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#1Tori Lancaster 

Frost Dragon Slayer starter replacements Empty Mon Mar 13, 2017 4:20 pm

Tori Lancaster
Name: Frost Dragon Sub Zero Ice Punch
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Frost Dragon Slayer
Type: Offense
Element: Ice
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1
Duration: Instant
Effect: While running towards an opponent, Tori draws back her fist while focusing her magic into a punch. The magic surrounds her fist and condenses into solid ice, which she uses to deliver a powerful blow to her enemy, dealing D rank damage and first degree frostbite.

Name: Frost Dragon Diamond Storm
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Frost Dragon Slayer
Type: Offense
Element: Ice
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Tori crosses her arms and her magic focuses in front of where they intersect. A small orb of magic forms and when she releases her arms, it shatters into a dozen of tiny shards about one millimeter in length. The shards of ice fly towards an opponent, all at the same speed towards a focused point and thus all making contact simultaneously, doing D rank damage and first degree frostbite. Despite its appearance, it is not an area of effect attack as the shards focus on a single enemy.

Name: Frost Dragon Tower
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Frost Dragon Slayer
Type: Defense
Element: Ice
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Tori positions one arm as if she is holding a shield and materializes a small wall of ice that takes the form of a tower shield 2 meters tall and .5 meters wide. This shield is able to block any C rank of damage before breaking, and will lessen a stronger attack by one rank. Despite its size, Tori is able to adjust the shield easily due to its light weight and she is capable of using her free arm for other things while this spell is active.

Name: Frost Dragon Sword
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Frost Dragon Slayer
Type: Offense
Element: Ice
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Tori channels her magic onto her arm and projects it to extend out 3 meters. The magic solidifies and, in essence, turns her arm into an ice sword capable of dealing D rank damage per post and first degree frostbite. The sword will break if struck by a D rank spell.

Name: Frost Dragon Tunnel
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Frost Dragon Slayer
Type: Supplementary
Element: Ice
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Tori clasps her hands together and dives towards the ground. Magic condenses around her hands instantly and takes the form of a large drill .5 meters in diameter at the base. the drill immediately starts spinning and digs into the earth, pulling Tori behind it. She controls the direction of the drill by simply moving her hands where she wants it to point. This drill will move 5 meters before immediately drilling towards the surface, disappearing once ground is broken.



Last edited by Tori Lancaster on Mon May 22, 2017 11:13 am; edited 4 times in total

#2Faust Noire 

Frost Dragon Slayer starter replacements Empty Mon Mar 13, 2017 5:06 pm

Faust Noire
Hey there. Faust here and I'll be grading these spells.

  • Frost Dragon Diamond Storm: You'll need to state a specific amount of shards, as well as cutting their damage by the number you chose per shard. For example, if my spell shoots out five attacks, they'd only do 1/5 D-Rank each. If all of them hit, then it deals D-Rank damage. Please state the dimensions for each shard too.

  • Frost Dragon Stall: As a D-Rank defensive spell, you can block up to C-Rank damage. I'm confused as to how this spell works; it seems more like an offensive rather than a defensive. As I'm getting it, it seems like a beam-type offensive spell. Please clarify how this spell works.

  • Frost Dragon Sword: You can only deal one D-Rank per post, so remove the 'every strike' and replace it with per post. Please add that the sword has D-Rank durability, therefore if it takes D-Rank damage from any source, it'll disperse despite you not having cancelled it.

  • Frost Dragon Scales: You cannot envelop your entire body with a defensive spell at D-Rank. The maximum dimensions for a wall-type spell are 2 meters by 2 meters and C-Rank durability, 1 meter diameter and D-Rank durability for area-of-effect type spell defensive spells. This spell needs an action tied with it.


Bump upon completion.



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#3Tori Lancaster 

Frost Dragon Slayer starter replacements Empty Fri Mar 17, 2017 5:46 pm

Tori Lancaster
Frost Dragon Diamond Storm and Sword have been edited.

Frost Dragon Stall scrapped and replaced with Frost Dragon Tower.

With regard to Frost Dragon Scales, while the max size is 2 meters, that equates to roughly 6.5 feet. Given the fact that Tori is 5 feet and 7 inches, the dimensions are valid and within the scope of regulations. However, I did add the comment that the scales are quite thin which should justify a full body spell of this kind.

Also, sorry for the delay. Work has been an absolute nightmare this week.

#4Faust Noire 

Frost Dragon Slayer starter replacements Empty Fri Mar 17, 2017 6:30 pm

Faust Noire

  • Frost Dragon Scales: Do note that the 2 meters by 2 meters is for a wall-type spell. Because you're enveloping your entire body, not a wall that blocks incoming damage from a single direction, you're looking at an entire new defensive spell. The dimensions for an AoE spell are 1 meter in diameter, which is roughly 3 feet and a few. Because Tori herself surpasses 3 feet, you couldn't make this spell at this rank.

Bump upon completion.



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#5Tori Lancaster 

Frost Dragon Slayer starter replacements Empty Fri Mar 17, 2017 7:21 pm

Tori Lancaster
Fair enough. Scales replaced with Tunnel.

#6Faust Noire 

Frost Dragon Slayer starter replacements Empty Fri Mar 17, 2017 10:11 pm

Faust Noire
Congratulations, these spells have been approved.



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#7Venus RosĂ© 

Frost Dragon Slayer starter replacements Empty Mon May 22, 2017 11:11 am

Venus Rosé

Pulled for Revamp.



#8Tori Lancaster 

Frost Dragon Slayer starter replacements Empty Mon May 22, 2017 11:13 am

Tori Lancaster
Offensive spells edited

#9Venus RosĂ© 

Frost Dragon Slayer starter replacements Empty Mon May 22, 2017 11:17 am

Venus Rosé

Congratulations, your spells have been approved.



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