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#1Sofia 

Heavenly Body Starters Empty Wed Apr 08, 2020 12:18 pm

Sofia

Heavenly Body Magic Details

Name: Astris
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Heavenly Body Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Light
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Kicking her foot backward, Sofia generates a white magic circle that creates a shower of light from it ,which propels her rapidly in a direction of her choosing at dash speed. She can dash up to 10 meters.

Name: Libra
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Heavenly Body Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Light
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Thrusting her heel, Sofia creates a white magic circle which propels her in a different direction, redirecting her momentum.

Name: Polaris
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Heavenly Body Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Light
Range: 10 meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Jumping on the spot, Sofia creates a pair of white magical circles beneath her feet that allow her to tread safely on any surface such as water or up walls for up to 10 meters if she needs to.



Last edited by Sofia Serena on Sat May 30, 2020 9:45 am; edited 4 times in total

#2Aegis 

Heavenly Body Starters Empty Thu Apr 09, 2020 6:11 pm

Aegis

Astris: Needs to state the movement speed

Cassiopeia: This is an instant, this can not be used more then once. This also can not be recast as it has a 1 post cooldown. Thus max of one can be placed and used. The magic circle would have 1xD-Rank durability

Polaris: This is alright, but must take the lava part out as this spell type allows you to walk on these, but does not protect from them. Thus you would still get burned from the heat in this example.

#3Sofia 

Heavenly Body Starters Empty Mon Apr 13, 2020 9:07 am

Sofia

I've edited the other two but for Cassiopeia the spell is largely based on this one from Snowflake/Venus's Frost Demon Slayer starter spells

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So yeah, what with it being an approved spell there, under the same mechanics as my spell, I have to object.

#4Kon 
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Heavenly Body Starters Empty Mon Apr 13, 2020 10:52 am

Kon

Hi Sofia, I'll be taking over from grading your spells from here on out, the spell which you have used as a sample was unfortunately graded incorrectly on my behalf and will be pulled. As a result Aegis' original comments of: "This is an instant, this can not be used more than once. This also can not be recast as it has a 1 post cooldown. Thus max of one can be placed and used. The magic circle would have 1xD-Rank durability." are still relevant. The spell you have highlighted will be pulled and regraded.

#5Sofia 

Heavenly Body Starters Empty Sat May 30, 2020 8:27 am

Sofia

Hahahah, I forgot I hadn't finished dealing with this, I decided to drop Cassiopeia as a spell and save the slot for later inspiration, which hopefully means these are good to go?

#6Jan Ren 

Heavenly Body Starters Empty Sat May 30, 2020 10:00 am

Jan Ren
These spells has been approved.



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