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Yuki's Starting Spells

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#1Yuki Mori 

Yuki's Starting Spells Empty Thu Sep 17, 2020 5:06 pm

Yuki Mori
Name: Ira
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Shadow Judgement
Type: Offensive
Element: Darkness
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Yuki points her finger on her target sending a wave of shadow energy towards the target’s position. The shadow energy travels on the ground and once it reaches her foe, a 0.25 m diameter spell circle would activate below the target and encase it in a darkness pillar dealing minor (D-Rank) darkness damage.

Name: Inertia
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25/25
Requirements: Shadow Judgement
Type: Debuff (Strength)
Element: Darkness
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Yuki forms a fist and extends her hand towards her target. A wave of shadow energy travels on the ground towards the target’s position and once the destination is reached, a 0.25 m diameter spell circle forms on the ground, releasing snake figures that weakens (D-Rank Strength Debuff) the target.

Name: Invidia
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25/25
Requirements: Shadow Judgement
Type: Supplementary
Element: Darkness
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Yuki clasps her hands together to form a clone beside her to confuse her foe. The clone has a darker complexion, almost purplish to distinguish it from the original. It can move by itself but cannot deal any damage.

Name: Gula
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25/25
Requirements: Shadow Judgement
Type: Debuff (Speed)
Element: Darkness
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustained
Effect: Yuki forms a fist and extends her hand towards her target. A wave of shadow energy travels on the ground towards the target’s position and once the destination is reached, a 0.25 m diameter spell circle forms on the ground, erupting chain-like binds that inflicts the feeling of heaviness (D-Rank Speed Debuff).



Last edited by Jhacis Sivraj on Fri Sep 18, 2020 7:39 pm; edited 2 times in total

#2Masami 

Yuki's Starting Spells Empty Fri Sep 18, 2020 6:38 pm

Masami
Hey! I'll be grading these,

  • Ira: Please state that it deals D-Rank damage upon hit and state the spell's size. For a D-Rank spell, the size should be 0.25-meter diameter maximum.

  • Inertia: Please state that it deals D-Rank Strength Debuff.

  • Invidia: This spell would be considered a Blind Supplementary. In that case, unfortunately, you may only make them if they are A- or S-Rank, so please completely revise this.

  • Gula: Please state that it deals D-Rank Speed Debuff.

Bump when changes have been made!



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#3Yuki Mori 

Yuki's Starting Spells Empty Fri Sep 18, 2020 6:48 pm

Yuki Mori
Bumping for approval.



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#4Masami 

Yuki's Starting Spells Empty Fri Sep 18, 2020 7:00 pm

Masami

  • Invidia: Since this is a D-Rank spell, it would be reasonable if the clone does not share the exact same features as the user, meaning we would like you to mention the clone's appearance in the description, stating altering features. Until further clarification from the other staff members, please state that the clones take form of the user albeit are only shadows for a D-Rank spell. Also, please remove the AoE in the 'Type' section.

The rest of the spells are approved, bump when fixed!



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#5Yuki Mori 

Yuki's Starting Spells Empty Sat Sep 19, 2020 12:13 pm

Yuki Mori
Bumping for approval



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#6Masami 

Yuki's Starting Spells Empty Sat Sep 19, 2020 1:02 pm

Masami
These spells have been approved.



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