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#1Azari Monto 

Azari Monto  Empty Fri 30 Mar 2018, 13:29

Azari Monto




Personal



Name: Azari Monto

Age:14 19/3/772

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Straight, 

Class: Sorcerer 

Race: N/a

Rank: D-rank

Guild: Fairy Tail

Tattoo: Blue on his should

Face: OC

Appearance


Height: 6,2

Weight: 122 lbs

Hair: black and blue

Eyes: blue

Overall: Azari dresses  with a navy blue open sleeveless  jacket that has a light blue Fairy tail emblem on one side he then has a brown belt and the jacket then continues be low the brown belt his jacket turns from blue to grey the jacket go's all the way down to his knee with a black rim on the out side. He has brown baggy pants  with a black rim in side and out. He also has a kind of collar that hides his mouth its grey with a blue rim and a black ring that go's around it. He has pale skin and that's about it. 

Extra: has a scar his cheek and a giant scar on his back

Personality


Personality:   He is all ways out going he puts on a smile when he isn't really happy. He is very protective of the guild and is ready to do what ever it takes to protect it even die. He cry's when he is alone and tells few people how he really feels. He almost never cry's in public and is a optimist he try's his best to cheer others up and make others smile. He never wants to see any one of his guild mates or allies die and does what ever he can to make sure. They never do he is willing to put his own life on the line if it means his friends, guild and allies can live.  He is some times depressed, some times even  enough to commit suicide but hides it. The moment he thinks about suicide he go's and hangs out with friends and keeps his mind of the subject. 

The one thing he use to do that he almost  never does any more is play pranks because it reminds him of his parents. He is very weird and can be socially awkward around girls that he thinks like him. He love's music and is usually humming some thing or some times even singing with out realizing. He also likes to play the guitar secretly but is to embarrassed about it, to show people. He is easy to make friends with but if you break his trust it will be hard for him to trust you again depending on what happened. When he is angry he will head to the forest and work of his anger by attacking monsters and fighting them and If really angry he go's and takes on a couple of dark wizards by him self. He also loves to read about pretty much any thing especially magic and Psychology. 


         He can be very hyper at points and some times can also act like a adult and because of his height some people think he is one. Few people know about his past the giant scar on his back and the small scar on his cheek do some times raise questions though when it does he almost Immediately changes the subject.  He lives on his own and never takes help when he can help it. He can be stubborn at points but he knows when to take orders. From almost 7 years of traveling he learned allot from books he found and read.  He has read about the curse of Absalom (I think that's right) aka death magic and the idea of this freaks him out and he avoids talking about it. He some times feel like he is weak and powerless and that he can't do any thing and that's about it

Likes: 

  • Like 1: learning Reading, playing the guitar , singing ,music, and messing with people with his medium understanding Psychology.  He loves to be creative and learn different things
     
  • Like 2:Friends and testing him self He also like's Hanging out with friend,jobs ranking him self up, and  the thing he is doing most of the time when he is not on job is trying to rank him self up. In the guild to become a S class wizard. He also loves to test his strength against his guild mates in a friendly matter.



Dislikes: 

  • Dislike 1: slavery slavery slavery he knows what it is like and hates it he hates when people do it to other people if he sees any type of slavery going on he go's out of his way to stop it
  • Dislike 2: any one who opposes his guild he hates seeing guild and allies hurt and dislikes any one who hurts his guild or allies because there his friends and it reminds him of what happened when the dark guild attacked his home 



Motivations: 

  • Motivation: his parentsTo reach the top of his guild and to push forward to show his parents even though there dead that he will be the best wizard ever.  



Fears: 

  • Fear 1: a guild mate or allie's dieng or the guild disbanding loosing a guild mate he never wants to see death again. The guild disbanding would be a night mare because he found a family that he can have fun with and fight with

  • Fear 2: demons and the dark guilddemons and most of all the dark guild were he was captured He has all ways been afraid of demons  and he never wants to go back to slavery


Magic


Magic Name: advanced Telekinesis 

Magic Element: N/A

Magic Description:  The user of this magic possesses the ability to manipulate objects and matter through their mind and thru making physical gestures they become able to use this magic in the world, an example would be, a faint dark blue glow around an object they are manipulating, or energy to deflect incoming attacks.  This has its weaknesses though, cause none of his energy shields are resistant to magic though most of the shields can sustain periods of being attacked with magic they are not immune to it  



History


History:  Azari Monto was born to , two power full wizards but at the age of  2 his parents were killed on a job and he was taken to a orphanage. Were he was then was adopted by poor farmers. Not remembering his  parents he grew up thinking he was just a poor farmer boy.  He then  grew up  in a poor farming family.  Though he was only three  when he started doing work on the farm he enjoyed it though  and all ways found some way to have fun.   He never had a dull moment and he all ways made the most of every thing.    He  also made life enjoyable for his parents by telling jokes and  looking on the bright side of  every thing. Though  he really didn't have any friends except for his cousins.   He was very smart and was all ways helping others in any way he could think of even if that was just making them smile.  

      Then  it happened....... when he was about  four and a half . When  he was captured and taken to a dark guild were he was made a slave but he kept looking on the bright side of things and  making  people laugh . Then about 3 years later  he managed to escape why the dark guild was under attack by a guild he later learned was Fairy Tail  was under attack by the magic council He then escaped. Hoping to go back to his family he went back to his town only to learn that during the attack by the dark guild they had killed his parents and that  all that was left was a box left for him. He then took the box and opened it what he found  was  a note it said “To are son Azari we wanted to tell you this but we were waiting in till you were older we wanted to tell you that you were adopted and that we love you” the note ended right after that. 

       Azari then did some thing he hadn't done since he was first taken from his parents he  cried and  said “thank you for the note”  to his parents who he hoped were listening even though they were dead. He then wandered for a while in till  he found the Library of magic he then stayed there a while and  looked thru the books in till  one book caught his eye it was on a form of telekinesis magic and he decided to  stay and learned this magic . He then left  and wandered around for 6 and a half more  years  eventually finding Fairy tail and then deciding to join. 


Reference: no one



Last edited by Azari_Manto_Wizard on Sun 01 Apr 2018, 03:01; edited 19 times in total (Reason for editing : wip)

#2Venus Rosé 

Azari Monto  Empty Fri 30 Mar 2018, 13:45

Venus Rosé

You need to use the template in code provided here. The code is right at the bottom of the thread. I mentioned previously that you do not need to create a new topic to make the changes. Just press 'Edit' at the bottom of the post to make necessary changes.



#3Azari Monto 

Azari Monto  Empty Fri 30 Mar 2018, 13:48

Azari Monto
I used it SnowFlake did I miss some thing?

#4Venus Rosé 

Azari Monto  Empty Fri 30 Mar 2018, 13:49

Venus Rosé

You're supposed to use this code.

Code:
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[color=#ffffff][b]Name:[/b][/color] Your character's name.

[color=#ffffff][b]Age:[/b][/color] Minimum age 12. Please write as Month/Date/Year, eg. March 4th, X766 if you're 20 years old.

[color=#ffffff][b]Gender:[/b][/color] Male/Female

[color=#ffffff][b]Sexuality:[/b][/color] Straight, Homosexual, Bisexual, etc.

[color=#ffffff][b]Class:[/b][/color] Refer to the Classes [url=http://www.fairytailrp.com/h2-classes]here[/url].

[color=#ffffff][b]Race:[/b][/color] (Only applicable when users have purchased a race. Leave N/A for new users.)

[color=#ffffff][b]Rank:[/b][/color] D-rank

[color=#ffffff][b]Guild:[/b][/color] Which guild are you apart of? Put in Guildless if you do not wish to join any guilds.

[color=#ffffff][b]Tattoo:[/b][/color] Location & the colour of guild tattoo.

[color=#ffffff][b]Face:[/b][/color] The name of the character and the anime you've selected from.

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[color=#ffffff][b]Weight:[/b][/color] lbs. or kg.

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[color=#ffffff][b]Eyes:[/b][/color] Colour of your eyes.

[color=#ffffff][b]Overall:[/b][/color] How does your character look like? Mention it here, must be at least 100 words.

[color=#ffffff][b]Extra:[/b][/color] Additional things for your appearance, such as tattoos, scars, piercings, etc.

<p style="background-color: #242a49; padding: 10px; border-bottom-style: solid #000; border-bottom-width: 2px; letter-spacing: 2px;"/>[color=#ffffff][size=13][b]Personality[/b] [/size][/color]
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#5Azari Monto 

Azari Monto  Empty Fri 30 Mar 2018, 13:58

Azari Monto
every time I try it just copy's code but the code doesn't do any thing

#6Venus Rosé 

Azari Monto  Empty Fri 30 Mar 2018, 14:19

Venus Rosé

You have to copy the entire text inside that code box, and it will show a template inside a blue box.



#7Azari Monto 

Azari Monto  Empty Fri 30 Mar 2018, 14:24

Azari Monto
I copied the entire text but it doesn't work

#8Venus Rosé 

Azari Monto  Empty Fri 30 Mar 2018, 14:26

Venus Rosé

Okay, I will edit the post for you if you have a copy of the work you've written, and just fill in all the details afterwards.



#9Azari Monto 

Azari Monto  Empty Fri 30 Mar 2018, 14:28

Azari Monto
thanks snow flake and yes I have a copy do you want me to send it you? (sorry I'm a bit confused)

#10Venus Rosé 

Azari Monto  Empty Fri 30 Mar 2018, 14:31

Venus Rosé

I've filled in the template, now just edit your post and copy paste the details.



#11Azari Monto 

Azari Monto  Empty Fri 30 Mar 2018, 15:15

Azari Monto
I did it

#12Venus Rosé 

Azari Monto  Empty Fri 30 Mar 2018, 15:36

Venus Rosé


  • Fix all the coding errors.
  • No picture is needed for the Overall appearance. You just have to describe how your character looks like. Must be at least 100 words.
  • Your personality is too short. As stated in red underlined colour, you need to have a minimum of 300 words for your personality.
  • Regarding to your magic, you cannot just block all physical attacks with magic. It depends on your spells and how you RP, so remove that part. Telekinesis is controlling objects with your mind. I don't see how you can create a bubble with your mind and hold in an explosion in that way. Mention that you can cast Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary and Self-Buff Strength spells.
  • Do not use character from the Fairy Tail manga/anime in your History since this site is non-canon.


Bump when done.



#13Azari Monto 

Azari Monto  Empty Fri 30 Mar 2018, 18:26

Azari Monto
ok I will fix that

#14Azari Monto 

Azari Monto  Empty Sat 31 Mar 2018, 00:44

Azari Monto
am I allowed to use the r system in my story or is that of limits as well?

#15Venus Rosé 

Azari Monto  Empty Sat 31 Mar 2018, 03:12

Venus Rosé

Please remove that one as well.



#16Azari Monto 

Azari Monto  Empty Sat 31 Mar 2018, 14:32

Azari Monto
ok I will do that

#17Azari Monto 

Azari Monto  Empty Sat 31 Mar 2018, 20:17

Azari Monto
I think I did it and my telekinetic magic should be okay I described it pretty well i think if there is any thing more I should change please feel free to tell me

#18Ryuko 
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Azari Monto  Empty Sat 31 Mar 2018, 20:55

Ryuko

Hey there, there are still several points you need to fix first.

Regarding to your magic, you cannot just block all physical attacks with magic. It depends on your spells and how you RP, so remove that part. Telekinesis is controlling objects with your mind. I don't see how you can create a bubble with your mind and hold in an explosion in that way. Mention that you can cast Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary and Self-Buff Strength spells.

Like Snow mentioned, you can't simply block 'every magical' attack, we got a defensive type of spell system here, so if someone uses a offensive spell that is superior to your own defensive one, it will automatically break no matter what.

Also like mentioned, Telekinesis involves controlling/manipulating objects with your mind. In some degrees it could also manipulate matter, but some important things to consider.

1: your spells won't be invisible, they will have this shimmer-like hue, so people will be able to notice your spells like anyone else their magic, the only magic we have atm that allows invisible spells is Crash magic

2: Even if you manipulate spells with your mind, physical motions still have to be made to 'trigger/activate' a spell, so don't consider telekinesis as a means to bypass that, the mind manipulation part is fluff.

3: you still need to list the exact type of spells you can make. Mention that you can cast Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary and Self-Buff Strength spells.

4. I'm a bit iffy about the idea of you making earthquakes, but we'll see how you describe it when you make spells, but for now remove mentioning of it please.

you're better off writing something like: The user possesses the ability to manipulate objects and matter through their mind. By making physical gestures they become able to project their magic into the world, for example, a faint white hue around an object they are manipulating, or a shimmering wall of energy to deflect incoming attacks.

The user is able to use Offensive, Defensive, Supplementary and Self-Buff Strength spells.

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Next please remove any mentioning of canon characters or events since they don't exist in this universe.

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Don't forget to fix the coding issue with your likes/dislikes and such.

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Finally, to make it a bit easier for people to read, try to separate your sections into paragraphs, it will help a lot to make it easier to understand everything.

#19Azari Monto 

Azari Monto  Empty Sat 31 Mar 2018, 21:41

Azari Monto
ok thanks for the feed back I can do every thing you said but pls help  with coding its driving me nuts also I know my spells will not be invisible and sorry for the trouble I'm just kind of new at this in away and also sorry for my grammar and spelling two subjects that I'm bad at

#20Ryuko 
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Azari Monto  Empty Sun 01 Apr 2018, 01:35

Ryuko

For the coding, your problem is that some of your post code is missing tags (likely ones you accidentally deleted during the time you filled in those posts.

you'll want to do the following (and follow it to the exact detail):

Step 1: Open your post (edit button)
Step 2: Go to the Extra: (the part of your appearance where you put in the details like scars) and right beneath it check to make sure the following coding is exactly the same:

Code:
<p style="background-color: #242a49; padding: 10px; border-bottom-style: solid #000; border-bottom-width: 2px; letter-spacing: 2px;"/>[color=#ffffff][size=13][b]Personality[/b] [/size][/color]
</p>
[color=#ffffff][b]Personality:[/b][/color]  [color=#ff0000](Minimum words for Personality is 300 words,
 or at least close to it.)[/color] Lorem ipsum dolor sit amet, ius an invidunt adipisci, sit at aperiam efficiantur. Eos quodsi inimicus ad, laudem assentior definitiones ut usu. Mei tritani suscipiantur no. Te vel altera fuisset. An quo porro evertitur, sea falli conclusionemque no. Est no laoreet dissentias inciderint, mei laudem oblique et. Ea eos omnis dicam nominavi, eum autem facete commodo an. Decore veritus id mel, duo utinam eleifend ex, in ferri tation his. Nec eu quodsi aliquando constituto, et sit omnes copiosae temporibus. Vide dicit perfecto ea mel. Te dicit lucilius vel, affert partem ut sit.

[color=#ffffff][b]Likes:[/b][/color]
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this is the code for the entire personality section.

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Finally please remove the details of your spell rank effects. Even with Telekinesis your magic functions the same as any other starting magic, and stuff like such descriptions belongs to your spells section once you're approved.

also don't worry too much about grammar and spelling, some of us aren't native speakers, so we understand the hurdles of a language all too well, as long as we see you making effort to improve it's fine.

#21Azari Monto 

Azari Monto  Empty Sun 01 Apr 2018, 01:39

Azari Monto
ok thanks so any thing else I need to check and do after that to get aproved?

#22Ryuko 
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Azari Monto  Empty Sun 01 Apr 2018, 01:59

Ryuko

seems your code is still messed up, can you message me on discord? I'll run you through it, my discord name is the same as on the forum.

#23Azari Monto 

Azari Monto  Empty Sun 01 Apr 2018, 02:01

Azari Monto
I'm working on the code right now so if it dosn't work I will message you

#24Azari Monto 

Azari Monto  Empty Sun 01 Apr 2018, 02:15

Azari Monto
I think i fixed it

#25Ryuko 
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Azari Monto  Empty Sun 01 Apr 2018, 02:25

Ryuko

your code is still messed up, it is supposed to look like this: https://www.fairytailrp.com/t46048-esperia

I included the correct coded version of your profile below, you just need to fill in the likes, dislikes, motivation/goal and fears, then we'll hopefully be ready.

Code:
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<p style="background-color: #242a49; padding: 10px; border-bottom-style: solid #000; border-bottom-width: 2px; letter-spacing: 2px;"/>[color=#ffffff][size=13][b]Personal[/b] [/size][/color]
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[color=#ffffff][b]Name:[/b][/color] Azari Monto

[color=#ffffff][b]Age:[/b][/color]14 19/3/772

[color=#ffffff][b]Gender:[/b][/color] Male

[color=#ffffff][b]Sexuality:[/b][/color] Straight,

[color=#ffffff][b]Class:[/b][/color] Sorcerer

[color=#ffffff][b]Race:[/b][/color] N/a

[color=#ffffff][b]Rank:[/b][/color] D-rank

[color=#ffffff][b]Guild:[/b][/color] Fairy Tail

[color=#ffffff][b]Tattoo:[/b][/color] Blue on his should

[color=#ffffff][b]Face:[/b][/color] none

<p style="background-color: #242a49; padding: 10px; border-bottom-style: solid #000; border-bottom-width: 2px; letter-spacing: 2px;"/>[color=#ffffff][size=13][b]Appearance[/b] [/size][/color]
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[color=#ffffff][b]Height:[/b][/color] 6,2

[color=#ffffff][b]Weight:[/b][/color] 122 lbs

[color=#ffffff][b]Hair:[/b][/color] black and blue

[color=#ffffff][b]Eyes:[/b][/color] blue

[color=#ffffff][b]Overall:[/b][/color] Azari dresses  with a navy blue open sleeveless  jacket that has a light blue Fairy tail emblem on one side he then has a brown belt and the jacket then continues be low the brown belt his jacket turns from blue to grey the jacket go's all the way down to his knee with a black rim on the out side. He has brown baggy pants  with a black rim in side and out. He also has a kind of collar that hides his mouth its grey with a blue rim and a black ring that go's around it. He has pale skin and that's about it.

[color=#ffffff][b]Extra:[/b][/color] has a scar his cheek and a giant scar on his back

<p style="background-color: #242a49; padding: 10px; border-bottom-style: solid #000; border-bottom-width: 2px; letter-spacing: 2px;"/>[color=#ffffff][size=13][b]Personality[/b] [/size][/color]
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[color=#ffffff][b]Personality:[/b][/color]   He is all ways out going he puts on a smile when he isn't really happy. He is very protective of the guild and is ready to do what ever it takes to protect it even die. He cry's when he is alone and tells few people how he really feels. He almost never cry's in public and is a optimist he try's his best to cheer others up and make others smile. He never wants to see any one of his guild mates or allies die and does what ever he can to make sure. They never do he is willing to put his own life on the line if it means his friends, guild and allies can live.  He is some times depressed, some times even  enough to commit suicide but hides it. The moment he thinks about suicide he go's and hangs out with friends and keeps his mind of the subject.

The one thing he use to do that he almost  never does any more is play pranks because it reminds him of his parents. He is very weird and can be socially awkward around girls that he thinks like him. He love's music and is usually humming some thing or some times even singing with out realizing. He also likes to play the guitar secretly but is to embarrassed about it, to show people. He is easy to make friends with but if you break his trust it will be hard for him to trust you again depending on what happened. When he is angry he will head to the forest and work of his anger by attacking monsters and fighting them and If really angry he go's and takes on a couple of dark wizards by him self. He also loves to read about pretty much any thing especially magic and Psychology.


         He can be very hyper at points and some times can also act like a adult and because of his height some people think he is one. Few people know about his past the giant scar on his back and the small scar on his cheek do some times raise questions though when it does he almost Immediately changes the subject.  He lives on his own and never takes help when he can help it. He can be stubborn at points but he knows when to take orders. From almost 7 years of traveling he learned allot from books he found and read.  He has read about the curse of Absalom (I think that's right) aka death magic and the idea of this freaks him out and he avoids talking about it. He some times feel like he is weak and powerless and that he can't do any thing and that's about it

[color=#ffffff][b]Likes:[/b][/color]
[list]
[*][color=#ffffff][b]Insert Like 1:[/b][/color] Go into detail about like 1
[*][color=#ffffff][b]Insert Like 2:[/b][/color] Go into detail about like 2
[/list]

[color=#ffffff][b]Dislikes:[/b][/color]
[list]
[*][color=#ffffff][b]Insert Dislike 1:[/b][/color] go more into detail about the dislike here
[*][color=#ffffff][b]Insert Dislike 2:[/b][/color] Insert details of dislike 2
[/list]

[color=#ffffff][b]Motivations:[/b][/color]
[list]
[*][color=#ffffff][b]Insert Motivation:[/b][/color] explain more about your motivation here
[/list]

[color=#ffffff][b]Fears:[/b][/color]
[list]
[*][color=#ffffff][b]Insert Fear 1:[/b][/color] Tell us more about what you fear
[*][color=#ffffff][b]Insert Fear 2:[/b][/color] more details here
[/list]

<p style="background-color: #242a49; padding: 10px; border-bottom-style: solid #000; border-bottom-width: 2px; letter-spacing: 2px;"/>[color=#ffffff][size=13][b]Magic[/b] [/size][/color]
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[color=#ffffff][b]Magic Name:[/b][/color] advanced Telekinesis

[color=#ffffff][b]Magic Element:[/b][/color] N/A

[color=#ffffff][b]Magic Description:[/b][/color]  The user of this magic possesses the ability to manipulate objects and matter through their mind and thru making physical gestures they become able to use this magic in the world, an example would be, a faint dark blue glow around an object they are manipulating, or energy to deflect incoming attacks.  This has its weaknesses though, cause none of his energy shields are resistant to magic though most of the shields can sustain periods of being attacked with magic they are not immune to it  




(my basic out line of my spells I might add more but this should work as what it will look like pls tell me if I should change any thing)

<p style="background-color: #242a49; padding: 10px; border-bottom-style: solid #000; border-bottom-width: 2px; letter-spacing: 2px;"/>[color=#ffffff][size=13][b]History[/b] [/size][/color]
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[color=#ffffff][b]History:[/b][/color]  Azari Monto was born to , two power full wizards but at the age of  2 his parents were killed on a job and he was taken to a orphanage. Were he was then was adopted by poor farmers. Not remembering his  parents he grew up thinking he was just a poor farmer boy.  He then  grew up  in a poor farming family.  Though he was only three  when he started doing work on the farm he enjoyed it though  and all ways found some way to have fun.   He never had a dull moment and he all ways made the most of every thing.    He  also made life enjoyable for his parents by telling jokes and  looking on the bright side of  every thing. Though  he really didn't have any friends except for his cousins.   He was very smart and was all ways helping others in any way he could think of even if that was just making them smile.  

      Then  it happened....... when he was about  four and a half . When  he was captured and taken to a dark guild were he was made a slave but he kept looking on the bright side of things and  making  people laugh . Then about 3 years later  he managed to escape why the dark guild was under attack by a guild he later learned was Fairy Tail  was under attack by the magic council He then escaped. Hoping to go back to his family he went back to his town only to learn that during the attack by the dark guild they had killed his parents and that  all that was left was a box left for him. He then took the box and opened it what he found  was  a note it said “To are son Azari we wanted to tell you this but we were waiting in till you were older we wanted to tell you that you were adopted and that we love you” the note ended right after that.

       Azari then did some thing he hadn't done since he was first taken from his parents he  cried and  said “thank you for the note”  to his parents who he hoped were listening even though they were dead. He then wandered for a while in till  he found the Library of magic he then stayed there a while and  looked thru the books in till  one book caught his eye it was on a form of telekinesis magic and he decided to  stay and learned this magic . He then left  and wandered around for 6 and a half more  years  eventually finding Fairy tail and then deciding to join.


[color=#ffffff][b]Reference:[/b][/color] no one

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