Shin Sekai starter Magic

**Shin Sekai** · Wed Nov 02, 2016 7:33 pm

Jewels :

355,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

51,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Louloúdi Ippótis

Strength :

6

Speed :

7

Constitution :

10

Endurance :

10

Intelligence :

10

Mana :

570

Thorn Whip:

Name: Thron Whip
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Via Surgens Queen Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user creates vines from their hand(s) by flicking their wrist that create a 5 feet long whip that can cause cutting and bludgeoning. They can use the whip to lash the target doing D-rank damage to them. When Shin summons two the damage is halfed due to the sell being split in two. Other D ranks or higher can destroy it.

Name: Rose Shell
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Via Surgens Queen Magic
Type: Defensive
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user claps their hands together that cover their hold body in thorns and ivy that keeps in a cocon type state which locks him in one spot until the spell it has come undone. It can block D-rank's or 1 C rank spell damage.

Rose Boomer:

Name: Rose Boomer
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Via Surgens Queen Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user makes a circle motion with one hand and procceds to open their hand allowing 5 petal to be blown at the oppoent. The petals act like remote explodsives as when they get near their target all of the petal do 1/5 of D-rank damage that inflict small cuts on the person as they explods within a 1 meter diameter.

Name: Soina Road
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Via Surgens Queen Magic
Type: Self Buff
Element: Nature
Range: N/A
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: After swinging his arms to the side's marking of vines with roses appear on his Arms, giving them a buff in strangeth for a limited amount of time give a D-rank buff.

Name: Sprout Blossom
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Via Surgens Queen Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user makes an 'X' with their Arms creating a small gust of wind with 5 blue rose buds that cut through Woods and cheap metals dealing 1/5 D-rank damage per bud. The spell can not stand up to other D ranks but not C-and higher.

Last edited by Shin Sekai on Thu Jul 06, 2017 9:16 pm; edited 18 times in total

Geb · Wed Nov 02, 2016 8:02 pm

Epithet :

The Maleficent Collector

Guild :

Phantom Lord

Jewels :

0

Rank :

B-rank

Race :

Demon

Experience :

200,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Strength :

49

Speed :

6

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

1400

You don't have an approved character yet. Please go make your character.

I'll lock these spells for now, but unlock them when your character is made so you can continue working on them once you finish.

**Shin Sekai** · Thu Nov 03, 2016 12:26 pm

Jewels :

355,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

51,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Louloúdi Ippótis

Strength :

6

Speed :

7

Constitution :

10

Endurance :

10

Intelligence :

10

Mana :

570

Everything is done now Sir

**Yoshino Freljord** · Thu Nov 03, 2016 3:10 pm

Epithet :

The Absolute Zero

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Rank :

B-rank

Experience :

132,500

Class :

Warlock

Magic :

Frost Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Constitution :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

86

Mana :

900

Unlocked. Bump upon completion and I'll take over these spells.

**Shin Sekai** · Thu Nov 03, 2016 3:48 pm

Jewels :

355,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

51,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Louloúdi Ippótis

Strength :

6

Speed :

7

Constitution :

10

Endurance :

10

Intelligence :

10

Mana :

570

Bump Bump

**Yoshino Freljord** · Thu Nov 03, 2016 9:40 pm

Epithet :

The Absolute Zero

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Rank :

B-rank

Experience :

132,500

Class :

Warlock

Magic :

Frost Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Constitution :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

86

Mana :

900

Thorn Whip: 25 meters? Bring that down to 5 meters. That's too much for a D-Rank spell. Also state that it deals D-Rank damage. In addition, remove one part of the spell. Right now, you're making it one spell with two functions. You can only have one. Lastly, you need an action for your spell. For example, either shooting it from your hands, etc.

Thorn Cage: Again, only 5 meters. I understand how it works but I'm unsure as to where you get the spear from. I need an action here as well.

Petal Angle: So, 5 meters. And I'm confused as to how this works. Please elaborate and add an action.

Soina Road: You're boosting two stats here. Only boost one. Choose either speed or strength, adding that you'll get a D-Rank buff in either strength or speed. And don't forget an action.

Queens Fall: Lower the range to 5 meters. I need the D-Rank damage indicator here as well.

Overall: For all your spells, change the types. Type means what kind of spell are they (offensive, defensive, self-buff, etc), not Instant/Sustained. Please check over any spelling errors that can be fixed.

Bump upon completion.

**Shin Sekai** · Fri Nov 04, 2016 5:13 pm

Jewels :

355,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

51,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Louloúdi Ippótis

Strength :

6

Speed :

7

Constitution :

10

Endurance :

10

Intelligence :

10

Mana :

570

Bump I tried my best to make everything simple

**Yoshino Freljord** · Fri Nov 04, 2016 8:40 pm

Epithet :

The Absolute Zero

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Rank :

B-rank

Experience :

132,500

Class :

Warlock

Magic :

Frost Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Constitution :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

86

Mana :

900

Thorn Whip: You need to state the course of action as well as the damage it does. In this case, how would you attack people? Vines come from your arms, but what else happens? If only that happens, then how would you deal damage? You need to add the way of dealing damage in your spells, for example, "the vines form a whip and Shin uses it to whip the target, dealing D-Rank damage."

Thorn Cage: It can block up to a D-Rank damage, so please state that.

Petal Angle: How does the user do the circle motion? Is it with a hand, leg, or whole body? Please specify. How many petals does it summon? You cannot have an infinite amount. You need a specific amount and the damage dealt by each one would be the same as 1 divided by the overall number of objects. For example, if I want 5 petals, each petal would do 1/5 D-Rank damage. Only after hitting all five would I be able to do 1 D-Rank.

Soina Road: Please state that it gives you a buff of D-Rank. Also, change the type from Buff to Self-Buff.

Queens Fall: Majority of the things are similar to your previous offense spell. I need a set number of objects, damage for each object. Example, 2 roses. Each would do 1/2 of a D-Rank damage. Only hitting both would mean doing D-Rank.

Bump upon completion.

**Shin Sekai** · Fri Nov 04, 2016 10:57 pm

Jewels :

355,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

51,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Louloúdi Ippótis

Strength :

6

Speed :

7

Constitution :

10

Endurance :

10

Intelligence :

10

Mana :

570

Bump I did everything now if not DM me and I'll fix later

**Yoshino Freljord** · Sat Nov 05, 2016 11:17 am

Epithet :

The Absolute Zero

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Rank :

B-rank

Experience :

132,500

Class :

Warlock

Magic :

Frost Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Constitution :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

86

Mana :

900

Petal Angle: Again, needs a set number of feathers.

Soina Road: Please state that it gives you a buff in speed of D-Rank.

Bump upon completion.

**Shin Sekai** · Mon Nov 07, 2016 2:42 pm

Jewels :

355,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

51,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Louloúdi Ippótis

Strength :

6

Speed :

7

Constitution :

10

Endurance :

10

Intelligence :

10

Mana :

570

Bump Bump LUL

**Bianca Fleur †** · Mon Nov 07, 2016 4:45 pm

Jewels :

175,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

515,000

Reputation :

11,700

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Blood Magic

Strength :

94

Speed :

61

Constitution :

61

Endurance :

66

Intelligence :

31

Mana :

2,870

Hello, I'll be taking over from here. Please fix the following errors:

Thorn Whip: ✓
Thorn Cage: This cannot be allowed as a defensive spell should only be able to protect you / your allies, seeing how you said that it can be used to trap / cage enemies. You can either make it so that it can only be used on yourself / allies (which means you cannot cage enemies at all) or make it a cage to trap enemies and replace the 'Defensive' label.
Petal Angle: Mention that each petal does 1/5 D-rank damage.
Soina Road: ✓
Queen Blossom: Mention that only both roses combined would do a single D-rank damage.

I would also suggest you to fix some spelling errors, especially for your element where you typed 'Natuer' instead of 'Nature'.

Bump when done.

**Shin Sekai** · Tue Nov 08, 2016 12:11 pm

Jewels :

355,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

51,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Louloúdi Ippótis

Strength :

6

Speed :

7

Constitution :

10

Endurance :

10

Intelligence :

10

Mana :

570

BUMP TRUMP BUMP

**Bianca Fleur †** · Thu Nov 10, 2016 1:04 pm

Jewels :

175,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

515,000

Reputation :

11,700

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Blood Magic

Strength :

94

Speed :

61

Constitution :

61

Endurance :

66

Intelligence :

31

Mana :

2,870

Congratulations, these spells have been approved.

**Leyaria Venerak** · Tue May 16, 2017 6:45 pm

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

S-rank

Race :

Demon

Experience :

500,000

Class :

Battlemage

Strength :

92

Speed :

43

Endurance :

38

Intelligence :

4

Mana :

2830

Pulled for revamp.

**Shin Sekai** · Wed May 17, 2017 12:06 am

Jewels :

355,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

51,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Louloúdi Ippótis

Strength :

6

Speed :

7

Constitution :

10

Endurance :

10

Intelligence :

10

Mana :

570

bump the trump

**Leyaria Venerak** · Wed May 17, 2017 12:53 am

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

S-rank

Race :

Demon

Experience :

500,000

Class :

Battlemage

Strength :

92

Speed :

43

Endurance :

38

Intelligence :

4

Mana :

2830

Thron Whip:

Please indicate it can be destroyed by D-Rank damage.
Please indicate the type of damage (cutting, bludgeoning, etc)

Rose Cage:

Note that as a D-Rank defensive spell, you are eligible to have this spell withstand up to 1 C-Rank worth of damage. I'll leave the option to you if you wish to update that or not.

Petal Angle:

Where do the petals originate from?
"when touched act like a claymore" - I'm a little confused by what you mean by this. If you could explain it please.
Please indicate that collectively, 1 D-Rank can destroy these petals.
Please indicate the type of damage (cutting, bludgeoning, etc)

Soina Road:

Approved.

Queen Blossom:

It's difficult to understand this spell with the spelling errors. Please go through this spell and make appropriate changes to make this more easily readable.
Please indicate the type of damage.
Please state the size of the explosion.
So you have two roses in which split into multiple petals? Do be aware that as such, each individual petal will do only a fraction of 1/2 a D-Rank, all of them from a particular rose combined being enough to do 1/2 D-Rank damage.

Is the GIF within the spoiler meant to represent the intended usage of Queen Blossom? If so, please change the name to reflect the spell. If it is not tied into any particular spell, please remove it.

Bump when edited.

**Shin Sekai** · Wed May 17, 2017 11:17 pm

Jewels :

355,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

51,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Louloúdi Ippótis

Strength :

6

Speed :

7

Constitution :

10

Endurance :

10

Intelligence :

10

Mana :

570

Edits have been made Boss

**Leyaria Venerak** · Wed May 17, 2017 11:30 pm

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

S-rank

Race :

Demon

Experience :

500,000

Class :

Battlemage

Strength :

92

Speed :

43

Endurance :

38

Intelligence :

4

Mana :

2830

Thron Whip:

Please separate the last sentence with a period rather than a comma. It appears that it takes D-Rank damage only when it is split between 2 whips.

Rose Cage:

Please set its maximum durability to 2 D-Rank or 1 C-Rank. Your current wording implies that this can withstand an unlimited amount of D-Ranks.

Petal Angle:

Please give an fixed amount of petals which are launched at a target. Right now there is no indication as to how many petals are released and can be implied to believe that it creates a seemingly infinite amount.

Queen Blossom:

Please indicate that each rose bud deals 1/5 D-Rank damage or 1 D-Rank worth of damage collectively. Right now it's implied that all 5 rose buds are capable of dealing D-Rank damage respectively.
"that cuts through nearly anything" - Please remove this. As a D-Rank spell in which deals cutting damage, the extent to which you can cut through anything is 2 centimeters.
Your description cuts off midway through the last sentence. Please either finish this sentence or remove it.

Bump when edited.

**Shin Sekai** · Wed May 31, 2017 2:48 pm

Jewels :

355,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

51,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Louloúdi Ippótis

Strength :

6

Speed :

7

Constitution :

10

Endurance :

10

Intelligence :

10

Mana :

570

I think it's done

**Leyaria Venerak** · Wed May 31, 2017 3:22 pm

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

S-rank

Race :

Demon

Experience :

500,000

Class :

Battlemage

Strength :

92

Speed :

43

Endurance :

38

Intelligence :

4

Mana :

2830

Thron Whip:

Approved.

Rose Shell:

Please change the last sentence to read "It can black 2 D-rank's or 1 C-Rank rank spell damage."

Petal Angle:

Because you have 5 petals, please state that each petal can deal 1/5 D-Rank, not 1/2 per.
Please state the size of the explosions.

Soina Road:

Because you are a Sorcerer Class, you may not have a Speed buff spell. Please change this.

Sprout Blossom:

Please indicate that each rose bud deals 1/5 D-Rank damage or 1 D-Rank worth of damage collectively. Right now it's implied that all 5 rose buds are capable of dealing D-Rank damage respectively.
"that cuts through nearly anything" - Please remove this. As a D-Rank spell in which deals cutting damage, the extent to which you can cut through anything is 2 centimeters.
Your description cuts off midway through the last sentence. Please either finish this sentence or remove it.

Bump when edited.

**Shin Sekai** · Mon Jul 03, 2017 11:48 pm

Jewels :

355,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

51,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Louloúdi Ippótis

Strength :

6

Speed :

7

Constitution :

10

Endurance :

10

Intelligence :

10

Mana :

570

Bump

**Leyaria Venerak** · Wed Jul 05, 2017 3:43 am

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

S-rank

Race :

Demon

Experience :

500,000

Class :

Battlemage

Strength :

92

Speed :

43

Endurance :

38

Intelligence :

4

Mana :

2830

Rose Shell:

Because you lack the ability to recognize "and" versus "or", I have taken the liberty of changing it for you. The spell is now approved.

Petal Angle:

Because you have 5 petals, please state that each petal can deal 1/5 D-Rank, not 1/2 per.
1 meter diameter, not radius. Please change it to reflect this.
State the collective explosion is no greater than 1 meter diameter, not each explosion.

Soina Road:

You cannot buff "attack". Unapproved.

Sprout Blossom:

Approved.

Bump when edited.

**Shin Sekai** · Thu Jul 06, 2017 10:03 pm

Jewels :

355,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

51,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Louloúdi Ippótis

Strength :

6

Speed :

7

Constitution :

10

Endurance :

10

Intelligence :

10

Mana :

570

Bump...

**Leyaria Venerak** · Thu Jul 06, 2017 10:09 pm

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

S-rank

Race :

Demon

Experience :

500,000

Class :

Battlemage

Strength :

92

Speed :

43

Endurance :

38

Intelligence :

4

Mana :

2830

Starter spells approved.

Shin Sekai starter Magic

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