Charlotte Sharp's Starter Spells (FINISHED)

**Charlotte Sharp** · Sat Apr 22, 2017 3:00 pm

Guild :

Fairy Tail

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Experience :

5,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Eternal Light Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

200

Name: Crusader's Sword!
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Eternal Light Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Light
Range: Close to her body
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: She shoots her right hand into the sky. Then she recites the prayer, "Produce the Crusader's Sword!" A sword made of pure light descends and can be used until destruction or it has been destroyed by a spell or attack of equal rank or higher. The sword, however, is effortless to destroy but powerful in the damage it deals.

Name: Emperor Justinian's Holy Shield
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Eternal Light Magic
Type: Defensive
Element: Light
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: She shoots her left hand into the sky. Then she recites the prayer, "Construct Emperor Justinian's Holy shield!" A shield construct made of pure light is created and remains until destruction. It's relatively weak.

Name: Uriel's Blessing
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Eternal Light Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Light
Range: 20 meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: She puts her hands into a prayer position. Then she recites the prayer, "Uriel give me wings!" She then has the temporary abiltiy to jump into the sky.

Name: Fountain of Youth
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Eternal Light Magic
Type: Self-Strength
Element: Light
Range: To herself
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: She puts her hands onto the ground and recites the prayer, "Construct the Fountain of Youth." A torrent light energy surrounds her body, moving like water as it soaks into her skin. It causes her to become stronger.

Name: Let There Be Light
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Eternal Light Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Light
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: She shoots her right hand into the sky and recites the prayer, "From the book of creation: Let There Be Light!" A holy book temporary appears over her head and shoots a single beam of damaging light toward the desired target.

Last edited by Charlotte Sharp on Sat Apr 22, 2017 5:57 pm; edited 5 times in total

**Charlotte Sharp** · Sat Apr 22, 2017 3:40 pm

Guild :

Fairy Tail

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Experience :

5,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Eternal Light Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

200

BUMP finished :3

**Charlotte Sharp** · Sat Apr 22, 2017 4:28 pm

Guild :

Fairy Tail

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Experience :

5,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Eternal Light Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

200

Hey! I'm gonna bump again cause I'm bored and have nothing to do

**Erebus2** · Sat Apr 22, 2017 5:07 pm

Epithet :

Mortal Coil

Guild :

Sentinel Syndicate

Jewels :

1,017,000

Rank :

A-Rank

Race :

Zombie

Experience :

251,750

Reputation :

7,700

Class :

Spellhowler

Strength :

90

Speed :

21

Constitution :

113

Endurance :

62

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

2,625

Don't double post please. There's a review section you can post in.

First off before we begin, I ask that you set all cooldowns to 1.

**Charlotte Sharp** · Sat Apr 22, 2017 5:22 pm

Guild :

Fairy Tail

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Experience :

5,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Eternal Light Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

200

No problem. Also I didn't read about the spells not getting graded so that's my bad.

**Erebus2** · Sat Apr 22, 2017 5:38 pm

Epithet :

Mortal Coil

Guild :

Sentinel Syndicate

Jewels :

1,017,000

Rank :

A-Rank

Race :

Zombie

Experience :

251,750

Reputation :

7,700

Class :

Spellhowler

Strength :

90

Speed :

21

Constitution :

113

Endurance :

62

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

2,625

Everything in red is what you need to either fix or change. In your case I fixed some for you because I know what you meant, and if it would work in this system. You are free to take that as you wish. I'll need things marked in red fixed for the approval process to commence further.

Light Girl wrote:Name: Crusader's Sword!
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Eternal Light Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Light
Range: Close to her body
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: She shoots her right hand into the sky. Then she recites the prayer, "Produce the Crusader's Sword!" A sword made of pure light descends and can be used until destruction or ~~until use~~ it has been destroyed by a spell or attack of equal rank or higher. The sword, however, is effortless to destroy but powerful in the damage it deals.

Name: Emperor Justinian's Holy Temple
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Eternal Light Magic
Type: Defensive
Element: Light
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: She shoots her left hand into the sky. Then she recites the prayer, "Construct Emperor Justinian's Holy Temple!" A temple construct made of pure light is created and remains until destruction. It's relatively weak.

This is too big, you can only make defensive constructs the size your rank defines itself by. In this case, you need to check the rules, because at the most, I can only see a wall or a shield at this level.

Name: Uriel's Wings
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Eternal Light Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Light
Range: To herself
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: She puts her hands into a prayer position. Then she recites the prayer, "Uriel give me wings!" A pair of golden wings appear on her back letting her fly for a small amount of time.

Can't fly until B-rank. You can walk on walls though, or double jump. Things like that.

Name: Fountain of Youth
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Eternal Light Magic
Type: Self-Strength
Element: Light
Range: To herself
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: She puts her hands onto the ground and recites the prayer, "Construct the Fountain of Youth." A ~~water-like~~ torent of light energy surrounds her body, moving like water as it soaks into her skin. It causes her to become stronger.

Name: Let There Be Light
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Eternal Light Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Light
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: She shoots her right hand into the sky and recites the prayer, "From the book of creation: Let There Be Light!" A holy book temporary appears over her head and shoots beams of damaging light toward the desired target.

Beams? how many? Also remember that for every beam you shoot out you break the spell's damage in half. That means if you have 2 beams shoot that equals 1/2 D-rank each. That's virtually no damage, so I have a suggestion for you. I instead think if you made it a single beam sustain. You'd be better off. You can keep a beam up which will deal D-rank over time for every post you manage to have it held on the target.

Last edited by Erebus on Sat Apr 22, 2017 7:07 pm; edited 1 time in total

**Charlotte Sharp** · Sat Apr 22, 2017 5:47 pm

Guild :

Fairy Tail

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Experience :

5,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Eternal Light Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

200

Bump :3 got it

**Erebus2** · Sat Apr 22, 2017 5:56 pm

Epithet :

Mortal Coil

Guild :

Sentinel Syndicate

Jewels :

1,017,000

Rank :

A-Rank

Race :

Zombie

Experience :

251,750

Reputation :

7,700

Class :

Spellhowler

Strength :

90

Speed :

21

Constitution :

113

Endurance :

62

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

2,625

Light Girl wrote:Name: Uriel's Blessing
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Eternal Light Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Light
Range: To herself
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: She puts her hands into a prayer position. Then she recites the prayer, "Uriel give me wings!" She then has the temporary ability to jump into the sky.

How high? ten feet? two meters? etc.

**Charlotte Sharp** · Sat Apr 22, 2017 5:57 pm

Guild :

Fairy Tail

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Experience :

5,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Eternal Light Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

200

bump bump bump

**Erebus2** · Sat Apr 22, 2017 5:59 pm

Epithet :

Mortal Coil

Guild :

Sentinel Syndicate

Jewels :

1,017,000

Rank :

A-Rank

Race :

Zombie

Experience :

251,750

Reputation :

7,700

Class :

Spellhowler

Strength :

90

Speed :

21

Constitution :

113

Endurance :

62

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

2,625

Congratulations, these spells have been approved.

Charlotte Sharp's Starter Spells (FINISHED)

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