • Card Of The Ropes: You need to clarify on the effect of this spell. The range should be 5 meters and not 0 since it seems like you are creating ropes around you to leap on. Fix the spelling errors as well.
  • Card Of The Wheel: Reword the description of the spell. Also, you're able to throw away an object/enemy until 5 meters. Speed stats have nothing to do with this since you aren't running or dashing towards the enemy.


Bump upon completion.



#3Chelvaric Walderkat 

Excorcist's Magic starter spells Empty Thu May 25, 2017 5:37 am

Chelvaric Walderkat
bump le thread





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#4Venus Rosé 

Excorcist's Magic starter spells Empty Thu May 25, 2017 5:47 am

Venus Rosé


  • Card Of The Ropes: Please mention that the drones/cards are 5 meters away from the user.
  • Card Of The Wheel: There's still a few spelling errors left written in the description.


Bump upon completion.



#5Chelvaric Walderkat 

Excorcist's Magic starter spells Empty Thu May 25, 2017 5:59 am

Chelvaric Walderkat
le bump again





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#6Venus Rosé 

Excorcist's Magic starter spells Empty Thu May 25, 2017 6:39 am

Venus Rosé

Congratulations, your spells have been approved.



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