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#1Arthur J. Sokolov 

Handbeat Starters Empty Sun Jan 29, 2017 8:51 am

Arthur J. Sokolov
Name: Mint.
Rank: D.
Mana Cost: 25.
Requirements: Handbeat Magic.
Type: Supplementary.
Element: Nature.
Range: 5 meters.
Cooldown: 1P.
Duration: Instant.
Effect: Aonaka slashes the air in front of him with a straight palm towards the desired ally/companion, taps chest if the spell target is self, and the target gets covered in a thin veil of lime colored flames, having a dash 5 meters with 5m/s added to their speed, to the direction Aonaka choses. Dashing target cannot change direction and must be in 5 meter radius of Aonaka. They can leave this radius while dashing, of course.


Name: Lime Imprint.
Rank: D.
Mana Cost: 25.
Requirements: Handbeat Magic.
Type: Supplementary.
Element: Nature.
Range: 5 meters.
Cooldown: 1P.
Duration: Sustained.
Effect: Pointing his palm towards someone, Aonaka creates a small lime colored magic circle on their neck. The imprint adds a distinctive smell of lime that Aonaka and all animals are able to smell and pinpoint while they are in a 5 meter radius of the target.


Name: Handbeat Fireball.
Rank: D.
Mana Cost: 25.
Requirements: Handbeat Magic.
Type: Supplementary.
Element: Nature.
Range: 5 meters.
Cooldown: 1P.
Duration: Instant
Effect: Aonaka takes his hands in front of him and starts to pour his mana into it. He creates a lime colored fireball that blocks vision and can be thrown. The fireball does absoulutely nothing and won't disappear until collided with a defensive or offensive spell or is out of spell range. It won't disappear from objects inside it. Aonaka can dissipate the fireball at any given time.The fireball is 1 meter in radius.


Name: Lowlife Heartbeat.
Rank: D.
Mana Cost: 25.
Requirements: Handbeat.
Type: Healing.
Element: Nature.
Range: 5 meters.
Cooldown: 1P.
Duration: Sustained.
Effect: Aonaka prays for a second to focus, by bringing his palms together. The ally/companion chosen in mind gets a lime colored aura around them, and each post they get healed by 1D-Rank.


Name: Diminished Heartbeat.
Rank: D.
Mana Cost: 25.
Requirements: Handbeat.
Type: Healing.
Element: Nature.
Range: 5 meters.
Cooldown: 1P.
Duration: Sustained.
Effect: Aonaka prays for a second to focus, by bringing his palms together. The ally/companion chosen in mind gets a lime colored aura around them, and each post they get healed by 1D-Rank.



Last edited by Aonaka on Tue Feb 21, 2017 12:55 am; edited 1 time in total



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#2Kon 

Handbeat Starters Empty Sun Jan 29, 2017 10:21 am

Kon

Congratulations, these spells have been approved.

#3Tenshi † 

Handbeat Starters Empty Mon Feb 20, 2017 3:45 pm

Tenshi †
This magic has been pulled for the following edits:

Lime Imprint- You state that it emits a smoke from around the users neck. Please better describe this smoke, it should not affect breathing or sight as is, but must be established within the spell that it does not do that.

Second Broken Universe- This is a bit strong for a D rank supplementary spell as is, please get rid of the part that it copies the movement of what it mimics, and establish how large of a creature it can copy (should not be outside the realms of a D rank spell).

Please bump when finished.



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#4Arthur J. Sokolov 

Handbeat Starters Empty Tue Feb 21, 2017 12:56 am

Arthur J. Sokolov
Alriiight.~ I took out the smoke deal out from Lime Imprint and just changed SBU to something else. I also added a direction sentence to Mint to word it a bit better.



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#5Selena Maelstrom 

Handbeat Starters Empty Thu Feb 23, 2017 7:22 am

Selena Maelstrom
Congratulations, these spells have been approved.



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