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#1Mimir 

Light Dragon Slayer Spells I Empty Thu Jul 30, 2020 12:09 pm

Mimir
OOC:

Dragon's Might I:

Elven Walk I:

Dragon Push I:

Heimdall's Fury I:



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#2Masami 

Light Dragon Slayer Spells I Empty Thu Jul 30, 2020 5:20 pm

Masami
Hello! I have some changes and clarifications that I require of.

  • Dragon's Might I: Please state in the 'Type' section what attribute it self-buffs for easier reading (e.g. Self-Buff [Speed]) and instead of writing '+5', state that it deals D-Rank Speed Buff instead.

  • Elven Walk I: Approved.

  • Dragon Push I: Because it states that it "pushes back anything withing five meters of the user," it would make the spell an AoE, meaning you'd only be allowed to push a 1-meter diameter distance away. Because it is 'from the user,' please change the 'Range' to Self instead.

  • Heimdall's Fury I: Approved.

Also, if you don't mind, please rid of the spoiler tags for easier reading next time. Bump when fixed!



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#3Mimir 

Light Dragon Slayer Spells I Empty Fri Jul 31, 2020 6:47 am

Mimir
Fixed everything.

Edited the push spell's wording




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#4Masami 

Light Dragon Slayer Spells I Empty Fri Jul 31, 2020 5:28 pm

Masami

  • Dragon's Might I: Even though you have added the [Strength] tag beside the 'Self-Buff' variable, you haven't yet changed the '+5' into 'D-Rank Strength Self-Buff', so please make these changes!

  • Dragon Push I: I suggest stating that the spell 'pushes back anything it is pointing at' instead, because there would misconceptions regards 'anything within five meters of the user's hand'. Though I see that you meant that the spell works on wherever the palm is facing, but please make it clearer in the post.

Bump again when fixed!



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#5Mimir 

Light Dragon Slayer Spells I Empty Sat Aug 01, 2020 8:54 am

Mimir
made the changes




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#6Masami 

Light Dragon Slayer Spells I Empty Sun Aug 02, 2020 5:31 am

Masami
These spells have been approved.



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