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#1Varian 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Mon Nov 27, 2017 4:49 pm

Varian
Name: Winds of Aquarius
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Celestial Zodiac Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Light
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user snaps their fingers and leaves made of orangish-red light will appear around the user. With another snap the leaves will fly towards the opponent, when the mass hits it'll do one C-rank worth of piercing damage. The leaves will hover in a 1 meter diameter ring around the caster until they snap their fingers, once snapped, they morph into a mass and fly at the opponent

Name: Mother's Protection
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Celestial Zodiac Magic
Type: Defensive
Element: light
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user holds one hand up in front of  them and a 6 by 6 (ft) blue light shield with the cancer symbol plastered on it. the spell can take on B-rank worth of damage or 2x C-rank damage

Name: Arrow of the archer
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Celestial Zodiac Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Light
Range: 10 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user holds their arms if they're holding a bow. A bow of light will appear in their hands, along with a light arrow (the arrow has flame like red light doming off the tip). The caster acts if they have let the arrow go, the arrow will fly towards the user and cause C-rank Piercing damage to the afflicted opponent.



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#2Venus Rosé 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Wed Nov 29, 2017 6:57 am

Venus Rosé

Hello, I'll be your moderator.

Sword Of Aries:

  • If you wish to deal 2 damage types, the damage of your spell is going to be lowered by 1 rank, which means you'll only deal 1 D-Rank damage per post.


Winds of Aquarius:

  • Mention that the leaves that surround the user's body is within 1 m diameter.


Mother's Protection:

  • Approved.


Arrow Of The Archer:

  • The elemental damage can only be done if you have the element of the spell. For instance, if you want to burning or freezing damage, you need to wield Fire or Ice element to do those types of damages.
  • It's a C-Rank spell, so you can have the damage up to C-Rank.


Bump when done.



#3Varian 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Wed Nov 29, 2017 1:58 pm

Varian
Bump

I removed Aries sword



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#4Venus Rosé 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Wed Nov 29, 2017 11:57 pm

Venus Rosé

These spells have been approved for training.



#5Varian 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Fri Dec 01, 2017 9:04 pm

Varian



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#6Fleur 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Thu Dec 07, 2017 1:06 pm

Fleur
Just a reminder that your class multipliers affect your word count requirement as well. Therefore, the overall total for all three spells to be approved should be 3,000. Bump the thread once the word count has been reached!



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#7Varian 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Thu Dec 07, 2017 5:44 pm

Varian
I thought that changed. Well funnnnnn



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#8Varian 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Thu Dec 07, 2017 6:22 pm

Varian



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#9Fleur 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Thu Dec 07, 2017 8:55 pm

Fleur
These spells have been denied.

Note: Writing 700 words worth of names alone isn't valid, whether it was relevant to your post or not. Please rewrite the entire 3,000 words from scratch. You may either proceed on that thread or start another, but the staff team will not count the first four posts. Jewels will be deducted if cheeky behavior continues.



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#10Varian 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Thu Dec 07, 2017 9:26 pm

Varian
I'll rewrite the fourth post, (with no names) It should be done by tomorrow



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#11Varian 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Fri Dec 08, 2017 5:00 am

Varian
I’m probably goijbgbto try and rewrite the rest today at some point, but since there are plot points in the story I was wondering if I could keep those in there, or do I have to rewrite those too.



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#12Fleur 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Fri Dec 08, 2017 9:30 am

Fleur
The entire 3,000 words needs to be rewritten. This serves as a punishment and the first four posts will be ignored when grading comes into play. You can choose to either continue with that thread (but the first four posts will be ignored) or you could start another if you're in need of new material to plot with.

You can keep the posts and plot of your current thread. However, they will not count to the required overall training word count. In other words, you currently have 0 words to present and need to reach 3,000 in order to unlock these spells.



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#13Varian 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Fri Dec 08, 2017 10:31 am

Varian
OkayI rewrote the 4the post and I’ll just go back from there using the same plot, but different words.



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#14Varian 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Fri Dec 08, 2017 10:32 am

Varian
Just a clarification: I don’t mean the timeline of the posts and what he does, but the whole dark guild plot.



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#15Fleur 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Fri Dec 08, 2017 1:02 pm

Fleur
Yes, you are allowed to continue off your current dark guild plot. What we will not be accepting are the first four posts' word count. As far as plot goes, your plot is still valid so feel free to continue off of it.



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#16Varian 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Fri Dec 08, 2017 4:30 pm

Varian
they've been rewritten, I tried to change the plot up a bit and I changed the spell order, I hoped that sufficed.



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#17Fleur 

Abra Cadabra (training please) Empty Fri Dec 08, 2017 5:21 pm

Fleur
These spells have been approved.



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