Luna's D Rank Spells

Luna Nightshade · Sat Dec 03, 2016 3:34 pm

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

75,000

Rank :

D-rank

Experience :

7,500

Reputation :

300

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Water Magic

Strength :

3

Speed :

6

Constitution :

5

Endurance :

6

Intelligence :

11

Mana :

210

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Name: Water Slicer
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: None
Type: Offensive
Element: Water
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Luna swipes her hand either to the right or to the left, and sends out 4 curved blades of water that are 4 ft in height 2 ft thick. Each blade does 1/4 of d rank damage.

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Name: Water Lock
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25(25 per post)
Requirements: None
Type: Offensive
Element: Water
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 post longer than the duration
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Luna holds her hand out in front of her and creates a large sphere of water that can be used to attack their target while they are trapped inside it. The sphere is 5 meters in diameter.

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Name: Water Whip
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25(25 per post)
Requirements: N/A
Type: Offensive
Element: Water
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 post long than the duration
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Luna can generate a whip of water from her hand by making a single circular motion with her hand. It does d rank damage. The whip is 3 feet in diameter.

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Name: Bubble Shot
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: N/A
Type: Offensive
Element: Water
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: By holding out her hand, Luna shoots a stream of 15 water bubbles at a target. The bubbles are the size of a baseball. Each bubble does 1/15 of D rank damage.

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Name: Water Dome
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25(25 per post)
Requirements: Water must be present
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 post longer than the duration
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Luna raises her hand to the air, gathers up the surrounding water to create a hollow dome of water around her and her allies, camouflaging them. The dome is 5 meters in diameter.

Last edited by Luna Nightshade on Mon Dec 05, 2016 6:36 pm; edited 5 times in total

**Tenshi †** · Sun Dec 04, 2016 10:58 pm

Epithet :

Sin

Jewels :

101,000

Rank :

A-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

450,000

Reputation :

7,200

Class :

Warrior

Strength :

191

Speed :

41

Constitution :

36

Endurance :

65

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

1,720

Weapon Mastery :

Sword - Master

Pouch :

1x Legendary Custom Rework

Hello, I'm Finn and I will be grading your magic.

Water Slicer- Cooldown for D rank spells are 1 post, that's all you need to set it to. Also, are you sure you'd like to have this as a sustain spell? That means it costs you 25 mana every post active, even if you don't actively use the blades on that post. If so, add (25 per post) after the mana cost. Explain the motion you must take to send out the curved blades.

Water Body- D rank is not high enough to turn your body into water with basic water magic, please create a new spell. (even if it was you wouldn't become immune to at-rank or lower physical damage)

Water Whip- Add sustain. Explain the motion you take to make the whip. Fix cooldown. How wide is the whip (diameter). Fix cooldown

Bubble Shot- How large is each bubble? What is the motion you must make to create the spell? What is the range of the spray (2 meter area, 3 meter?) Cooldown is 1 post

Water Dome- Fix cooldown. Add sustain cost. Is the dome hollow or full? If full, how do you breath under water? Describe the motion you make to cast the spell. Also the dome is 5 meters diameter, not radius- Please mention that.

Bump when fixed.

Luna Nightshade · Sun Dec 04, 2016 11:25 pm

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

75,000

Rank :

D-rank

Experience :

7,500

Reputation :

300

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Water Magic

Strength :

3

Speed :

6

Constitution :

5

Endurance :

6

Intelligence :

11

Mana :

210

Done with all the edits.

**Tenshi †** · Mon Dec 05, 2016 11:24 am

Epithet :

Sin

Jewels :

101,000

Rank :

A-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

450,000

Reputation :

7,200

Class :

Warrior

Strength :

191

Speed :

41

Constitution :

36

Endurance :

65

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

1,720

Weapon Mastery :

Sword - Master

Pouch :

1x Legendary Custom Rework

Water Slicer- How thick is each blade?

Water Lock- Get rid of the frozen part of the description. This make it seem like it must be frozen for escape to occur, when any D rank spell would disrupt the orb long enough for escape.

Bubble Shot- "15 bubbles max, each does 1/15 of d rank damage." Just state 15 bubbles, as you cannot change the amount once approved.

Bump when edited

Luna Nightshade · Mon Dec 05, 2016 11:45 am

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

75,000

Rank :

D-rank

Experience :

7,500

Reputation :

300

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Water Magic

Strength :

3

Speed :

6

Constitution :

5

Endurance :

6

Intelligence :

11

Mana :

210

bump, edits done.

**Tenshi †** · Mon Dec 05, 2016 7:34 pm

Epithet :

Sin

Jewels :

101,000

Rank :

A-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

450,000

Reputation :

7,200

Class :

Warrior

Strength :

191

Speed :

41

Constitution :

36

Endurance :

65

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

1,720

Weapon Mastery :

Sword - Master

Pouch :

1x Legendary Custom Rework

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