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#1Noel 

Gravity Magic Spells | (2XA) (2XB) (1XC) Empty Thu Mar 05, 2020 3:34 pm

Noel

Name: Kamehameha
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Gravity Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Wind
Range: 20 meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user will release a concentrated beam of gravity at their intended target, dealing A ranked damage upon impact. To activate the spell, the user must charge their limb at their intended target. So, if he the user desired to fire a beam from their arm, they'd have to mimic throwing a left or right hook. Leg beams require kick wind-ups. A magic seal will hover over their limb and release a singular beam which instantly explodes on impact creating a 8 meter in diameter blast.


Name: Wingardium Leviosa
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Gravity Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Wind
Range: 20 meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: One of the grandest of telekinetic abilities, the user levitates many objects around himself that he may control at the direction of either one hand. These objects must remain within twenty meters of the user, and will deal damage upon impact upon another player. A white glow surrounds these objects, indicating that they have been enchanted. The amount of different objects that the user may levitate depends on the limitation of the rank. So that means that if the user levitates 2 objects they'd deal B ranked damage upon impact, 4 objects dealing C ranked damage and 8 objects dealing D ranked damage. If the user simply choses to empower one object, that object will deal A ranked damage upon impact. This spell is activated by the user raising both hands into the air with his palm facing upwards. The objects are moved by either one of the users hands giving figurative directions. This spell can output a maximum of A ranked damage each post it is sustained, the levitating effect doesn't stop after this threshold has been hit, the user can still direct the movements of the enchanted objects.




Name: Smokescreen
Rank: B
Mana Cost: 100
Requirements: Gravity Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Wind
Range: 15 meters
Cooldown: 3 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user will release a concentrated beam of gravity at their intended target, dealing C ranked damage upon impact. To activate the spell, the user must punch the air with either one arm. This spell is an area of effect spell, covering everything 8-meters outwards of the user into the direction the users punch was aimed at. The user may freely choose the place from where the spell starts, as long as it's within fifteen meters of the user. A large magic circle covers the area that's targeted by the spell.





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#2Venus Rosé 

Gravity Magic Spells | (2XA) (2XB) (1XC) Empty Sun Mar 08, 2020 7:45 pm

Venus Rosé

Kamehameha: Approved.

Deflection: Please specify the maximum rank of the spell that you can deflect.

Bump when done.



#3Noel 

Gravity Magic Spells | (2XA) (2XB) (1XC) Empty Mon Mar 09, 2020 1:55 pm

Noel

Venus Rosé wrote:Kamehameha: Approved.

Deflection: Please specify the maximum rank of the spell that you can deflect.

Bump when done.

I'm sorry, I added some additional spells I hope that's alright. Kamehameha's the same, added a bit in Deflection making it able to deflect A ranked spells.

#4Venus Rosé 

Gravity Magic Spells | (2XA) (2XB) (1XC) Empty Tue Mar 10, 2020 5:33 am

Venus Rosé

Wingardium Leviosa: As long as you're aware that the spell can only do 1 A-Rank damage per post, this is fine.

Deflection: Since the rank of your spell is B-Rank, you'd only be able to deflect up to 1 B-Rank spell.

Smokescreen: The purpose of the spell is to hinder their vision, so the spell type should be 'Supplementary'. You have 16-meters stated in the description of the spell: since it's an AoE, the smokescreen would only take up the space of 4-meter diameter and 15 meters would be the range of how far your spell can travel.


The user will release a concentrated beam of gravity at their intended target, dealing D ranked damage upon impact.


I'm also not sure what this is for.

Clear Weather: As this is a C-Rank spell, the range should be specified as 10 meters. Please also state the size of the gap, which should be in a 2-meter diameter.

Bump when done.



#5Noel 

Gravity Magic Spells | (2XA) (2XB) (1XC) Empty Tue Mar 10, 2020 1:09 pm

Noel

Wingardium Leviosa: As long as you're aware that the spell can only do 1 A-Rank damage per post, this is fine.

Yes, I shall edit my spell to clarify upon that

Deflection: Since the rank of your spell is B-Rank, you'd only be able to deflect up to 1 B-Rank spell.

I'm scrapping the spell since that's the case

Smokescreen: The purpose of the spell is to hinder their vision, so the spell type should be 'Supplementary'. You have 16-meters stated in the description of the spell: since it's an AoE, the smokescreen would only take up the space of 4-meter diameter and 15 meters would be the range of how far your spell can travel.


The user will release a concentrated beam of gravity at their intended target, dealing D ranked damage upon impact.

I'm also not sure what this is for.

Spell regulations wrote:Area of Effect: Spells that are not projectiles, cones or even direct lines but instead cover a radius will be considered AoE spells.

AoE Size: The maximum area an AoE spell can cover is limited by its rank, and are as follows:

D-Rank AoE: 1-Meter Diameter
C-Rank AoE: 2-Meter Diameter
B-Rank AoE: 4-Meter Diameter
A-Rank AoE: 8-Meter Diameter
S-Rank AoE: 16-Meter Diameter

You may increase the size of your spell’s AoE to that of next rank, but it’s power will be reduced by one rank.

So this B rank instead of having 4 meter diameter and B rank damage across its effective area, I've instead increased it's AoE range to 16 meter, sacrificing 2 tiers of damage (D rank). The way I am going to use this spell is offensively, but the effects can be interpreted as supplementary. That's why it does D ranked damage across the described surface. So it physically breaks the ground apart etc.
I think I've received similar feedback to another AoE spell I've created in the past--should I clarify on this more thoroughly in the spell?



Clear Weather: As this is a C-Rank spell, the range should be specified as 10 meters. Please also state the size of the gap, which should be in a 2-meter diameter.

Bump when done.

Wouldn't that mean that my character has to be standing within 10 meters of the clouds covering the sky for this spell to work? (They're usually 3000m+ in the air) Scrapping this spell too if that's the case, unless maybe under the stipulation that this spell only works in non combat scenarios?

#6Noel 

Gravity Magic Spells | (2XA) (2XB) (1XC) Empty Wed Mar 11, 2020 4:09 pm

Noel

Bump

#7Venus Rosé 

Gravity Magic Spells | (2XA) (2XB) (1XC) Empty Thu Mar 12, 2020 2:10 am

Venus Rosé

Smokescreen: You cannot have different spell types in a single spell, so you'd either to need to make the spell 'Supplementary' or 'Offensive'.

Bump when done.



#8Noel 

Gravity Magic Spells | (2XA) (2XB) (1XC) Empty Thu Mar 12, 2020 2:20 am

Noel

Bump!

#9Venus Rosé 

Gravity Magic Spells | (2XA) (2XB) (1XC) Empty Thu Mar 12, 2020 9:43 pm

Venus Rosé

These spells have been approved for training.



#10Noel 

Gravity Magic Spells | (2XA) (2XB) (1XC) Empty Thu Mar 19, 2020 8:19 am

Noel

Trained Kamehamehad & Wingardium Leviosa & Smokescreen here: https://www.fairytailrp.com/t53274-dance-to-remember-training-vali#457677

#11Venus Rosé 

Gravity Magic Spells | (2XA) (2XB) (1XC) Empty Fri Mar 20, 2020 1:22 am

Venus Rosé

These spells have been approved for usage.



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