D-rank:

Helena Perez wrote:
Name: Vine Snare
Rank: D
Mana Cost:  25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: Offence
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Through the user of her magic, by wafting her hand upwards the ground beside the caster erupts as a singular large vine extends from the earth reaching a height of 5 meters. This vine is covered in hundreds of tiny thorns that are 2 centermeters in size, capable of piercing the opponents skin up to two centermeters. The intention of the vine is to slide around the neck of the opponent and pierce the skin while at the same time choking the target and lifting them up in to the air, intended to hold a target in stasis while chocking the life out of them.

For spells we try to not list the damages done.
Also remove the choking the target and lifting the air. Cause it contextual meaning you would have to rp it out anyways. Plus being a D rank wouldn't be that strong to do that cause someone could break it with equal strength or higher.

Name: Fruit Bomb
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: Offence
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: By tranmutating the plant like body of the user of this magic, the hand takes the form of a rather large pink flower that opens its petals. From this blossoming plant a large fruit is released in the direction the user aims it at, this fruit is roughly the size of a tennis ball and does blunt force damage.

Approved

Name: Circle of Thorns
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: AOE [Offensive]
Element: Nature Magic
Range: 1 Meter in diameter
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: By pulling both of her hands upwards, the user erects with their magical power hundreds of thousands of thorns that erupt from the ground like spikes. Alas being a D-rank their penetrative power is not that impressive but the large amount of wounds gained make up for this. You only need a centermeter to blind someone.

This needs to be reworked because more projectiles = division of power. So a thousand petals = D rank divided into 1000 so it wouldn't really be effective at all.

Name: Root Travel
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Nature Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: By bringing her hands up, the user of this spell is able to create a large flower on any surface either behind, below, to the sides or in front of herself, by moving her hands upwards she can extend the flower upwards,by moving her hand downwards it can move down, by pushing her hand in a single direction it can move in that direction or bend if required. Essentially used to allow her to reach higher areas or to hide/travel underground via the root network of plants. By closing her fist the flower closes enveloping the femaleand dragging her into the ground she is able to travel up to five meters in a single direction.

This is allowed, however this would be locked in at B/A rank. Since this kind of thing would be more advanced for a D rank.

Name: Skeleton Shield
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: Defense
Element:  Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: The user creates a skeleton petal, named for the fact that when moist it becomes almost invisible, with this the user can block a single c-rank attack or two d-rank attacks.

Need a size of shield, like full body or a wall type thing. Can't really tell.

Roman wrote:

Helena Perez wrote:
Name: Vine Snare
Rank: D
Mana Cost:  25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: Offence
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Through the user of her magic, by wafting her hand upwards the ground beside the caster erupts as a singular large vine extends from the earth reaching a height of 5 meters. This vine is covered in hundreds of tiny thorns that are 2 centermeters in size, capable of piercing the opponents skin up to two centermeters. The intention of the vine is to slide around the neck of the opponent and pierce the skin while at the same time choking the target and lifting them up in to the air, intended to hold a target in stasis while chocking the life out of them.

For spells we try to not list the damages done.
Also remove the choking the target and lifting the air. Cause it contextual meaning you would have to rp it out anyways. Plus being a D rank wouldn't be that strong to do that cause someone could break it with equal strength or higher.

YEah, im aware somoene with equal strength/higher could break it, but for those of lesser strength it seems effective, removed the information on the damage minus the piercing of the covering thorns, dunno if that should be removed and simply stated to be thorns.

Name: Fruit Bomb
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: Offence
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: By tranmutating the plant like body of the user of this magic, the hand takes the form of a rather large pink flower that opens its petals. From this blossoming plant a large fruit is released in the direction the user aims it at, this fruit is roughly the size of a tennis ball and does blunt force damage.

Approved

Name: Circle of Thorns
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: AOE [Offensive]
Element: Nature Magic
Range: 1 Meter in diameter
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: By pulling both of her hands upwards, the user erects with their magical power hundreds of thousands of thorns that erupt from the ground like spikes. Alas being a D-rank their penetrative power is not that impressive but the large amount of wounds gained make up for this. You only need a centermeter to blind someone.

This needs to be reworked because more projectiles = division of power. So a thousand petals = D rank divided into 1000 so it wouldn't really be effective at all.

Would you mind offering a bit of help in this one. There isn't actually any projecties in this attack, instead its a circle of thorns that come up from the ground similiar to spikes/caltrops. being that its an AOE spell and one single "thorn" wouldnt do anything visually nor logically making it hundreds of thousands of tiny thorns seemed like a more logical way to go a circle of thorns erupting around the user, being that its intention is piercing the circle would only go up to 2 centermeters. Not sure if that helps it not being a projectile.

Name: Root Travel
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Nature Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: By bringing her hands up, the user of this spell is able to create a large flower on any surface either behind, below, to the sides or in front of herself, by moving her hands upwards she can extend the flower upwards,by moving her hand downwards it can move down, by pushing her hand in a single direction it can move in that direction or bend if required. Essentially used to allow her to reach higher areas or to hide/travel underground via the root network of plants. By closing her fist the flower closes enveloping the female and dragging her into the ground she is able to travel up to five meters in a single direction.

This is allowed, however this would be locked in at B/A rank. Since this kind of thing would be more advanced for a D rank.

I edited to remove the closing of the petal and the underground movement and solely kept it to moving above ground to reach high areas/move the user slighty upon a plant, hopefully this helps keep it at D-rank

Name: Skeleton Shield
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: Defense
Element:  Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: The user creates a skeleton petal, named for the fact that when moist it becomes almost invisible, with this the user can block a single c-rank attack or two d-rank attacks.

Need a size of shield, like full body or a wall type thing. Can't really tell.

Edited

Helena Perez wrote:
Name: Vine Snare
Rank: D
Mana Cost:  25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: Offence
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Through the user of her magic, by wafting her hand upwards the ground beside the caster erupts as a singular large vine extends from the earth reaching a height of 5 meters. This vine is covered in hundreds of tiny thorns that are 2 centermeters in size, as per most nature spells the user is capable of controlling the movements of said vine.

Approved

Name: Fruit Bomb
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: Offence
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: By transmutating the plant like body of the user of this magic, the hand takes the form of a rather large pink flower that opens its petals. From this blossoming plant a large fruit is released in the direction the user aims it at, this fruit is roughly the size of a tennis ball and does blunt force damage.

Oh ya this needs to be determined how close beside you this erupts. because magic comes from the users body on FT.

Name: Circle of Thorns
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: AOE [Offensive]
Element: Nature Magic
Range: 1 Meter in diameter
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: By pulling both of her hands upwards, the user erects with their magical power hundreds of thousands of thorns that erupt from the ground like spikes. Alas being a D-rank their penetrative power is not that impressive but the large amount of wounds gained make up for this. You only need a centermeter to blind someone.

Well for one this needs to be made into a bomb then. It needs to have a explosive radius and needs to come from your body. Cause as this shows this is just I move my hands and this erupts from anywhere in a 5 meter radius from the ground. To get the 1000 thorn effect needs to originate from one projectile or erupts from your body. However, you can hurt yourself with your own magic cause you aren't immune to it like some special limited magics are.

Name: Root Travel
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Nature Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: By bringing her hands up, the user of this spell is able to create a large flower on any surface either behind, below, to the sides or in front of herself, by moving her hands upwards she can extend the flower upwards,by moving her hand downwards it can move down, by pushing her hand in a single direction it can move in that direction or bend if required. Essentially used to allow her to reach higher areas or to hide/travel underground via the root network of plants.

No what I meant is this isn't allowed at D rank period, has to be a higher ranked spell so this needs to be changed completely. Sorry if that wasn't clear. You also still have the hide/travel underground.

Name: Skeleton Shield
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: Defense
Element:  Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: The user creates a skeleton petal, named for the fact that when moist it becomes almost invisible, with this the user can block a single c-rank attack or two d-rank attacks. Being a large petal this is in a petal like shape and can cover up to two people in width and someone who is roughly 7 feet tall in height.

approved

Roman wrote:

Helena Perez wrote:
Name: Vine Snare
Rank: D
Mana Cost:  25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: Offence
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Through the user of her magic, by wafting her hand upwards the ground beside the caster erupts as a singular large vine extends from the earth reaching a height of 5 meters. This vine is covered in hundreds of tiny thorns that are 2 centermeters in size, as per most nature spells the user is capable of controlling the movements of said vine.

Approved

Name: Fruit Bomb
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: Offence
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: By transmutating the plant like body of the user of this magic, the hand takes the form of a rather large pink flower that opens its petals. From this blossoming plant a large fruit is released in the direction the user aims it at, this fruit is roughly the size of a tennis ball and does blunt force damage.

Oh ya this needs to be determined how close beside you this erupts. because magic comes from the users body on FT.

[color=green]Ah i realised my run on words made it sound different, edited to show that its the users hand that transmutates to become the flower that the bomb is released from/color]

Name: Circle of Thorns
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: AOE [Offensive]
Element: Nature Magic
Range: 1 Meter in diameter
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: By pulling both of her hands upwards, the user erects with their magical power hundreds of thousands of thorns that erupt from the ground like spikes. Alas being a D-rank their penetrative power is not that impressive but the large amount of wounds gained make up for this. You only need a centermeter to blind someone.

Well for one this needs to be made into a bomb then. It needs to have a explosive radius and needs to come from your body. Cause as this shows this is just I move my hands and this erupts from anywhere in a 5 meter radius from the ground. To get the 1000 thorn effect needs to originate from one projectile or erupts from your body. However, you can hurt yourself with your own magic cause you aren't immune to it like some special limited magics are.

being AOE its only a meter in diameter, originating around the user in a circle. Though im not entirely sure as to why this has to come from "my body" its not dragon slayer magic which requires it to be released from the body. All plant magic in the series doesnt even come from the body but simply grows from the ground, or comes in to being. Greys magic originates outside of his body with movements [shown with his castor action]. Not a single spell of Jura's originates from his body. So im not entiely sure why, unless im reading it wrong and your not saying that the plants and so forth have to come directly from my body, I mean Jura's volcanic spell  is a good example off not coming from the body.

Name: Root Travel
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Nature Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: By bringing her hands up, the user of this spell is able to create a large flower on any surface either behind, below, to the sides or in front of herself, by moving her hands upwards she can extend the flower upwards,by moving her hand downwards it can move down, by pushing her hand in a single direction it can move in that direction or bend if required. Essentially used to allow her to reach higher areas or to hide/travel underground via the root network of plants.

No what I meant is this isn't allowed at D rank period, has to be a higher ranked spell so this needs to be changed completely. Sorry if that wasn't clear. You also still have the hide/travel underground.

.....i can have vines that can move and ensnare people at D-rank? but i can't have a D-rank spell that lets me grow a plant that helps me get to higher places? Sorry, im not entirely sure as to the logic there. Literally all this spell does now is creates a plant that i can bend around a little and help me reach high places within the alotted range for a D-rank.

Name: Skeleton Shield
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: Defense
Element:  Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: The user creates a skeleton petal, named for the fact that when moist it becomes almost invisible, with this the user can block a single c-rank attack or two d-rank attacks. Being a large petal this is in a petal like shape and can cover up to two people in width and someone who is roughly 7 feet tall in height.

approved

Roman wrote:

Helena Perez wrote:
Name: Vine Snare
Rank: D
Mana Cost:  25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: Offence
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Through the user of her magic, by wafting her hand upwards the ground beside the caster erupts as a singular large vine extends from the earth reaching a height of 5 meters. This vine is covered in hundreds of tiny thorns that are 2 centermeters in size, as per most nature spells the user is capable of controlling the movements of said vine.

Approved

Name: Fruit Bomb
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: Offence
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: By transmutating the plant like body of the user of this magic, the hand takes the form of a rather large pink flower that opens its petals. From this blossoming plant a large fruit is released in the direction the user aims it at, this fruit is roughly the size of a tennis ball and does blunt force damage.

Oh ya this needs to be determined how close beside you this erupts. because magic comes from the users body on FT.

Ah i realised my run on words made it sound different, edited to show that its the users hand that transmutates to become the flower that the bomb is released from

Name: Circle of Thorns
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: AOE [Offensive]
Element: Nature Magic
Range: 1 Meter in diameter
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: By pulling both of her hands upwards, the user erects with their magical power hundreds of thousands of thorns that erupt from the ground like spikes. Alas being a D-rank their penetrative power is not that impressive but the large amount of wounds gained make up for this. You only need a centermeter to blind someone.

Well for one this needs to be made into a bomb then. It needs to have a explosive radius and needs to come from your body. Cause as this shows this is just I move my hands and this erupts from anywhere in a 5 meter radius from the ground. To get the 1000 thorn effect needs to originate from one projectile or erupts from your body. However, you can hurt yourself with your own magic cause you aren't immune to it like some special limited magics are.

being AOE its only a meter in diameter, originating around the user in a circle. Though im not entirely sure as to why this has to come from "my body" its not dragon slayer magic which requires it to be released from the body. All plant magic in the series doesnt even come from the body but simply grows from the ground, or comes in to being. Greys magic originates outside of his body with movements [shown with his castor action]. Not a single spell of Jura's originates from his body. So im not entiely sure why, unless im reading it wrong and your not saying that the plants and so forth have to come directly from my body, I mean Jura's volcanic spell  is a good example off not coming from the body.

Doesn't matter, if DS or not the spell originates from near you or your body. This isn't canon, you aren't the first person we have shot down for creating spells away from your body. Especially creating explosions right under someone on a whim. I am sorry but them are the breaks. You can get a admin to come in and rule on it but it will only hold up your grading so that's on you. It can come from the body or near the body. Like 2 meters close to you. Not just detonating the ground across the field just cause.

Name: Root Travel
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Nature Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: By bringing her hands up, the user of this spell is able to create a large flower on any surface either behind, below, to the sides or in front of herself, by moving her hands upwards she can extend the flower upwards,by moving her hand downwards it can move down, by pushing her hand in a single direction it can move in that direction or bend if required. Essentially used to allow her to reach higher areas or to hide/travel underground via the root network of plants.

No what I meant is this isn't allowed at D rank period, has to be a higher ranked spell so this needs to be changed completely. Sorry if that wasn't clear. You also still have the hide/travel underground.

.....i can have vines that can move and ensnare people at D-rank? but i can't have a D-rank spell that lets me grow a plant that helps me get to higher places? Sorry, im not entirely sure as to the logic there. Literally all this spell does now is creates a plant that i can bend around a little and help me reach high places within the alotted range for a D-rank.

After deliberation with admin it can be moved around and elevated. However, it moves at your speed stat and no burrowing/hiding under ground period. That would be a separate spell all together according to the webmaster. Like I said you still have the hide/travel under ground listed in the spell.

Name: Skeleton Shield
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: Defense
Element:  Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: The user creates a skeleton petal, named for the fact that when moist it becomes almost invisible, with this the user can block a single c-rank attack or two d-rank attacks. Being a large petal this is in a petal like shape and can cover up to two people in width and someone who is roughly 7 feet tall in height.

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Helena Perez wrote:
Name: Shredding Petal.
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Mother Nature Magic
Type: AOE [Offensive]
Element: Nature Magic
Range: 1 Meter in diameter
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: By pulling both of her hands upwards, the user creates four connected petals around them similiar to that of a skirt that hovers an inch away from the users waist, this plant can range from any size smaller than the maximum size which is a full meter in diameter, with her hand she spins her finger around, this rotates the four petals that surround her in a saw like motion, these large petals rotating violently cutting those whom attempt to enter her personal space.

This splits the damage between the four petals by the way. If you are okay with that this is approved.

Name: Extendo plant
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Nature Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: By bringing her hands up, the user of this spell is able to create a large flower on any surface either behind, below, to the sides or in front of herself, by moving her hands upwards she can extend the flower upwards,by moving her hand downwards it can move down, by pushing her hand in a single direction it can move in that direction or bend if required. Essentially used to allow her to reach higher areas or to hide/travel underground via the root network of plants.

No hiding or traveling under ground.
Also it moves at your speed stat and not the flat spell speed.