Cursed Technique Set 1

**Naryuu** · Thu Oct 05, 2023 2:38 am

Guild :

Shinigami Convocation

Jewels :

6,655,000

Rank :

B-Rank

Race :

Daemon

Experience :

211,875

Reputation :

4,810

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Twilight Flame

Strength :

7

Speed :

76

Constitution :

31

Endurance :

66

Intelligence :

11

Mana :

1,950

Weapon :

Deafening Sword

Head :

Beakface

Body :

Beakcoat

*Sorcerer Class Offensive Range,size are doubled.)

Training Spells

Name: Cursed Blaze Spiral
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Twilight Fire
Type: Offensive
Element: Darkness/Fire
Range: 15 Meters
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user shoots forth an open palm creating a purple magic circle in front of it. A 2m sized spiraling blast of black flames shoots from the magic circle at spell speed. Upon hitting the target it deals B rank dmg before dispersing.

Name: Cursed Cataclysm: Inferno Tempest
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Twilight Fire
Type: Offensive
Element: Darkness/Fire
Range: 20 Meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: A purple magic circle appears in front of the the user's fingers and under the location. Energy growing in mass at the focal point after the equivalent time to travel from the user to the location has passed. A 16m in diameter pillar of black flame rises and coats those within for A-Rank damage before dispersing

Name: Umbral Sun
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Twilight Fire
Type: Offensive
Element: Darkness/Fire
Range: 15 Meters
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user makes a claw with their hand. A purple magic circle appears charging the hand with black flames as they swipe before them releasing a 2m sized arcing slash of black flames at spell speed. The spell deals B rank dmg before dispersing.

Name: Cursed Rend Lance
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Twilight Fire
Type: Offensive
Element: Darkness/Fire
Range: Self
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user extends an arm making a knife-hand. A purple magic circle appears on the side of the arm. The entire arm is coated in black flame in a lance like shape for piercing qualities. The user uses their flame-clad arm to strike their opponent for B rank damage before dispersing.

Name: Cursed Wretch
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Twilight Fire
Type: Offensive
Element: Darkness/Fire
Range: Self
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user cocks back their arm making a fist. A purple magic circle appears a few inches from the back of the hand shrouding the fist in black flames. The user uses their flame clad fist to strike their opponent for B-Rank Damage before dispersing.

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Last edited by Naryuu on Wed Oct 11, 2023 12:02 pm; edited 4 times in total

Techtile · Mon Oct 09, 2023 9:29 am

Guild :

Akudama Syndicate

Jewels :

315,000

Rank :

D-rank

Race :

Demi-human (Reptile)

Experience :

22,500

Reputation :

600

Class :

Adventurer

Strength :

27

Speed :

8

Constitution :

13

Endurance :

13

Intelligence :

2

Mana :

250

Weapon Mastery :

Weapon :

Head :

Body :

Ring :

Modification :

Machine Heart (Temporary)

Pouch :

Echo Chip

Boosts :

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Started 09/15/2023

Hey there @Naryuu,
Got a couple of things in your spells to go over.

■ Cursed Blaze Spiral
Judging from the description I assume this is meant to be an Offensive Projectile yes?
If so, the spell can only be 2 meters in diameter size wise.

■ Cursed Cataclysm: Inferno Tempest
A-Rank spells require a 4 post cooldown
Edit this into the description - "A purple magic circle appears in front of the the user's fingers and under the location. Energy growing in mass at the focal point after the equivalent time to travel from the user to the location has passed. A 16m in diameter pillar of black flame rises and coats those within for A-Rank damage before dispersing."

■ Cursed Wretch
Add to the end of the description - "before dispersing."

**Naryuu** · Mon Oct 09, 2023 10:26 pm

Guild :

Shinigami Convocation

Jewels :

6,655,000

Rank :

B-Rank

Race :

Daemon

Experience :

211,875

Reputation :

4,810

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Twilight Flame

Strength :

7

Speed :

76

Constitution :

31

Endurance :

66

Intelligence :

11

Mana :

1,950

Weapon :

Deafening Sword

Head :

Beakface

Body :

Beakcoat

I've made the proper edits thank you for your time

Techtile · Tue Oct 10, 2023 11:37 am

Guild :

Akudama Syndicate

Jewels :

315,000

Rank :

D-rank

Race :

Demi-human (Reptile)

Experience :

22,500

Reputation :

600

Class :

Adventurer

Strength :

27

Speed :

8

Constitution :

13

Endurance :

13

Intelligence :

2

Mana :

250

Weapon Mastery :

Weapon :

Head :

Body :

Ring :

Modification :

Machine Heart (Temporary)

Pouch :

Echo Chip

Boosts :

Character Bonus Program 30%
Started 09/15/2023

Your A-Rank spell still requires a 4 Post cooldown.
Everything else looks good.

**Naryuu** · Tue Oct 10, 2023 4:20 pm

Guild :

Shinigami Convocation

Jewels :

6,655,000

Rank :

B-Rank

Race :

Daemon

Experience :

211,875

Reputation :

4,810

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Twilight Flame

Strength :

7

Speed :

76

Constitution :

31

Endurance :

66

Intelligence :

11

Mana :

1,950

Weapon :

Deafening Sword

Head :

Beakface

Body :

Beakcoat

Apologies for that

Techtile · Wed Oct 11, 2023 9:25 am

Guild :

Akudama Syndicate

Jewels :

315,000

Rank :

D-rank

Race :

Demi-human (Reptile)

Experience :

22,500

Reputation :

600

Class :

Adventurer

Strength :

27

Speed :

8

Constitution :

13

Endurance :

13

Intelligence :

2

Mana :

250

Weapon Mastery :

Weapon :

Head :

Body :

Ring :

Modification :

Machine Heart (Temporary)

Pouch :

Echo Chip

Boosts :

Character Bonus Program 30%
Started 09/15/2023

Last revision, apologies, had something brought to my attention.
Please make the Range on all spells the default total for their Rank.

That way, should there ever be changes to your class or character that make your bonuses irrelevant,
The spells here wont be negatively impacted as a result.

In fight scenarios your Sorcerer bonuses will still apply.

■ Cursed Blaze Spiral - 15 Meters
■ Cursed Cataclysm: Inferno Tempest - 20 Meters
■ Umbral Sun - 15 Meters