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Kairos's Starter Spells

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#1Kairos Narcissa 

Kairos's Starter Spells Empty Fri Aug 09, 2019 11:31 pm

Kairos Narcissa
Name: Aspect of Mercury
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hardest Apostolica
Type: Buff
Element: Arcane
Range: 0 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Bouncing on his feet, Kairos firmly plants his feet on the ground. This causes a familiar burst of golden magic to escape from his body and culminate around his legs. Afterwards, his speed is increased. (D-Rank Buff to Speed.)

Name: Aspect of Mars
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hardest Apostolica
Type: Buff
Element: Arcane
Range: 0 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Slamming his fists together, a burst of golden magic erupts from his body and coats his hands and forearms. Afterwards, his strength is increased. (D-Rank Buff to Strength)

Name: Aspect of Vulcan
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hardest Apostolica
Type: Buff
Element: Arcane
Range: 0 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Crossing his arms across his chest and focusing for a moment, a golden eruption of magic comes from his body and lingers around him like a veil, increasing his endurance. (D-Rank Buff to Endurance)



Last edited by Kairos Narcissa on Mon Aug 12, 2019 2:46 am; edited 1 time in total

#2Vali Onfroy † 

Kairos's Starter Spells Empty Mon Aug 12, 2019 1:23 am

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Yo Kairos, I'll be reviewing your start spells my friend.

  • Aspect of Victoria: Firstly, Only one attribute may be buffed with a spell so multiple buffs using one spell is a nogo. Remove "(+2 to each)" You only need to write that the spell gives a D rank buff to an attribute.

  • Aspect of Mercury: Remove "(+6 to speed)". As stated before, you only need to write that the spell gives a D rank buff to speed. Keep in mind that D rank buffing spells always increase an attribute by 5. Classes and other bonuses from other things are kept out of spell descriptions and are instead mentioned upon use.

  • Aspect of Mars: Remove "(+6 to strength)", refer to above.

  • Aspect of Vulcan: Same as above ^.


Bump when edits are made.

#3Kairos Narcissa 

Kairos's Starter Spells Empty Mon Aug 12, 2019 2:46 am

Kairos Narcissa
Dropped off Aspect of Victoria and edited the other three accordingly!

#4Vali Onfroy † 

Kairos's Starter Spells Empty Mon Aug 12, 2019 2:51 am

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You still have one free starter spell, my friend. Guessing you'll make it later.

These starter spells are approved.

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