Name: Desubīmu (Death Beam)
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Apocalypse Fist Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: 15 Meters
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user extends their arm, pointing a finger towards their target. Immediately tongues of black magical like fire converge at the tip of the finger before shooting out through the air cutting through into the shape of a beam. The beam has a diameter of 1m as it cuts through the air with the intention to strike head on with its target. By continuously channeling mana into the finger tip the user can continue to fire the beam whether immediately or at a preferred time, until either the user runs out of mana or they cancel the spell. The beam of magical energy is that condensed it can pierce through solid rock.

This spell is capable of dealing out B rank piercing damage. The user can only fire 1 beam per post.

Name: Zenmetsu (Extinction)
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Apocalypse Fist Magic
Type: Offensive AOE
Element: None
Range: Self
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: instant
Effect: The user can use two actions to perform their spell either by clicking the fingers or stomping the back of their heel on the ground. The moment the action is performed black magical energy erupts outwards from the user's body expanding into the form of a giant dome,. The dome takes the shape of black flames that extend out to consume a 4m diameter around the wielder dealing B rank bludgeoning damage to whatever it comes in contact with.

Name: Renzoku Desubīmu (Barrage Death Beam)
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Apocalypse Fist Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: None
Range: 20m
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect:The user extends their arm, pointing a finger towards their target. Immediately tongues of black magical like fire converge at the tip of the finger before shooting out through the air cutting through into the shape of a beam. The beam has a cuts through the air with the intention to strike head on with its target. The user can opt to fire the spell off as one single beam for maximum damage or by splitting the magic at their finger tips the user can let loose multiple beams of magic varying from two to eight. Depending on the number of beams fired the size of each beam various. As one single beam it is 1m in diameter. When 2 beams are fired they are each 50cm in diameter. When 4 beams are fired each is 25cm in diameter. When 8 total beams are fired each is only 10cm in diameter.

By continuously channeling mana into the finger tip the user can continue to fire the beam(s) whether immediately or at a preferred time, until either the user runs out of mana or they cancel the spell.

As one single beam the spell deals A rank piercing damage, 2 Beams will each deal B rank piercing damage, 4 beams C rank piercing damage each while when 8 are fired each deal D rank piercing damage. The beam or beams can only be fired once per post.

All spells: Range does not include area of effect - that is in the description.

Death Beam: Please state that it is 1 beam per post.

Extinction: I'm unsure about this one simply due to a conversation I had with Sei in the past, so is it possible for you to wait on this one? It'll be included in the spell prices, but wont be approved. However, you'll still get the discounted price and can make the appropriate changes needed later on.

Barrage Beam: No curving, it'd have to curve in all instances or not at all, you can't choose when it curves. State it's the one load of 8 per post as well.

Bumped.

Fixed the two beam spells.

I dont mind waiting long as i am able to train for the other two. If needed i can post the AOE into another topic.

Just got word from Jyu, AoE Offensive Spells that are sustained aren't allowed. So, I'll give you a chance to change that spell into one of the same rank with the jewel discount.

bump. fixed it

This is approvable as is, buuut are you sure you want that B-rank spell? Technically that would be damaging your own self with the explosion as well.

Bump. Fixed it

Training

Finally managed to get it done with. All 3 spells trained.

Also on a note noticed I need to fix Death beam says it deals A rank damage when it should be B damage.

Alright, training looks good, you may go ahead and fix that bit.

This spell has been unlocked for spell edits on the following premise:

Desubīmu (Death Beam) deals A rank damage instead of B

Please bump this thread when edits have been made.

Bump. Edit has been made.

Bump.

Let me know if anything needs adjusting.

Desubimu (Death Beam)

• Because of the width of the beam and past spells of which have required finer dimensions, either reduce the width of the beam such that it is either 1x1 meter or below, or otherwise remove the sustain effect.
  

Zenmetsu (Extinction)

• Approved
  

Renzoku Desubimu (Barrage Death Beam)

• As with Desubimu, the maximum diameter to which you can possess an AOE offensive spell may not exceed 1x1 meter, so please reduce sizes appropriately.
  
• You seem to have an error when you refer to 8 beams are fired, as you use m as opposed to cm as the unit of measurement.
  
• Please note that you may be only able to use this spell once per post.
  

Bump when edited.

Bump, adjustments made to spells.