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Shinkuu Magic, First Fang [Starters]

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#1Raymus Kouris 

Shinkuu Magic, First Fang [Starters] Empty Thu Jun 25, 2020 5:40 pm

Raymus Kouris
Name: Raiju's Shining Spark
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Shinkuu Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Lightning
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: instant
Effect: By tapping his foot producing Magic circles that shoot bolts of lightning to propel him towards the direction he wishes to move. By controlling his own balance and momentum, he can make use of these changes in acceleration to quickly move at dash speeed in the direction of his choosing. He can move up to 5 meters at once.

Name: Raiju's Swift Paws
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25/25
Requirements: Shinkuu Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Lightning
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: By rolling his ankle, magic circles will appear under the soles of his feet or shoes. Both his feet will then be coated in a thin layer of electricity. This will enable Raymus to glide over surfaces such as ice or water and even up walls.

Name: Raiju's Starving Pounce
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Shinkuu Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Lightning
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: While moving, Raymus taps a foot. This produces a magic circle opposite his chosen direction, blasting electricity from his body, to propel him where he wants to move. This allows him to redirect his momentum into a different direction.

Name: Raiju's Thunderous Snarl
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Shinkuu Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Lightning
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: instant
Effect: By opening his mouth, a magic seal 1 meter in diameter anywhere in a 5 meter range which unleashes a blast of lightning, knocking the target up to 5 meters in the chosen direction. Aftereard the lightning will dissipate. It deals no damage.



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#2Jan Ren 

Shinkuu Magic, First Fang [Starters] Empty Fri Jun 26, 2020 4:40 am

Jan Ren
Hey there!

Raiju's Several Fangs: The concept is nice, but not really usable as a Berserker. You'd be limited strictly to touch-based offensive spells, even if supplemented by... well, supplementary spells. You'd need to revise it.

Raiju's Piercing Claws: Physical attacks can not pierce armor. Please revise this one as well.

The other two are fine!
Post again in Spell Review when done!



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#3Raymus Kouris 

Shinkuu Magic, First Fang [Starters] Empty Sat Jun 27, 2020 1:12 pm

Raymus Kouris
Fixed



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#4Jan Ren 

Shinkuu Magic, First Fang [Starters] Empty Mon Jun 29, 2020 9:52 am

Jan Ren
These spells have been approved.



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