Elena's Starters

**Elena** · Fri Oct 13, 2017 11:24 pm

Jewels :

400,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Vampyre

Experience :

25,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Blood Magic

Strength :

3

Speed :

2

Endurance :

3

Intelligence :

4

Mana :

500

Name: Ice Needles
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Frost Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Frost
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user opens their palm, three thin ice needles will deal 1/3 D-rank piercing damage each, to targets in it's path. Needed are 1mm wide and 10 cm long.

Name: Ice Valor
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Frost magic
Type: Self-Buff Strength
Element: Frost
Range: N/A
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user clasps their hands together and creates a temporary, thin layer of ice, around the body, giving the castor a d-rank strength boost.(purely cosmetic, only provides strength buff)

Name: Icy Mist
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Frost magic
Type: Self Buff: Strength
Element: Frost
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Claps finger together, the extreme coldness of the ice creates a mist around her body, giving the castor a D-rank strength boost.

Name: Frozen Spear
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Frost Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Frost
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user points at a direction, sending an ice spear towards the target, dealing D-rank piercing damage. 1.2 m long, 1 cm width.

Name: Ice-Rose Garden
Rank: D-rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Frost Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Frost
Range: 1 meter
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user kneels to ground, and touches the floor with both hands. A rose garden created by ice will erupt from the floor, dealing D-rank damage. Dimension of the garden is 1x1x1 meters.

Last edited by Elena on Sun Oct 15, 2017 11:21 pm; edited 11 times in total

**Venus Rosé** · Sat Oct 14, 2017 12:02 am

Epithet :

The Burning Rose

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

607,500

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Vampire

Experience :

1,427,000

Reputation :

31,400

Class :

Phantom

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

501

Speed :

655

Constitution :

286

Endurance :

400

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

11,005

Off-Hand :

Serpyn's Soul Slasher

Ring :

Raven Night Ring

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Companion :

Blair

Hello, I'll be your moderator.

Ice Needles:

Please state the dimensions of the Ice Needles.

Ice Armour:

State some kind of movement to cast this spell.
Every D-Rank spell has a cooldown of 1 post. Please change it from 3 posts to 1.
Can you have the same requirements for every spell? Not Frost Magic in one and Ice Magic in another.
Same goes for Element.

Patinage sur glace:

Once again, D-Rank spells have only 1 post as cooldown. Please edit.
Does this spell allow you to skate on every surface or just ice?
Supplementary spells don't increase user's movement speed, only buffing spells do.

Frozen Spear:

Cooldown is 1 post.
State the dimensions of the Ice Spear.

Ice-Rose Garden:

Since you're a Sorcerer class, you cannot have a De-buff spell. Different types cannot be combined within a spell as well.
C-Rank spells have a range of 10 meters, so feel free to increase it.
Is this an AoE spell? If so, please state so. A C-Rank AoE spell has 2 meters diameter range.
Note that you don't get this C-Rank spell for free, you're required to train them. The free starters are for D-Ranks only.

Bump when done.

**Elena** · Sat Oct 14, 2017 12:12 am

Jewels :

400,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Vampyre

Experience :

25,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Blood Magic

Strength :

3

Speed :

2

Endurance :

3

Intelligence :

4

Mana :

500

Bump, thank you!

**Venus Rosé** · Sat Oct 14, 2017 5:28 pm

Epithet :

The Burning Rose

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

607,500

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Vampire

Experience :

1,427,000

Reputation :

31,400

Class :

Phantom

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

501

Speed :

655

Constitution :

286

Endurance :

400

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

11,005

Off-Hand :

Serpyn's Soul Slasher

Ring :

Raven Night Ring

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Companion :

Blair

Ice Needles:

Approved.

Ice Armour:

Approved.

Paintage sur glace:

Sorcerers aren't allowed to buff their speed but their strength only.

Frozen Spear:

Approved.

Ice Rose Garden:

Please state the dimensions of the rose garden, which is 1x1x1 meters.

Bump when edited.

**Elena** · Sat Oct 14, 2017 5:42 pm

Jewels :

400,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Vampyre

Experience :

25,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Blood Magic

Strength :

3

Speed :

2

Endurance :

3

Intelligence :

4

Mana :

500

bump! thanks again

**Venus Rosé** · Sat Oct 14, 2017 6:12 pm

Epithet :

The Burning Rose

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

607,500

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Vampire

Experience :

1,427,000

Reputation :

31,400

Class :

Phantom

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

501

Speed :

655

Constitution :

286

Endurance :

400

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

11,005

Off-Hand :

Serpyn's Soul Slasher

Ring :

Raven Night Ring

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Companion :

Blair

Paintage sur glace:

Your spell doesn't actually make sense. You summon skates on you feet but it increases your strength?
Buffing and supplementary spells are different and cannot be combined into one. You skating on land would be a different spell -- that is supplementary, and another that increases your strength, that is Self-Buff: Strength spell.

Ice Rose Garden:

Approved.

**Elena** · Sat Oct 14, 2017 7:15 pm

Jewels :

400,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Vampyre

Experience :

25,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Blood Magic

Strength :

3

Speed :

2

Endurance :

3

Intelligence :

4

Mana :

500

Bumperino once again ;-; thanks so much

**Venus Rosé** · Sat Oct 14, 2017 7:38 pm

Epithet :

The Burning Rose

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

607,500

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Vampire

Experience :

1,427,000

Reputation :

31,400

Class :

Phantom

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

501

Speed :

655

Constitution :

286

Endurance :

400

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

11,005

Off-Hand :

Serpyn's Soul Slasher

Ring :

Raven Night Ring

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Companion :

Blair

Patinage sur glace:

There should be a range on the spell since you're travelling over a distance.

**Elena** · Sat Oct 14, 2017 11:37 pm

Jewels :

400,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Vampyre

Experience :

25,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Blood Magic

Strength :

3

Speed :

2

Endurance :

3

Intelligence :

4

Mana :

500

i changed it. bump!

**Venus Rosé** · Sun Oct 15, 2017 2:14 am

Epithet :

The Burning Rose

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

607,500

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Vampire

Experience :

1,427,000

Reputation :

31,400

Class :

Phantom

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

501

Speed :

655

Constitution :

286

Endurance :

400

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

11,005

Off-Hand :

Serpyn's Soul Slasher

Ring :

Raven Night Ring

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Companion :

Blair

Icy Mist:

Where does it create a mist? In the area or around her body? Note that this mist shouldn't only be for cosmetic purposes and cannot cause any hindrance to the enemies.
Since this is a Buff spell, the type of the spell should be Self Buff: Strength, not Offensive.
Mention that the spell gives user a 'D-Rank' Strength Buff.
Buffs are sustained most of the time so feel free to change the Duration as well and change the Range of the spell to 'Self'.

**Elena** · Sun Oct 15, 2017 10:42 am

Jewels :

400,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Vampyre

Experience :

25,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Blood Magic

Strength :

3

Speed :

2

Endurance :

3

Intelligence :

4

Mana :

500

Bump! Thanks again

**Venus Rosé** · Sun Oct 15, 2017 7:04 pm

Epithet :

The Burning Rose

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

607,500

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Vampire

Experience :

1,427,000

Reputation :

31,400

Class :

Phantom

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

501

Speed :

655

Constitution :

286

Endurance :

400

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

11,005

Off-Hand :

Serpyn's Soul Slasher

Ring :

Raven Night Ring

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Companion :

Blair

These spells have been approved.

**Venus Rosé** · Sun Oct 15, 2017 7:35 pm

Epithet :

The Burning Rose

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

607,500

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Vampire

Experience :

1,427,000

Reputation :

31,400

Class :

Phantom

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

501

Speed :

655

Constitution :

286

Endurance :

400

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

11,005

Off-Hand :

Serpyn's Soul Slasher

Ring :

Raven Night Ring

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Companion :

Blair

This application has been pulled for revision.

Ice Armour:

Full body defensive spells are not allowed until S-Rank.

Bump when done.

**Elena** · Sun Oct 15, 2017 11:03 pm

Jewels :

400,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Vampyre

Experience :

25,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Blood Magic

Strength :

3

Speed :

2

Endurance :

3

Intelligence :

4

Mana :

500

Bump thank you

**Venus Rosé** · Sun Oct 15, 2017 11:18 pm

Epithet :

The Burning Rose

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

607,500

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Vampire

Experience :

1,427,000

Reputation :

31,400

Class :

Phantom

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

501

Speed :

655

Constitution :

286

Endurance :

400

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

11,005

Off-Hand :

Serpyn's Soul Slasher

Ring :

Raven Night Ring

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Companion :

Blair

Ice Valor:

Change the type to Self-Buff Strength.
Mention that the ice layer around the body is for cosmetic effects, meaning that it won't do anything other than giving the user a Strength Buff.
Can you separate the 2 spells?

Bump when changes are made.

**Elena** · Sun Oct 15, 2017 11:22 pm

Jewels :

400,000

Rank :

C-Rank

Race :

Vampyre

Experience :

25,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Blood Magic

Strength :

3

Speed :

2

Endurance :

3

Intelligence :

4

Mana :

500

Bump thank you~

**Venus Rosé** · Sun Oct 15, 2017 11:51 pm

Epithet :

The Burning Rose

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

607,500

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Vampire

Experience :

1,427,000

Reputation :

31,400

Class :

Phantom

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

501

Speed :

655

Constitution :

286

Endurance :

400

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

11,005

Off-Hand :

Serpyn's Soul Slasher

Ring :

Raven Night Ring

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Companion :

Blair

These spells have been approved.

Elena's Starters

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Sat Oct 14, 2017 11:37 pm

Sun Oct 15, 2017 2:14 am

Sun Oct 15, 2017 10:42 am

Sun Oct 15, 2017 7:04 pm

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