• Instead of filling in: N/A, turn it into: non elemental.
  
  
• Telekinesis Moving: First of all change the type of the spell into one, considering what you have written down do you mean to do damage with the movement of the item or simply moving things around? A moving spell like this can only be supplementary, so you can't do damage with it. Please change that. If you meant to do damage, you would have to rewrite the spell.
  Second of all considering the motion, you can only move it once, unless you make a clear motion everytime you move the item. So change that, and add a clear motion that will be used every time you move the item again (it could be the same original movement).
  Third of all just a tip for the future, you can't move around player base items, so mention that you can move; non-player based items and that you can only move the items with the size of 1 x 1 meters (the size of the spell) ;)
  
  
• Telekinetic energy shield: First of all; state a range. Every spell has a range unless it is casted upon the person itself.
  Second of all state the size of the shield and the durability, how much can the shield take?
  
  
• Small Orb Trap: By making an offensive orb and a trap with that orb, you are basically making two spells at once. So pick either of the options. Again, mention the size of the spell. If you split the spell so for example 2 orbs, than the offensive power splits too unless they can only do damage together and are not separated.
  
  
• Blast First of all please fix your code, you miss a [ .
  Alright on to your spell, sending five blasts would mean that you use the spell five times at once. That can't happen because cooldown. So to conclude; add a size to the spell and a motion and remove the five small blasts, unless like before you mean that the blasts can't be separated.
  
  
• Fist Fighter Please fill in the missing information;
  Rank,
  Requirement,
  Range; in case it is on the person, add personal.
  And please add in the description that it's a D-rank buff + the visible movement.
  

Alice Baskerville wrote:Alright let's go :)

• Instead of filling in: N/A, turn it into: non elemental.
  
  
• Telekinesis Moving: First of all change the type of the spell into one, considering what you have written down do you mean to do damage with the movement of the item or simply moving things around? A moving spell like this can only be supplementary, so you can't do damage with it. Please change that. If you meant to do damage, you would have to rewrite the spell.
  Second of all considering the motion, you can only move it once, unless you make a clear motion everytime you move the item. So change that, and add a clear motion that will be used every time you move the item again (it could be the same original movement).
  Third of all just a tip for the future, you can't move around player base items, so mention that you can move; non-player based items and that you can only move the items with the size of 1 x 1 meters (the size of the spell) ;)
  
  
• Telekinetic energy shield: First of all; state a range. Every spell has a range unless it is casted upon the person itself.
  Second of all state the size of the shield and the durability, how much can the shield take?
  
  
• Small Orb Trap: By making an offensive orb and a trap with that orb, you are basically making two spells at once. So pick either of the options. Again, mention the size of the spell. If you split the spell so for example 2 orbs, than the offensive power splits too unless they can only do damage together and are not separated.
  
  
• Blast First of all please fix your code, you miss a [ .
  Alright on to your spell, sending five blasts would mean that you use the spell five times at once. That can't happen because cooldown. So to conclude; add a size to the spell and a motion and remove the five small blasts, unless like before you mean that the blasts can't be separated.
  
  
• Fist Fighter Please fill in the missing information;
  Rank,
  Requirement,
  Range; in case it is on the person, add personal.
  And please add in the description that it's a D-rank buff + the visible movement.
  

• Telekinesis moving:Your spell can't be instant and sustained, because of the movement it can be instant.
  
  
• Telekinetic energy shield: Mention the size of your spell and change "magical and physical attacks about 20 hits from a another D- class 2 hits and C-,B-,A-,and S class its one hit till I upgrade it" to; has a durability of a C-rank.
  
  
• small Orb trap: Again mention the size of the orb and considering it is an orb, it can only do blunt damage.
  
  
• Blast: Again state the size of the blast, keep in mind the AoE sizes and your spell can't do 2 D-rank damage, it can do only 1. So your blast does D-rank piercing damage.
  
  
• Fist Fighter: You forgot to fill in the rank of your spell.
  And I made a small mistake you don't have to add 5+ just say it does a D-rank strength boost and last; remove the damage, your spell is a strength buff not an offensive spell, so it doesn't do any damage.
  

• shield: still needs a size.
  
• Blast: still needs a size.
  
• Fist fight: you still need to fill in the rank of the spell.

Alice Baskerville wrote:I am sorry perhaps I wasn't clear enough but the size of your shield still is 5 feet x 5 feet. This needs to be smaller. That's the last thing though!