Hyōen's C-Rank Spells

**Daiko Flayme** · Thu Feb 02, 2017 9:40 am

Epithet :

Firebird

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

4,070,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

704,250

Reputation :

12,350

Class :

Hunter

Magic :

Beast Soul: Suzaku, the Flame-Feathered Phoenix

Strength :

126

Speed :

175

Constitution :

275

Endurance :

189

Intelligence :

250

Mana :

3,150

Weapon Mastery :

Hand - Novice

Weapon :

Mero Gauntlet

Head :

Huntsman Cap

Cape :

Heracles' Nemean Mantle

Modification :

Ino's Jōgan Eye

Companion :

Coda

Name: Fierce Bullet Volley
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Firebird Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user pulls back his head and inhales large amounts of air, while having his mouth slightly open. As his cheeks fill with mana, the exhale sends out small bullets of fire (each bullet being 10cm x 3cm x 3cm = 90cm3 in size) whose role is to assault an area of 3m3 in a volley of several bullets. They do 1x C-Rank Spell Damage per post, no matter how many bullets hit the opponent in that one post (if hiit by them all, then that'll still count as 1x C-Rank Spell Damage).

Last edited by Hyōen on Wed Feb 15, 2017 10:24 am; edited 1 time in total

**Kon** · Mon Feb 13, 2017 8:20 pm

Epithet :

Machine man

Guild :

Shattered Serenity

Threat :

Danger

Jewels :

4,672,000

Rank :

Z-Rank

Race :

Machia

Experience :

779,750

Reputation :

32,900

Class :

Spellsword

Magic :

Hirota Miki, the Lady of Nothingness
Miharu Qinren, Vessel of Qinglong

Strength :

236

Speed :

653

Constitution :

121

Endurance :

148

Intelligence :

411

Mana :

10,450

Weapon Mastery :

Bow - Grandmaster

Weapon :

Etherium Prosthetic - midas gauntlet

Off-Hand :

Etherium Prosthetic - Rama's Bow

Head :

Etherium Prosthetic - Crown of Starlight ↂ

Body :

Etherium Prosthetic - Darkstar Cannon Plate Armor ↂ

Cape :

Dhivir's Thunderous Stride

Ring :

pacino's ring

Modification :

Fulu Core

Companion :

xolotl the thunderbeast

Pouch :

Hello Hyoen, I'll be grading your spell today.

Fierce Bullet Volley: Whilst multiple projectiles are viable you have to reduce the damage each of them does depend on the amount, for instance, you could have 2 D-rank bullets, so readjust the spell to match that meaning you'd be able to sustain it.
Though you've seemed to have added AOE components to this, suggesting it's an AOE if that's the case you'll have to change the spell to instant and remove this statement: "...and can be sustained to shoot out for a longer period." allowing you to retain the damage, otherwise remove the comment of: "...whose role is to assault an area of 3m3 in a volley of several bullets."

All in all once you've done those changes it should be approvable just bump when you're done.

**Daiko Flayme** · Wed Feb 15, 2017 10:25 am

Epithet :

Firebird

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

4,070,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

704,250

Reputation :

12,350

Class :

Hunter

Magic :

Beast Soul: Suzaku, the Flame-Feathered Phoenix

Strength :

126

Speed :

175

Constitution :

275

Endurance :

189

Intelligence :

250

Mana :

3,150

Weapon Mastery :

Hand - Novice

Weapon :

Mero Gauntlet

Head :

Huntsman Cap

Cape :

Heracles' Nemean Mantle

Modification :

Ino's Jōgan Eye

Companion :

Coda

Alright, made it into an instant. My intention was to make it AoE, so it's not like that I do tons of damage if you get hit by several bullets at once... or anything like that. Just like an AoE stream of fire, but in bullet form.