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#1Kali 

Zero Wave Starters Empty Fri Jan 11, 2019 3:25 am

Kali
Name: Zero Wave: Fist
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Zero Wave
Type: Offensive
Element: Water
Range: 05 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Faye makes a punching motion at the end of which a blue magic circle appears in front of her fist. Her fist glows a subtle blue before a mass of water around 0.25m big in the shape of a fist is launched 5m into the direction it is pointed at. It deals D rank damage.


Name: Zero Wave: Flow
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Zero Wave
Type: Offensive
Element: Water
Range: 05 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Faye swiped her hand in a single direction and a magic circle is instantly activated. Following the direction of her movement, a wave of water 0.25m long rises up at a max range of 5m mimicking the direction of Faye's hand movement and is not controlled. Upon contact, it deals D rank cutting damage on the enemy.


Name: Zero Wave: Push
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Zero Wave
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 05 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant  
Effect: Faye puts her hands together and makes a pushing motion, triggering a blue magic circle at the end of her outstretched hands. A transparent wave of water .25m wide and high pushes the targe back to the max spell range at the target's lunge speed.


Name: Zero Wave: Heal
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 50
Requirements: Zero Wave
Type: Healing
Element: Water
Range: Other
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Faye points at a target as a blue magic circle, 5cm big, flies towards him/her. Its trajectory can be controlled with additional mana cost. On contact, the magic circle dissipates into blue sparkling dust that heals D rank damage off that person.



Last edited by Faye on Fri Jan 11, 2019 7:16 am; edited 4 times in total



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#2Akira Shimada 

Zero Wave Starters Empty Fri Jan 11, 2019 4:13 am

Akira Shimada
Hey there! I'll be reviewing your spells!
In general, you don't need to state the speed of your spell, that is usually just assumed and not stated since it may be subject to change.

  • Zero Wave: Fist - Can you state that the fist does D-Rank damage?
  • Zero Wave: Flow - Could you clarify if you intend to control the trajectory of your spell with your motion? Or if the wave just mimics the motion of your swipe?
  • Zero Wave: Push - Could you give the dimensions of this wave? Additionally the push effect will be at the lunge speed of the target and to the max range of the spell.
  • Zero Wave: Heal - Can you add the dimensions of the blue circle? Also, quick note, unless controlled, the spell will travel in a straight line towards the indicated location/target.

Bump when edited!



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#3Kali 

Zero Wave Starters Empty Fri Jan 11, 2019 7:09 am

Kali
Bump. Hope that clarifies everything.



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#4Akira Shimada 

Zero Wave Starters Empty Fri Jan 11, 2019 7:19 am

Akira Shimada
These spells have been approved for use.



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