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#1Levi Mahlet † 

Smoldering Heart Starters [Done] Empty Mon Jan 14, 2019 12:07 pm

Levi Mahlet †
Name: The Smoldering Heart of Malhet
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: The Smoldering Heart of Malhet
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Levi bites down upon a finger of her choosing, breaking the skin and causing her blood to drop to the ground as she proceeds to point said finger in the direction of a target or location, causing a Magic seal to appear before her. Before reaching the ground, the droplets of blood burn away via Levi's Magic, thereby causing a rune having a diameter of 1 meter to appear at the location in which she had pointed towards, provided that the target is within the maximum range of this spell. Upon this rune appearing, a pillar of fire will emerge from it at spell speed, having the same diameter and height as the rune's diameter, dealing D-Rank damage to anyone who is present upon the emergence of the pillar of fire, or otherwise come within contact of it.

Name: Heartburn
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: The Smoldering Heart of Malhet
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Levi licks a finger of her choosing, from which her saliva evaporates into a small rune to appear before her. Upon a swipe of the finger which she used to initially trigger this spell, it will cause a flame no greater than 0.25 meters in total diameter to appear and instantly erupt into a blast which will cover a maximum diameter of 1 meter in front of Levi, dealing D-Rank damage to anyone who is caught within the blast.

Name: The Reaching Flames
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: The Smoldering Heart of Malhet
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Levi spits on the ground, the saliva combining with her own Magical energies before it reaches the ground, burning up into a small flame as it reaches the ground, creating a small rune at where it would have reached the ground, from which a flame having a diameter of 0.25 meters will begin travelling towards in a straight line based upon what direction spit, moving at speed spell up to the maximum distance, causing a trail of flame to run along the ground which travels forward until either coming into contact with a target or upon reaching its maximum distance. At which point, the starting flame will explode into a violent blaze having a maximum diameter of 1 meter which will deal D-Rank damage to anyone in its path, or otherwise come into contact with it upon its initial blast. Upon this spell detonating, it will begin its cooldown.

Name: Charred Heart
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: The Smoldering Heart of Malhet
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Levi blows a kiss in the direction of a target, generating a Magic rune to appear from which a small flame no larger than 0.25 meters will appear and will be projected outwards at speed speed for the maximum distance of the spell, exploding upon either contact, clenching the same hand in which she used to use to trigger the spell, or reaching the maximum range, exploding into a cloud of smoldering ash having a diameter of 1 meter, causing anyone who is present within the cloud to suffer from D-Rank damage, or otherwise come into contact with the cloud. Upon this cloud appearing and dealing initial damage to any amount of targets, it will begin its cooldown.



Last edited by Levi Mahlet on Wed Jan 16, 2019 9:23 am; edited 9 times in total

#2Akira Shimada 

Smoldering Heart Starters [Done] Empty Tue Jan 15, 2019 4:44 am

Akira Shimada
Hey there, I'll be reviewing your spells. Class modifiers will be applied when casting the spell in the topic. Here, the spells must follow the typical size and range for its rank. So, for D-ranks, the range will be 5 meters, maximum projectile dimension is 0.25 meters, and maximum AoE dimenion is 1 meter. Edit the spells accordingly, additionally:

  • The Smoldering Heart of Mahlet: The spell motion must indicate the location where the spell originates. Add the height of the pillar. Mention that upon dealing the damage, the spell will go into cooldown. You may not sustain the spell to deal damage over and over in multiple posts.

  • Heartburn: The swipe of the finger should indicate the direction towards which the spell shoots. Also, the spell cannot move in its AoE state. It can, however, move in its projectile form and then blast into an AoE upon impact or another trigger motion.

  • The Reaching Flames: Mention that upon dealing the damage, the flames will extinguish and the spell will go into cooldown.

  • Charred Heart: Mention that upon dealing the damage, the cloud will disappear and the spell will go into cooldown.

Bump when edited!



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#3Levi Mahlet † 

Smoldering Heart Starters [Done] Empty Tue Jan 15, 2019 11:02 am

Levi Mahlet †
Spells updated accordingly.

#4Akira Shimada 

Smoldering Heart Starters [Done] Empty Tue Jan 15, 2019 12:25 pm

Akira Shimada
Since all the spells are AoE spells, please change their duration to instant, since AoE spells cannot be sustained. Forgot to mention this but please add the presence of the magic circles and additionally:


  • The Smoldering Heart of Mahlet: Approval ready upon change in duration and addition of the magic seal.

  • Heartburn: AoE spells cannot move in their AoE form. Please edit the spell accordingly, along with the duration and the presence of a seal.

  • The Reaching Flames: Approval ready upon change in duration and the addition of the magic seal.

  • Charred Heart: Add the dimensions of the small flame that is blown with a kiss along with the edits to the duration and the seal.


Bump when edited!



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#5Levi Mahlet † 

Smoldering Heart Starters [Done] Empty Tue Jan 15, 2019 1:03 pm

Levi Mahlet †
Spells edited accordingly.

#6Akira Shimada 

Smoldering Heart Starters [Done] Empty Tue Jan 15, 2019 11:17 pm

Akira Shimada

  • The Smoldering Heart of Mahlet: Approved

  • Heartburn: Since your spell's trajectory is altered after you have cast the spell, this will fall under the 'controlled spells' category and therefore will require double the mana cost. Please add that the fire ball around you will move to the swiped location in its 0.25 meter form and not the AoE form. Also note, if you move, the fire ball will not continue circling around you and move with you.

  • The Reaching Flames: Approved

  • Charred Heart: Approved

Bump when edited!



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#7Levi Mahlet † 

Smoldering Heart Starters [Done] Empty Wed Jan 16, 2019 7:22 am

Levi Mahlet †
Spells changed accordingly.

#8Akira Shimada 

Smoldering Heart Starters [Done] Empty Wed Jan 16, 2019 9:26 am

Akira Shimada
These spells have been approved for use.



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