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Magic for those hairy situations (free D-ranks and one C to train)

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#1Kurdran Briggs 

Magic for those hairy situations (free D-ranks and one C to train) Empty Thu Mar 22, 2018 10:16 am

Kurdran Briggs
Name: Hairy dwarf
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hairs breadth Magic
Type: Defensive
Element: Lightning
Range: self
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Kurdran shakes his body furiously as hair emerges all around his body from under his skin, making him look almost like a small bear in appearance, aside from his mohawk and beard sticking out. Someone might even confuse this move with takeover magic. The hair is tiny bit thicker than normal and can block either two D-rank blows or a single C-rank attack. It`s also quite warm, and easy to move in. (claws in the picture are not included)

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Name: Hair whip
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hairs breadth Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Lightning
Range: 1 meter
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Kurdran presses his mohawk flat and pulls it black into slender snake like shape, which pretty much works like a thick rope. This can be wrapped onto things to prevent falling, to make sudden stops from momentum or to even swing like from a vine from one place to another. The whip breaks upon D-rank damage.

Name: Thunder shock
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hairs Breadth Magic
Type: Debuff
Element: Lightning
Range: touch or 1 meter range from him.
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Kurdran whips his hair back and forth, generating electricity. The first target to come in contact with his hair is shocked, Giving them an endurance debuff.

And finally, a C-rank move to train:

Name: Thun-Dor-rah!
Rank: C
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Hairs breadth Magic
Type: Debuff
Element: lightning
Range: 10 Meter cone, 2 meter diameter
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Kurdran brushes his hair with his hand to create electricity, or uses whatever electricity he currently has, and stomps, releasing a long range shockwave in the stomps direction, typically accompanied by a roar. Anyone hit by the attack takes a speed debuff and is shocked.



Last edited by Kurdran Briggs on Wed Mar 28, 2018 12:14 am; edited 2 times in total

#2Nastasya 

Magic for those hairy situations (free D-ranks and one C to train) Empty Thu Mar 22, 2018 11:01 am

Nastasya
Hi, let's go over your spells!


  • Hairy Dwarf: your magic is considered lightning magic, so add that to the element of your spell.

  • Hair whip: please mention the size of the whip, keep in mind the maximum sizes. Apart from that I'm getting clarification if a supplementary spell can give damage in the way you mean. (the same goes for your Shocker spell). Because in general only Offensive spells can give damage.

  • Thunder!: I just want to add that you can have a maximum range of 10 meters, if you want to keep it up to 2-3 meters than pick specific one number so either 2 or 3. Range is the area in which you can use the spell with the maximum size of 2 meters for a C-rank. So please change 2 meter in range to 2 meters in diameter if you mean the size in your spell description.



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#3Kurdran Briggs 

Magic for those hairy situations (free D-ranks and one C to train) Empty Sat Mar 24, 2018 3:49 pm

Kurdran Briggs
Edited the moves upon recommendations, and kept the controversial stuff there for now.

#4Nastasya 

Magic for those hairy situations (free D-ranks and one C to train) Empty Tue Mar 27, 2018 9:07 pm

Nastasya

  • Shocker: A supplementary spell can't do offensive/damage effects, that means that your shocker spell needs to be changed. Damage is only possible for offensive spells.

  • Hair whip: Same goes here, there won't be damage coming from your spell. Doesn't mean you can't throw a whip in someone's face to surprise them, but no damage.
    Also please add the size of your spell in your description, you mentioned 5 meters, that's range, the maximum size of a D-rank spell is 1 meter.

  • Thun-dor-rah!: the maximum size of a C-rank spell is 2 meters, so please add the size to your spell. You can make it bigger but than the durability ranks down.



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#5Kurdran Briggs 

Magic for those hairy situations (free D-ranks and one C to train) Empty Wed Mar 28, 2018 12:14 am

Kurdran Briggs
Let`s hope that was the laste edit needed, hehe.

#6Nastasya 

Magic for those hairy situations (free D-ranks and one C to train) Empty Wed Mar 28, 2018 1:09 am

Nastasya
These spells have been approved, and the C-rank spell has been approved for training.



#8e1ed ~ Nastasya
#7Kurdran Briggs 

Magic for those hairy situations (free D-ranks and one C to train) Empty Fri Mar 30, 2018 11:52 am

Kurdran Briggs

#8Akira Shimada 

Magic for those hairy situations (free D-ranks and one C to train) Empty Fri Mar 30, 2018 12:13 pm

Akira Shimada
The C-rank spell has been approved for usage.



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