Light Dragon Slayer Spells I

**Mimir** · Thu Jul 30, 2020 2:09 pm

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OOC:

Dragon's Might I:

Elven Walk I:

Dragon Push I:

Heimdall's Fury I:

Last edited by Mimir on Sat Aug 01, 2020 10:54 am; edited 2 times in total

**Masami** · Thu Jul 30, 2020 7:20 pm

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Spellsinger

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Emperor

Strength :

1

Speed :

121

Constitution :

96

Endurance :

255

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501

Mana :

7,425

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Momijigari

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Winged Lemur

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Hello! I have some changes and clarifications that I require of.

Dragon's Might I: Please state in the 'Type' section what attribute it self-buffs for easier reading (e.g. Self-Buff [Speed]) and instead of writing '+5', state that it deals D-Rank Speed Buff instead.
Elven Walk I: Approved.
Dragon Push I: Because it states that it "pushes back anything withing five meters of the user," it would make the spell an AoE, meaning you'd only be allowed to push a 1-meter diameter distance away. Because it is 'from the user,' please change the 'Range' to Self instead.
Heimdall's Fury I: Approved.

Also, if you don't mind, please rid of the spoiler tags for easier reading next time. Bump when fixed!

**Mimir** · Fri Jul 31, 2020 8:47 am

Jewels :

510,000

Rank :

B-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

102,750

Reputation :

2,600

Class :

Spellsword

Magic :

First Generation: Arcane Dragon

Strength :

37

Speed :

18

Constitution :

2

Endurance :

6

Intelligence :

50

Mana :

1,400

Boosts :

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Fixed everything.

Edited the push spell's wording

**Masami** · Fri Jul 31, 2020 7:28 pm

Jewels :

6,631,800

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

1,039,500

Reputation :

24,700

Class :

Spellsinger

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

1

Speed :

121

Constitution :

96

Endurance :

255

Intelligence :

501

Mana :

7,425

Head :

Momijigari

Companion :

Winged Lemur

Pouch :

1x Scroll of Captum (C-Rank), 1x Scroll of Captum (B-Rank), 1x Legendary Lvl. 5 Custom, Death's Coin x1

Dragon's Might I: Even though you have added the [Strength] tag beside the 'Self-Buff' variable, you haven't yet changed the '+5' into 'D-Rank Strength Self-Buff', so please make these changes!
Dragon Push I: I suggest stating that the spell 'pushes back anything it is pointing at' instead, because there would misconceptions regards 'anything within five meters of the user's hand'. Though I see that you meant that the spell works on wherever the palm is facing, but please make it clearer in the post.

Bump again when fixed!

**Mimir** · Sat Aug 01, 2020 10:54 am

Jewels :

510,000

Rank :

B-Rank

Race :

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Experience :

102,750

Reputation :

2,600

Class :

Spellsword

Magic :

First Generation: Arcane Dragon

Strength :

37

Speed :

18

Constitution :

2

Endurance :

6

Intelligence :

50

Mana :

1,400

Boosts :

New Member 30% - 05/04/2020

made the changes

**Masami** · Sun Aug 02, 2020 7:31 am

Jewels :

6,631,800

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

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Experience :

1,039,500

Reputation :

24,700

Class :

Spellsinger

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

1

Speed :

121

Constitution :

96

Endurance :

255

Intelligence :

501

Mana :

7,425

Head :

Momijigari

Companion :

Winged Lemur

Pouch :

1x Scroll of Captum (C-Rank), 1x Scroll of Captum (B-Rank), 1x Legendary Lvl. 5 Custom, Death's Coin x1

These spells have been approved.

Light Dragon Slayer Spells I

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