Sora's heat magic

Hirota Miki, the Lady of Nothingness
Miharu Qinren, Vessel of Qinglong

Threat :

Danger

Jewels :

10,522,000

Rank :

Z-Rank

Race :

Machia

Experience :

779,750

Reputation :

32,900

Class :

Spellsword

Magic :

Strength :

236

Speed :

653

Constitution :

121

Endurance :

148

Intelligence :

266

Mana :

10,350

Weapon Mastery :

Bow - Grandmaster

Weapon :

Off-Hand :

Head :

Etherium Prosthetic - Darkstar Cannon Plate Armor ↂ

Body :

Cape :

Modification :

Fulu Core

Pouch :

Cool head Hot Heart: change mana cost to 25, change spell type to supplementary, remove the comment where it causes you to be immune to your own magic. Change all elements to Fire.

Hot Glider: Self-buff only increases your statistics in the class of a sorcerer only speed. Rephrase your spell to list that as the only ability of that spell. change type to self-buff speed, otherwise rephrase this spell entirely.

Hot Body: Remove the temperature quote as temperatures of that extreme cause third-degree burns, you are also unable to melt metal regardless of the period that the heat is sustained on the object. Change type to offensive

**Sora Mamoru** · Fri Dec 01, 2017 4:34 pm

Guild :

Lamia Scale

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Experience :

5,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Heat Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

210

i edited it

**Kon** · Fri Dec 01, 2017 8:50 pm

Epithet :

Machine man

Guild :

Hirota Miki, the Lady of Nothingness
Miharu Qinren, Vessel of Qinglong

Threat :

Danger

Jewels :

10,522,000

Rank :

Z-Rank

Race :

Machia

Experience :

779,750

Reputation :

32,900

Class :

Spellsword

Magic :

Strength :

236

Speed :

653

Constitution :

121

Endurance :

148

Intelligence :

266

Mana :

10,350

Weapon Mastery :

Bow - Grandmaster

Weapon :

Off-Hand :

Head :

Etherium Prosthetic - Darkstar Cannon Plate Armor ↂ

Body :

Cape :

Modification :

Fulu Core

Pouch :

Cool head Hot Heart: Cool-down to 1 change the duration to sustain. Change element to just fire remove the heath

hot glider: Again, that's a flight spell that can only be used at B rank and is considered a supplementary spell, Self-buffs only affect a person's statistics, not their abilities. Change element to just fire remove the heath

hot body: Change element to just fire remove the heath

**Sora Mamoru** · Sat Dec 02, 2017 11:09 am

Guild :

Lamia Scale

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Experience :

5,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Heat Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

210

edited again ... big chance it is good now:)

**Kon** · Mon Dec 04, 2017 3:20 am

Epithet :

Machine man

Guild :

Hirota Miki, the Lady of Nothingness
Miharu Qinren, Vessel of Qinglong

Threat :

Danger

Jewels :

10,522,000

Rank :

Z-Rank

Race :

Machia

Experience :

779,750

Reputation :

32,900

Class :

Spellsword

Magic :

Strength :

236

Speed :

653

Constitution :

121

Endurance :

148

Intelligence :

266

Mana :

10,350

Weapon Mastery :

Bow - Grandmaster

Weapon :

Off-Hand :

Head :

Etherium Prosthetic - Darkstar Cannon Plate Armor ↂ

Body :

Cape :

Modification :

Fulu Core

Pouch :

Cool head Hot Heart: change the duration to sustain.

hot body: Approved

**Sora Mamoru** · Mon Dec 04, 2017 12:08 pm

Guild :

Lamia Scale

Jewels :

50,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Experience :

5,000

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

Heat Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

210

last time edit i think

**Kon** · Tue Dec 05, 2017 10:47 am

Epithet :

Machine man

Guild :

Hirota Miki, the Lady of Nothingness
Miharu Qinren, Vessel of Qinglong

Threat :

Danger

Jewels :

10,522,000

Rank :

Z-Rank

Race :

Machia

Experience :

779,750

Reputation :

32,900

Class :

Spellsword

Magic :

Strength :

236

Speed :

653

Constitution :

121

Endurance :

148

Intelligence :

266

Mana :

10,350

Weapon Mastery :

Bow - Grandmaster

Weapon :

Off-Hand :

Head :

Etherium Prosthetic - Darkstar Cannon Plate Armor ↂ

Body :

Cape :