Skater girl - Single A-rank spell

**Alisa** · Thu Jul 27, 2017 8:49 am

Epithet :

White Empress

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

13,902,125

Rank :

Z-Rank

Race :

Demi-God (Champion)

Experience :

2,043,525

Reputation :

39,050

Class :

Hunter

Aura :

Lover's Aura

Magic :

Demon Slayer Magic: Crystal (Earth)

Strength :

531

Speed :

1,002

Constitution :

343

Endurance :

514

Intelligence :

1001

Mana :

12,675

Weapon Mastery :

Novice - Sword

Weapon :

V. Winchester's Machete

Off-Hand :

Yamato

Head :

Ayame's Hidden Visor

Body :

Coat of the Winchesters

Cape :

Dhivir's Thunderous Stride

Ring :

Tal-Rasha's Matrimonial Ring

Modification :

Companion :

Liv

Pouch :

Tal-Rasha's Skeleton Key, Tal-Rasha's Servant Key,
Tal-Rasha's Memory Key, Tal-Rasha's Inversion Key

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Name: White Path

Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Crystal Magic
Type: Speed Self Buff
Element: Crystal (No element)
Range: Self
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: By tapping her foot, Alisa crystallizes the ground beneath her while coating her feet with ice skates to ride the path with, resulting in a +40 boost to speed. The crystallized footing moves by growing towards the direction Alisa wants to go, shifting around to give her a surface to skate on, but crumbles away after 2 seconds once she's not on top of it.

Spoiler:

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A-Rank Spell Cost: 200 Words

Last edited by Alisa Vollan on Sun Jul 30, 2017 12:14 pm; edited 10 times in total

**Aether** · Sun Jul 30, 2017 9:27 am

Epithet :

The Blood Elf

Jewels :

0

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

510,000

Class :

Spellsinger

Magic :

Petal Magic

Strength :

120

Speed :

50

Constitution :

50

Endurance :

50

Intelligence :

43

Mana :

4,200

Hello Alisa,
I'll be your moderator.

White Path:
First of all, sustain costs would be 200 (so remove that part completely and just leave it at 200 for casting, since INT also matters and constantly changes).

So, to clear this spell up. This is a supplementary spell, you want to use it so you can travel on all surfaces (such as water, up walls and trees ect.) - is that correct? If so, remove all mentions of speed since you'd simply travel at the speed of your current speed statistic.

Remove this part:
While the crystal footing can help jump and land safely, it won't let her skate in mid air unless she's using a flight spell, in which case the trail will grow into the air freely.

A flight spell would be a different thing and has nothing really to do with this. It's kind of confusing as to why you would mention this.

Also, this will have to be removed as well:
In addition, the blades on the skates may cause Alisa's kicks to deal slashing damage, depending on the move used. It's still physical damage with no bonuses, this effect is purely aesthetical.

As the spell type says, this is a supplementary spell and has no offensive abilities whatsoever, under any circumstances.

Now, if I have misunderstood the purpose of the spell feel free to explain it to me. As of now, for the ability to walk on surfaces making this a D-rank spell would have been sufficient. I'm assuming you made it A-rank because you wanted to do more with it, but don't forget that a spell can only have 1 function, so calling it supplementary and then giving it the ability to deal damage on top of that simply will not work.

Edits;;

Note: Okay, so you may use ice skates to turn your blunt dmg into slicing dmg (rank according to your str stat), however this spell would be titled "offensive" and can be broken by something of equal rank.

You cannot combine it with moving on surfaces, since that'd be a) multifunction and b) a supplementary type of spell.

Please pick one or the other!

Bump when changes are made.

**Alisa** · Sun Jul 30, 2017 10:51 am

Epithet :

White Empress

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

13,902,125

Rank :

Z-Rank

Race :

Demi-God (Champion)

Experience :

2,043,525

Reputation :

39,050

Class :

Hunter

Aura :

Lover's Aura

Magic :

Demon Slayer Magic: Crystal (Earth)

Strength :

531

Speed :

1,002

Constitution :

343

Endurance :

514

Intelligence :

1001

Mana :

12,675

Weapon Mastery :

Novice - Sword

Weapon :

V. Winchester's Machete

Off-Hand :

Yamato

Head :

Ayame's Hidden Visor

Body :

Coat of the Winchesters

Cape :

Dhivir's Thunderous Stride

Ring :

Tal-Rasha's Matrimonial Ring

Modification :

Companion :

Liv

Pouch :

Tal-Rasha's Skeleton Key, Tal-Rasha's Servant Key,
Tal-Rasha's Memory Key, Tal-Rasha's Inversion Key

E d ited!

**Aether** · Sun Jul 30, 2017 11:17 am

Epithet :

The Blood Elf

Jewels :

0

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

510,000

Class :

Spellsinger

Magic :

Petal Magic

Strength :

120

Speed :

50

Constitution :

50

Endurance :

50

Intelligence :

43

Mana :

4,200

White Path:
The following part will have to be removed as well, then this spell is ready:

With this added footing, Alisa can make sharp turns, spins, and otherwise impossible ice skating stunts while retaining most of her momentum.

Bump when changes are made.

**Alisa** · Sun Jul 30, 2017 11:29 am

Epithet :

White Empress

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

13,902,125

Rank :

Z-Rank

Race :

Demi-God (Champion)

Experience :

2,043,525

Reputation :

39,050

Class :

Hunter

Aura :

Lover's Aura

Magic :

Demon Slayer Magic: Crystal (Earth)

Strength :

531

Speed :

1,002

Constitution :

343

Endurance :

514

Intelligence :

1001

Mana :

12,675

Weapon Mastery :

Novice - Sword

Weapon :

V. Winchester's Machete

Off-Hand :

Yamato

Head :

Ayame's Hidden Visor

Body :

Coat of the Winchesters

Cape :

Dhivir's Thunderous Stride

Ring :

Tal-Rasha's Matrimonial Ring

Modification :

Companion :

Liv

Pouch :

Tal-Rasha's Skeleton Key, Tal-Rasha's Servant Key,
Tal-Rasha's Memory Key, Tal-Rasha's Inversion Key

It is now a speed buff

**Aether** · Sun Jul 30, 2017 11:52 am

Epithet :

The Blood Elf

Jewels :

0

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

510,000

Class :

Spellsinger

Magic :

Petal Magic

Strength :

120

Speed :

50

Constitution :

50

Endurance :

50

Intelligence :

43

Mana :

4,200

Okay, I want to be perfectly clear here this time.

By tapping her foot, Alisa crystallizes the ground beneath her while coating her feet with ice skates to ride the path with. The crystallized footing moves by growing towards any direction, even when Alisa is static, however, the spell's true function becomes apparent only when she's in motion. With this added footing, Alisa can make sharp turns, spins, and otherwise impossible ice skating stunts while retaining most of her momentum, boasting a +40 boost to speed.

Everything that is red needs to go.

This is an A-rank speed buff. It boosts your speed statistic by +40, everything else is just flavor. You may have your ice skates, but to prevent you from covering the entire fucking continent in crystal, please specify that the ice shows up only where you move (under your feet) for the sake of the whole ice skating ordeal not looking too weird.

**Alisa** · Sun Jul 30, 2017 12:15 pm

Epithet :

White Empress

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

13,902,125

Rank :

Z-Rank

Race :

Demi-God (Champion)

Experience :

2,043,525

Reputation :

39,050

Class :

Hunter

Aura :

Lover's Aura

Magic :

Demon Slayer Magic: Crystal (Earth)

Strength :

531

Speed :

1,002

Constitution :

343

Endurance :

514

Intelligence :

1001

Mana :

12,675

Weapon Mastery :

Novice - Sword

Weapon :

V. Winchester's Machete

Off-Hand :

Yamato

Head :

Ayame's Hidden Visor

Body :

Coat of the Winchesters

Cape :

Dhivir's Thunderous Stride

Ring :

Tal-Rasha's Matrimonial Ring

Modification :

Companion :

Liv

Pouch :

Tal-Rasha's Skeleton Key, Tal-Rasha's Servant Key,
Tal-Rasha's Memory Key, Tal-Rasha's Inversion Key

f i xed

**Aether** · Thu Aug 03, 2017 10:13 pm

Epithet :

The Blood Elf

Jewels :

0

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

510,000

Class :

Spellsinger

Magic :

Petal Magic

Strength :

120

Speed :

50

Constitution :

50

Endurance :

50

Intelligence :

43

Mana :

4,200

Congratulations, this spell has been approved for training.

**Alisa** · Mon Aug 28, 2017 2:37 pm

Epithet :

White Empress

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

13,902,125

Rank :

Z-Rank

Race :

Demi-God (Champion)

Experience :

2,043,525

Reputation :

39,050

Class :

Hunter

Aura :

Lover's Aura

Magic :

Demon Slayer Magic: Crystal (Earth)

Strength :

531

Speed :

1,002

Constitution :

343

Endurance :

514

Intelligence :

1001

Mana :

12,675

Weapon Mastery :

Novice - Sword

Weapon :

V. Winchester's Machete

Off-Hand :

Yamato

Head :

Ayame's Hidden Visor

Body :

Coat of the Winchesters

Cape :

Dhivir's Thunderous Stride

Ring :

Tal-Rasha's Matrimonial Ring

Modification :

Companion :

Liv

Pouch :

Tal-Rasha's Skeleton Key, Tal-Rasha's Servant Key,
Tal-Rasha's Memory Key, Tal-Rasha's Inversion Key

Trained this > https://www.fairytailrp.com/t44706-ice-skating-in-the-summer-training-alice#376924

**Venus Rosé** · Wed Aug 30, 2017 7:37 am

Epithet :

The Burning Rose

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

607,500

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Vampire

Experience :

1,427,000

Reputation :

31,400

Class :

Phantom

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

501

Speed :

655

Constitution :

286

Endurance :

400

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

11,005

Off-Hand :

Serpyn's Soul Slasher

Ring :

Raven Night Ring

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Companion :

Blair

This spell has been approved for usage.

Skater girl - Single A-rank spell

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