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#1Haigu 

Haigu's Starters [Complete] Empty Thu Aug 03, 2017 3:00 am

Haigu

  • Name: Zap
    Rank: D
    Mana Cost: 25
    Requirements: Twin Divide Magic
    Type: Offensive
    Element: Lightning
    Range: 5 meters
    Cooldown: 1 Post
    Duration: Instant
    Effect:
    With a point of a finger, a string sized shock of electricity shoots out at the pointed direction. It is not particularly powerful since it can easily be seen as a prank. Zap gives the target upon contact a jolt that still deals D rank shocking damage which is equivalent to a sting. It has a short range of 5 meters so either way it’s not exactly a good ranged spell. Only one of these bolts can be unleashed per casting.

  • Name: Shocking Touch
    Rank: D
    Mana Cost: 25
    Requirements: Twin Divide Magic
    Type: Offensive
    Element: Lightning
    Range: Touch
    Cooldown: 1 Posts
    Duration: Instant
    Effect:
    The motion starts by extending the arm out which is used to hurl a fist. A small current of electricity cloaks the hands that discharge upon coming into contact with an object/person. It is quite a shock though weak as it only deals a D rank amount of shocking damage in a single jolt. Even so under unaware circumstances it is quite surprising to suddenly get a shock.

  • Name: Boost
    Rank: D
    Mana Cost: 25
    Requirements: Twin Divide Magic
    Type: Self-Speed Buff
    Element: Lightning
    Range: Self
    Cooldown: 1 Posts
    Duration: Sustain
    Effect:
    Charging the body as a yellow magic circle forms above the palm of their hand. Which the hand would curl into a fist to release the magic into their body. Due to how weak of an increase this is equivalent to a D rank speed boost, not much can be seen of a difference in physical appearance. Other than perhaps the slight difference in terms of speed, but otherwise that is it.

  • Name: Shocking Burst
    Rank: D
    Mana Cost: 25
    Requirements: Twin Divide Magic
    Type: Offensive
    Element: Lightning
    Range: 5 Meters
    Cooldown: 1 Posts
    Duration: Instant
    Effect:
    The motion is simple and yet probably the easiest to predict. For it requires the user outstretch one hand towards the direction desired before a yellow magic circle appears before the hand. Spewing out of the circle is a burst of electricity dealing D ranked shocking damage in a 1 by 5 meter cone. Effectively covering a small area that has the potential to affect multiple targets in the zone.

  • Name: Electric Fang
    Rank: D
    Mana Cost: 25
    Requirements: Twin Divide Magic
    Type: Offensive
    Element: Lightning
    Range: Touch
    Cooldown: 1 Posts
    Duration: Instant
    Effect:
    By holding the hand almost like they’re ready to cut somebody with a set of claws. A magic circle appears around the hand to temporarily imbue it with electricity. This still requires for the user to land a physical blow to use the full purpose of the spell. Effectively dealing a lightning-based slashing worth of D rank shocking damage.



Last edited by Haigu on Tue Aug 08, 2017 11:52 pm; edited 2 times in total



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#2Haigu 

Haigu's Starters [Complete] Empty Mon Aug 07, 2017 10:08 am

Haigu
Bumping this o.o



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"Magic is more than a source of power, it's the same value as the energy that gives us life, as Magic is like watching an art being performed for all eyes to see."
#3Evangeline 

Haigu's Starters [Complete] Empty Tue Aug 08, 2017 1:30 am

Evangeline
Hello there, I'll be going through your spells now.


  • Zap
    -Mention the damage type. Unnecessary fillers aren't needed. Specify the range within the description as well.

  • Shocking Touch
    -This needs a real start up motion. I do not think simply touching is good enough.
    -Again, mention the damage type.

  • Boost
    -Include in the description that you are receiving a D rank buff in speed.

  • Shocking Burst
    -Damage type again.

  • Electric Fang
    -Take out the part about the electricity conducting enough heat and leaving burnt mark on clothes and objects.
    -Mention damage type.


Bump after edits.



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#4Haigu 

Haigu's Starters [Complete] Empty Tue Aug 08, 2017 10:49 am

Haigu
Bumping o.o



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"Magic is more than a source of power, it's the same value as the energy that gives us life, as Magic is like watching an art being performed for all eyes to see."
#5Evangeline 

Haigu's Starters [Complete] Empty Tue Aug 08, 2017 12:11 pm

Evangeline
Change all electric and lightning damage type to "Shocking damage".



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#6Haigu 

Haigu's Starters [Complete] Empty Tue Aug 08, 2017 11:55 pm

Haigu
Corrected damage types to shocking.



Haigu's Starters [Complete] Images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRS5yPFoSuZY6pKkKcUNsZVOrto_xwkaE2_0MzhG-ikekhJNP5zQQ
"Magic is more than a source of power, it's the same value as the energy that gives us life, as Magic is like watching an art being performed for all eyes to see."
#7Evangeline 

Haigu's Starters [Complete] Empty Wed Aug 09, 2017 12:40 am

Evangeline
These spells has been approved.



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