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#1Akira Shimada 

Dark Destruction [1] Empty Wed Jan 03, 2018 12:50 am

Akira Shimada
Name: Devastate
Rank: D-Rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Darkness Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Dark
Cooldown: 1 post
Range: 1 meter
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Akira lifts her palms over her head and brings them down to her sides. As she does, the spell is cast and it creates a sphere of darkness around her. She can move while casting this spell, giving her the ability to attempt hitting more than one target with it, but ending up closer to them once she finishes. The spell does D-rank bludgeoning type damage.

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Name: Dissolve
Rank: D-Rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Darkness Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Dark
Cooldown: 1 post
Range: 1 meter
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Akira, along with anything that she is holding onto (except people) can disappear into darkness or into shadows. This aids her in performing stealthy moves. She can use it, for example, to follow a target for recon or to land surprise attacks. Akira cannot cast any spells while in stealth, the moment she casts any other spell, the effect of dissolve breaks.

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Name: Damper
Rank: D-Rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Darkness Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Dark
Cooldown: 1 post
Range: 5 meters
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Akira interlaces her fingers and tightens them to cast this spell. The targets' shadow begins to wraps itself around the targets. The greater the number of targets, the weaker the effect of the spell.

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Name: Dominate
Rank: D-Rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Darkness Magic
Type: Self-buff
Element: Dark
Cooldown: 1 post
Range: Self
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Akira interlaces her fingers together and stretches both her arms, while linked so her palms face outward. This stretch stirs the darkness within her, so it cooperates with her to make her stronger. The effect of this spell gives her a D-rank strength buff, while active a faint dark aura surrounds her.

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Name: Disintegrate
Rank: D-Rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Darkness Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Dark
Cooldown: 1 post
Range: 5 meters
Duration: Instantaneous
Effect: Akira fists both her hands and joins them together, releasing a wide beam of dark energy. The beam does D-rank piercing type damage. The dark beam occasionally is gifted with hues of grey and glimmers, almost as though its got a fluid-like consistency.



Last edited by AkiraShimada on Wed Jan 03, 2018 10:11 am; edited 11 times in total

#2Xandra Queen † 

Dark Destruction [1] Empty Wed Jan 03, 2018 8:51 am

Xandra Queen †
Hello there, I'll be your moderator for today.

Disintegrate:

  • Mention what type of damage it does.

Dissolve:

  • Change range to 1 meter.

Damper:

  • Please remove the line that states that mana will increase if more than one target is captured.
  • If more than one target is captured, the binding strength which depends upon your own strength stats, will be divided equally among the targets. Also state that the greater the number of targets captured, the weaker the binding spell on each of them becomes.

Define:

  • I'm going to have to deny this spell. You may change it to only one object such as a sphere or a dagger and please state what it would be used for.
  • Mana cost will remain 25

Devastate:

  • Denied. Please change this spell.
  • Cooldown is 1 post
  • Range is 5 posts
  • Remove the part where it escapes from the sky. Range is only 5 meters, so that would be impossible. You can make it so that the attack initiates from you, not the sky.
  • Also, please stick to your own element. You cannot use a thunderbolt when you have darkness magic.
  • Mention the type of damage it does to the target.


Bump when edited~



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#3Akira Shimada 

Dark Destruction [1] Empty Wed Jan 03, 2018 9:39 am

Akira Shimada
Edited, do let me know if something needs to be tweaked some more, thanks! :)



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#4Xandra Queen † 

Dark Destruction [1] Empty Wed Jan 03, 2018 10:18 am

Xandra Queen †
These spells have been approved.



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#5Venus Rosé 

Dark Destruction [1] Empty Mon Jan 15, 2018 7:42 am

Venus Rosé

These spells have been pulled for revision.

Devastate:

  • Travelling spells aren't allowed, and each spell has a static speed of 20 m/s, so you cannot control as to how fast the spell will move.


Bump when done.



#6Xandra Queen † 

Dark Destruction [1] Empty Mon Jan 15, 2018 8:06 am

Xandra Queen †
These spells have been re-approved.



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