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Nature Dragon Slayer

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#1Ryuko 

Nature Dragon Slayer Empty Sat Oct 24, 2020 10:21 am

Ryuko

Name: Blockade
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Nature Dragon Slayer
Type: Defensive
Element: Nature
Range: 20 Meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect:
A spell that is cast by making a pointing gesture into the direction one wants to cast the spell at, once cast a green colored sphere travels toward the spot the user has designated and upon arrival or impact with an approaching person or object transform into a 8 meters wide and tall wall of wood, that is capable of intercepting up to 1 S-rank in damage

Name: Nature's Thorn
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: Nature Dragon Slayer
Type: Offensive
Element: Nature
Range: 20 Meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect:
Created by means of sweeping the hand sideways along the body, the motion allows the user to channel their mana to create a 2 meters long and width spike that is surrounded by razor-sharp thorns, this can then be tossed toward the opponent like a projectile. While this spell is able to be sustained, once it hits the target it goes onto cooldown.

Name: Nature's Embrace
Rank: S
Mana Cost: 500
Requirements: Nature Dragon Slayer
Type: Defensive
Element: Nature
Range: Self
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect:
A defensive spell that is cast by tapping one's foot on the ground, by magical means a collection of flowers seem to gather underneath the user, wrapping their entire body in a defensive armor of sorts to shield them from up to 2 S-rank damage

Name: Twin Thorns
Rank: S
Mana Cost: 500
Requirements: Nature Dragon Slayer
Type: Offensive
Element: Nature
Range: 25 Meters
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect:
A spell that is produced by the user raising a hand to their chest, a collection of two thorny vines will sprout from each of their side that are four meters in width and length and launch toward the opponent, each thorn dealing A-rank damage. While this spell can be sustained, once they hit the target it goes onto cooldown.



Last edited by Esperia on Tue Oct 27, 2020 3:53 pm; edited 2 times in total

#2Masami 

Nature Dragon Slayer Empty Sun Oct 25, 2020 7:27 am

Masami
Hello, I will be reviewing these,

  • Blockade: Approved.

  • Nature's Thorn: The maximum dimension for an A-Rank spell is only 2-meters in diameter; you have written 4-meters, so please change it into the former.

  • Nature's Embrace: Approved.

  • Twin Thorns: The maximum range for an S-Rank spell is 25-meters; you have written 20-meters, but I suggest switching it to the former. At the same time, change the cooldown into 5 Posts as an S-Rank spell.

Bump when changes have been made!



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#3Ryuko 

Nature Dragon Slayer Empty Mon Oct 26, 2020 12:33 pm

Ryuko

edits made as requested~

#4Masami 

Nature Dragon Slayer Empty Tue Oct 27, 2020 4:55 am

Masami
  • Nature's Thorn: Please state the width of the spike.

  • Twin Thorns: Please state the measurements of the vines. Despite dealing A-Rank damage, the measurements may reach S-Rank dimensions.

Bump when edits have been made.



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#5Ryuko 

Nature Dragon Slayer Empty Tue Oct 27, 2020 3:53 pm

Ryuko

bump as requested~

#6Masami 

Nature Dragon Slayer Empty Tue Oct 27, 2020 8:25 pm

Masami
These spells have been approved for training.



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#7Ryuko 

Nature Dragon Slayer Empty Fri Nov 13, 2020 6:07 pm

Ryuko

buying all those spells for 900,000j please~

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