Notte's 3/5 Free Spells

**Notte Giornata** · Mon Mar 05, 2018 6:08 pm

Guild :

Guildless

Jewels :

225,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Experience :

15,000

Class :

Trickster

Magic :

Buio Coccio Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

3

Mana :

200

Name: Shadow Webs V1
Rank: D Rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Buio Coccio Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Darkness
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user flicks his wrist which produces a black web that can shoot up to 5m meters to increase mobility of the user, allowing them to climb walls or swing across buildings. To activate the production of these webs the user has to shout "Ombra!"

Name: Shadow Claw V1
Rank: D Rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Buio Coccio Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Darkness
Range: 5m
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Notte's nails grow and solidify with a dark aura as sharp as knives, these nails grows 1 cm longer allowing for piercing damage, one D rank damage per post. To activate the sharpening of the users nails the user has to shout "Affilare"

Name: Notte Sangue
Rank: D Rank
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Buio Coccio Magic
Type: Self Speed Up
Element: Darkness
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Notte puts his thumb on his veins inserting darkness into his bloodstream, in turn this increases his heart beat increasing his speed. (+5 Speed Buff) To activate the production of this darkness in the users thumb the user has to shout "Sangue!"

Last edited by Notte Giornata on Wed Mar 07, 2018 9:01 am; edited 4 times in total

**Venus Rosé** · Mon Mar 05, 2018 11:37 pm

Epithet :

The Burning Rose

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

607,500

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Vampire

Experience :

1,427,000

Reputation :

31,400

Class :

Phantom

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

501

Speed :

655

Constitution :

286

Endurance :

400

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

11,005

Off-Hand :

Serpyn's Soul Slasher

Ring :

Raven Night Ring

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Companion :

Blair

Hello, I'll be grading your spells.

Shadow Webs V1:

The requirements of the spell must be the name of your own Magic, not the hand motions.
Could you be more detailed in your description please? Such as where does it appear when casted, and also the dimensions of the web.

Shadow Claw V1:

As mentioned above, the Requirements of the spell has to be the name of your magic.
You will need to add more to the description. How long is the length of the nails? What kind of damage does it do? Also, state that it can only do 1 D-Rank damage per post.
Please indicate a movement to cast the spell in the description.

Notte Sangue:

Please edit the Requirements as stated before.

Bump once edited.

**Notte Giornata** · Tue Mar 06, 2018 4:48 pm

Guild :

Guildless

Jewels :

225,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Experience :

15,000

Class :

Trickster

Magic :

Buio Coccio Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

3

Mana :

200

Bump o o

**Venus Rosé** · Tue Mar 06, 2018 8:08 pm

Epithet :

The Burning Rose

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

607,500

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Vampire

Experience :

1,427,000

Reputation :

31,400

Class :

Phantom

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

501

Speed :

655

Constitution :

286

Endurance :

400

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

11,005

Off-Hand :

Serpyn's Soul Slasher

Ring :

Raven Night Ring

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Companion :

Blair

The requirements of the spells have to the name of your magic, that is 'Buio Coccio Magic'. The hand gestures and movements are to be mentioned in the spell's description, not in the Requirements. Please change all the requirements.

Shadow Webs V1:

The range of the spell is written as 10 meters. Please edit it.

Shadow Claw V1:

Mention that the spell can only deal 1 D-Rank damage per post.

Notte Sangue:

Approved, but fix the requirements as mentioned above.

Bump when done.

**Notte Giornata** · Tue Mar 06, 2018 9:25 pm

Guild :

Guildless

Jewels :

225,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Experience :

15,000

Class :

Trickster

Magic :

Buio Coccio Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

3

Mana :

200

so sorry i got it wrong the first time, Bump

**Venus Rosé** · Tue Mar 06, 2018 11:13 pm

Epithet :

The Burning Rose

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

607,500

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Vampire

Experience :

1,427,000

Reputation :

31,400

Class :

Phantom

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

501

Speed :

655

Constitution :

286

Endurance :

400

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

11,005

Off-Hand :

Serpyn's Soul Slasher

Ring :

Raven Night Ring

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Companion :

Blair

You need to fix those, in all of your spells. They are to be mentioned in your spells' descriptions. Read my previous once again.

**Notte Giornata** · Wed Mar 07, 2018 8:03 am

Guild :

Guildless

Jewels :

225,000

Rank :

D-Rank

Experience :

15,000

Class :

Trickster

Magic :

Buio Coccio Magic

Strength :

1

Speed :

1

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

3

Mana :

200

bump p p o

**Venus Rosé** · Thu Mar 08, 2018 1:11 am

Epithet :

The Burning Rose

Guild :

Eternal Nightmare

Threat :

Catastrophe

Jewels :

607,500

Rank :

X-Rank

Race :

Vampire

Experience :

1,427,000

Reputation :

31,400

Class :

Phantom

Aura :

Emperor

Strength :

501

Speed :

655

Constitution :

286

Endurance :

400

Intelligence :

1

Mana :

11,005

Off-Hand :

Serpyn's Soul Slasher

Ring :

Raven Night Ring

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Companion :

Blair

These spells have been approved.

Notte's 3/5 Free Spells

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