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Amon's Lightning Spells

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#1Amon Irving 

Amon's Lightning Spells Empty Mon May 29, 2017 7:17 pm

Amon Irving
Name: Lightning Fist
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Range: Melee
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user clenches their fist which causes it to be surrounded in lightning for a single punch that does increased damage and cause 10-20% nerve damage wherever they were hit.

Name: Lightning Wall
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Type: Defensive
Element: Lightning
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user holds his hand up in the direction where they are aiming the spell, and generates a wall made of lightning bolts anywhere within a 5 meter radius that can block up to C rank damage. The wall is 2 meters wide and 2 meters tall.

Name: Lightning Speed
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Type: Self Buff
Element: Lightning
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user snaps their fingers and generates lightning around their feet thus increasing their speed.

Name: Lightning Kick
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Range: Melee
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user picks their leg up which causes it to be surrounded in lightning for a single kick that does increased damage and cause 10-20% nerve damage wherever they were hit.

Name: Electromagnetic Field
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Type: Defensive
Element: Lightning
Range: Self
Cooldown: 2 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user crosses their arms in an X shape. This enhances their own electromagnetic field with magic, thus turning it into a force field around the user's own body capable of blocking up to C rank damage.



Last edited by Amon Irving on Tue May 30, 2017 1:27 am; edited 2 times in total

#2Leyaria Venerak 

Amon's Lightning Spells Empty Tue May 30, 2017 12:30 am

Leyaria Venerak
Hey there, let's begin with the grading.

For starters, per the Magic Regulations, D-Rank shocking damage permits "Shocking Damage: The shocking-type move numbs down a small or somewhat larger area which has been hit, causing nerve damage and reducing mobility by 10-20%. In order to maintain it, it must be sustained. Example: a hand 20% mobility reduction, an arm 10% mobility reduction."

In all instances of damage to which you describe the capability of stunning, please correct it such to reflect the nerve damage.

Lightning Fist:

  • While you have lightning surrounding your fist, you need something to which causes the lightning to appear, such as a snap of the finger or taking a step forward, for instance.
  • Please refer to what was mentioned with respects to the description of damage.


Lightning Wall:

  • There needs to be an action to which causes the generating of the wall to appear.
  • Please define the dimensions of the wall.


Lightning Speed:

  • Approved.


Lightning Kick:

  • There needs to be an action to which causes the lightning to surround the leg.
  • Please refer to what was mentioned with respects to the description of damage.


Electromagnetic Field:

  • You are permitted only 5 D-Ranks as your starting Magics. If you wish for this to be included, it will have to be purchased and trained separately.
  • There needs to be an action to which causes this spell to occur.
  • While you mention the range of Self, please clarify within the spell description that this is not an AOE or extend beyond your body, but rather that only affects your person.


Bump when edited.



#3Amon Irving 

Amon's Lightning Spells Empty Tue May 30, 2017 12:52 am

Amon Irving
Required changes were made



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#4Leyaria Venerak 

Amon's Lightning Spells Empty Tue May 30, 2017 1:24 am

Leyaria Venerak
Lightning Fist:

  • Approved.


Lightning Wall:

  • Please scale down the dimensions of the wall such that they are more in-line with the sizes of other spells of similar rank, no greater than 2 meters in any particular direction.


Lightning Kick:

  • Approved


Electromagnetic Field:

  • Approved


Bump when edited.



#5Amon Irving 

Amon's Lightning Spells Empty Tue May 30, 2017 1:28 am

Amon Irving
Changes made again



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#6Leyaria Venerak 

Amon's Lightning Spells Empty Tue May 30, 2017 1:32 am

Leyaria Venerak
Starter spells have been approved.



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