Luxin's spells

Luxin Orihara · Wed Jul 29, 2020 6:33 am

Guild :

Sentinel Syndicate

Jewels :

75,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

7,500

Reputation :

300

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Wind Magic

Strength :

2

Speed :

2

Constitution :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

2

Mana :

200

Name: Great Wind Breakthrough
Rank: D-Rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Wind magic
Type: Offensive
Element: wind
Range: 1m aoe
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user pushes their arms out in front of them causing the spell to activate. The Great Wind Breakthrough is a spell that creates a gust of wind, dealing D-rank damage and has an AOE range of 1 meter. If a mage were stronger than the user they would be able to block the attack and if the mage was significantly stronger it would barely harm the mage as it is a tier one spell.

Name: Great Wind Barrier
Rank: D rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Wind Magic
Type: Defensive
Element: Wind
Range: 5m range
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: The user activates Great Wind Barrier by pushing out their arms, at whatever they are aiming to block. The spell then protects the user with a barrier of wind generated by the user as they rotate at fast speeds while expelling magic throughout their body in order to create a dome like shape that covers a circumference of 0.25m and has the potential to protect them from 1X Crank spells . The spell, however, can be disrupted or overpowered by a more powerful magic or if the user doesn't have enough rotation to form the barrier.

Name: Wind step
Rank: D rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Wind Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Wind
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Touching their ankles a magic seal appears below the feet of the user. Wind step is a spell that allows the user to dash for the maximum range of and rank spell which is 5 meters at a time at quick speeds using the wind around them to boost their natural speed, it also allows the user to hover in the air before they need to reuse the spell in order to keep them in the air

Last edited by Luxin Orihara on Sun Aug 02, 2020 11:40 am; edited 2 times in total

**Masami** · Thu Jul 30, 2020 7:41 pm

Jewels :

6,631,800

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

1,039,500

Reputation :

24,700

Class :

Spellsinger

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

1

Speed :

121

Constitution :

96

Endurance :

255

Intelligence :

501

Mana :

7,425

Head :

Momijigari

Companion :

Winged Lemur

Pouch :

1x Scroll of Captum (C-Rank), 1x Scroll of Captum (B-Rank), 1x Legendary Lvl. 5 Custom, Death's Coin x1

Hello, I will be grading your spells!

Great Wind Breakthrough: Firstly, please state the casting motion of the spell and state that it deals D-Rank damage. Also state the maximum area the AoE spell can cover in the 'Effect' section and the spell range in the 'Range' section. Remove unnecessary information such as the 'Damage:1, Mana cost: 25 Mana & Cooldown: 1 post length.' row, as the spell template already have those variables mentioned.
Great Wind Barrier: Please state the measurements of the dome and mention that it covers 1x C-Rank damage (as defensive spells cover up until a rank higher than them) and change the 'Cooldown' to only 1 post. Also remove the unnecessary information as mentioned earlier.
Wind Step: Please state the casting motion of the spell and mention the spell's speed in terms of "boosting" them, that way it won't be misunderstood as a [Speed] Self-Buff but a Supplementary spell instead, so mention clearly if it is a dash or something similar.

Also, just so you know, you are allowed to make 1 more D-Rank spell for starters, otherwise you will have to purchase/train them after the rest of the starters get approved in this post. Bump when fixed!

Luxin Orihara · Sun Aug 02, 2020 10:01 am

Guild :

Sentinel Syndicate

Jewels :

75,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

7,500

Reputation :

300

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Wind Magic

Strength :

2

Speed :

2

Constitution :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

2

Mana :

200

bump bump Bump

**Masami** · Sun Aug 02, 2020 11:37 am

Jewels :

6,631,800

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

1,039,500

Reputation :

24,700

Class :

Spellsinger

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

1

Speed :

121

Constitution :

96

Endurance :

255

Intelligence :

501

Mana :

7,425

Head :

Momijigari

Companion :

Winged Lemur

Pouch :

1x Scroll of Captum (C-Rank), 1x Scroll of Captum (B-Rank), 1x Legendary Lvl. 5 Custom, Death's Coin x1

Great Wind Breakthrough: Approved.
Great Wind Barrier: Approved.
Wind Step: Lastly, please state that the user may only dash up to the maximum spell range!

Bump when fixed!

Luxin Orihara · Sun Aug 02, 2020 11:40 am

Guild :

Sentinel Syndicate

Jewels :

75,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

7,500

Reputation :

300

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Wind Magic

Strength :

2

Speed :

2

Constitution :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

2

Mana :

200

Bump bump bump

**Masami** · Sun Aug 02, 2020 11:41 am

Jewels :

6,631,800

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

1,039,500

Reputation :

24,700

Class :

Spellsinger

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

1

Speed :

121

Constitution :

96

Endurance :

255

Intelligence :

501

Mana :

7,425

Head :

Momijigari

Companion :

Winged Lemur

Pouch :

1x Scroll of Captum (C-Rank), 1x Scroll of Captum (B-Rank), 1x Legendary Lvl. 5 Custom, Death's Coin x1

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Luxin's spells

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