King Of Destruction

**Ghost** · Mon Jan 25, 2021 4:11 am

Jewels :

1,453,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

541,500

Reputation :

4,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

sub zero

Strength :

70

Speed :

169

Constitution :

6

Endurance :

12

Intelligence :

54

Mana :

2800

Weapon :

Great Katana

Companion :

Rayne

Name: Crash
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Crash Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Ghost will hold out a hand. The grey magical circle will appear. The size of the circle is .25 meters As he activates his CRASH MAGIC. Which will send out a shock wave invisible to the naked eye. The shock wave is 0.25 meters in diameter. If an opponent is hit by it, it will do C-rank damage and knock the opponent back 10 meters.

Name: Crash Punch
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Crash Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: Touch
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user will ball up a fist coated with magic as the magic circle appears which it's size will be 0.25 and then he will strike at the target, doing C-rank damage to them and knocking them back 10 meters. This is done as he uses his Crash Magic to give the punch extra power.

Name: The Power Of The Saint
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Crash Magic
Type: Offense
Element: Arcane
Range: Touch
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user touches an inanimate ( sword shields etc)object with their hand, and the magical circle appears. The circle size is .25 meters Using his Crash Magic, he will then send an invisible shock wave with a 0.25 meter diameter through it at point blank range doing causing C rank damage to said object(s)

Name: Delayed Impact
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Crash Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Arcane
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user will clap their hands together. A 0.25 meter magic circle will form. Then 0.25 meter wave of Crash magic will blast out of the user's hands causing the target hit by this spell to take C-rank Damage and be knocked back 10 meters.

Last edited by Ghost on Thu Dec 02, 2021 3:48 pm; edited 22 times in total

**Ghost** · Mon Jan 25, 2021 4:11 am

Jewels :

1,453,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

541,500

Reputation :

4,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

sub zero

Strength :

70

Speed :

169

Constitution :

6

Endurance :

12

Intelligence :

54

Mana :

2800

Weapon :

Great Katana

Companion :

Rayne

Bump Bump a

**Mikajia** · Mon Jan 25, 2021 7:27 am

Epithet :

The Pale Horse

Guild :

Crawling Chaos

Jewels :

2,526,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Daemon

Experience :

632,750

Reputation :

14,800

Class :

Hunter

Aura :

Emperor

Magic :

Enhanced Chain Magic

Strength :

136

Speed :

35

Constitution :

43

Endurance :

49

Intelligence :

263

Mana :

3,400

Head :

Magatama

Body :

Elder Hunter's Coat

You have created a new topic for these spells, and fixed their ranks. That's good. However, it's abundantly clear, that you still haven't read through the Spell & Magic Regulations. If you would like a member of staff to read through and edit and approve your spells, then it is required of you to actually read the regulations I just linked. It would not be fair in the slightest for any of us to fix your spells for you, simply because you didn't want to read the regulations like everyone else on the site, that has submitted spells for review. And lastly, because it's not all that clear in the regulations, I'll tell you this, as a D-Rank mage, you get four free D-Rank spells, and you have access to one C-Rank spell slot. If you want to make a C-Rank spell, you'll have to submit a different topic for that specific spell. If it gets approved, you then have to train it in a training topic, or purchase it.

Because you have been told twice now by me to read the regulations and fix your spells appropriately, and have completely ignored the edits given to you by the last staff member, if it is clear that you haven't done as I have suggested here, there will be consequences. Save yourself and staff the trouble please, and simply just read through the regulations.

The reason I know you haven't, or reasons rather, are simple. I'll give you three here:

Requirement
Mana Cost
Damage

There are more issues with your spells than those I just listed, but those are the most obvious. If you had read the regulations, you would know this yourself, and have already fixed them.

**Ghost** · Mon Jan 25, 2021 4:47 pm

Jewels :

1,453,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

541,500

Reputation :

4,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

sub zero

Strength :

70

Speed :

169

Constitution :

6

Endurance :

12

Intelligence :

54

Mana :

2800

Weapon :

Great Katana

Companion :

Rayne

Yeah that's on me I posted the wrong load bank. But the new one up. I have went thorough all the rules. I think I meet the requirements and change things up to reflect it all. This should be ready for review

**Mikajia** · Mon Jan 25, 2021 5:25 pm

Epithet :

The Pale Horse

Guild :

Crawling Chaos

Jewels :

2,526,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Daemon

Experience :

632,750

Reputation :

14,800

Class :

Hunter

Aura :

Emperor

Magic :

Enhanced Chain Magic

Strength :

136

Speed :

35

Constitution :

43

Endurance :

49

Intelligence :

263

Mana :

3,400

Head :

Magatama

Body :

Elder Hunter's Coat

You've adjusted the mana cost appropriately, and you have mentioned the magic circle in three of your spells, but not the fourth. However, you've also not fixed the bit about the Requirements. That is something that Venus told you repeatedly to fix when you made your first spells. Just because you switched magic, does not mean that you go back to doing the same thing. And if you had looked through the spell crafting template, it would have even told you what to place there. Continuing to do something that you were told not to do several times, displays a blatant disregard for the regulations. This is not difficult information to find. It is given to you. You could even easily look at someone else's spells for an example.

Tiers are used for describing Attributes and the bonuses they provide, they have nothing to do with a spell's damage or potency. You have even used a type of measurement for your spells that isn't used anywhere at all on the site, or listed at any point in any of the regulations.

You at least have the range and dimension of the spells correct, however, you have the dimensions listed in the range section. Somewhere they obviously don't belong.

Considering you have the correct numbers listed for mana cost, range and dimensions of spells, I'm willing to believe that you looked through the regulations. However, considering you still have several mistakes and have continued to ignore an exceedingly simple fix, I also believe that you only very briefly looked through them. Read them again. Thoroughly. They will tell you everything you need to fix your spells. You're not doing yourself any favors by continuing to not do this simple thing.

**Ghost** · Wed Jan 27, 2021 7:28 pm

Jewels :

1,453,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

541,500

Reputation :

4,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

sub zero

Strength :

70

Speed :

169

Constitution :

6

Endurance :

12

Intelligence :

54

Mana :

2800

Weapon :

Great Katana

Companion :

Rayne

Ok that should do it XD

**Aegis** · Wed Feb 10, 2021 5:07 pm

Jewels :

815,000

Rank :

A-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

435,000

Reputation :

8,700

Class :

Spellsword

Strength :

24

Speed :

38

Constitution :

3

Endurance :

79

Intelligence :

251

Mana :

4,000

Head :

Predator

Body :

Mercenary Vest

Ring :

Maraq's Ring V4

Modification :

Medusa's Pertifying Eye

Pouch :

1x Mysterious Merchant's Mercantilism,

Hello there, i'll be taking over your spell review.

First and foremost, as a Berserker your offensive spells cannot be ranged, and must be touch/coating. "Normal: Offensive - Touch-based Only"

**Ghost** · Wed Feb 10, 2021 7:31 pm

Jewels :

1,453,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

541,500

Reputation :

4,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

sub zero

Strength :

70

Speed :

169

Constitution :

6

Endurance :

12

Intelligence :

54

Mana :

2800

Weapon :

Great Katana

Companion :

Rayne

I know I am working on changing my class now and J am aware that my spells will be locked until I do... Just need the ok for them.

**Aegis** · Fri Feb 12, 2021 6:31 pm

Jewels :

815,000

Rank :

A-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

435,000

Reputation :

8,700

Class :

Spellsword

Strength :

24

Speed :

38

Constitution :

3

Endurance :

79

Intelligence :

251

Mana :

4,000

Head :

Predator

Body :

Mercenary Vest

Ring :

Maraq's Ring V4

Modification :

Medusa's Pertifying Eye

Pouch :

1x Mysterious Merchant's Mercantilism,

I asked an admin to make sure, but you cannot make new spells that conflict with your class. Once the class changes done I can go through and get them done.

**Karisa** · Thu Mar 04, 2021 5:19 pm

Epithet :

Megami

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

27,042,500

Rank :

S-rank

Race :

Ōtsutsuki

Experience :

750,000

Reputation :

54,600

Class :

Hunter

Magic :

Loki, the God of Mischief

Strength :

421

Speed :

6

Constitution :

181

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

31

Mana :

2700

Weapon :

Head :

Body :

Ring :

Companion :

Raijin's Puppet: Offline

Pouch :

TAL-RASHA'S AGEING KEY ↂ, Eternal Bond [Partner:Dae-Seong]

The user has 48 hours to reply to their spell thread notifying that they still wish to finish their spells before it becomes archived.

**Ghost** · Mon Mar 22, 2021 1:59 pm

Jewels :

1,453,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

541,500

Reputation :

4,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

sub zero

Strength :

70

Speed :

169

Constitution :

6

Endurance :

12

Intelligence :

54

Mana :

2800

Weapon :

Great Katana

Companion :

Rayne

Ummm the thing is I need to change the class over

**Ghost** · Wed Nov 03, 2021 12:48 pm

Jewels :

1,453,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

541,500

Reputation :

4,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

sub zero

Strength :

70

Speed :

169

Constitution :

6

Endurance :

12

Intelligence :

54

Mana :

2800

Weapon :

Great Katana

Companion :

Rayne

Alright I got the right class n things are fixed up n ready for review

https://www.fairytailrp.com/t53213p50-elysian-potion-500000j#517381

**Tempris** · Tue Nov 30, 2021 9:06 am

Epithet :

Herald of Rapture

Guild :

Rune Knight

Threat :

Danger

Jewels :

2,117,500

Rank :

S-rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

1,161,875

Reputation :

20,400

Class :

Cleric

Aura :

The Fool

Magic :

Holy Flame of Illumin

Strength :

502

Speed :

121

Constitution :

148

Endurance :

72

Intelligence :

188

Mana :

3,200

Weapon Mastery :

Novice - Sword

Weapon :

Jeanne d'Arc's Sword

Head :

Black Plague Mask

Body :

Rainbow Robe

Cape :

Eshiga's Sentinel Cape

Ring :

Sea Dragon King's Coil

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Pouch :

Tal-Rasha's Wardrobe Key Wardrobe Key, Tal-Rasha's Palace Key, Anonymity Scowl

Hello, sorry for the long delay. Your spells are super simple so im sure we can get this done after one round.

1st,
all your spells need the size of the magic circles (which is .25 meters)

2nd,
your last three spells would be considered touch. not 5 meter range spells. It will not be hard to fix this if you want them to be range. Otherwise, please change the range to touch. Else it will look like you can just punch people 5 meters away from you.

3rd,
you need to add a magic circle on your 2nd and 4th spell.

Assuming you make the changes requested, your spells should be good.

Send me a PM on the site or DM me at ZombieDesu#8867 on discord when you make the edits. Your spells are my top priority so lets get these processed

**Ghost** · Tue Nov 30, 2021 11:53 pm

Jewels :

1,453,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

541,500

Reputation :

4,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

sub zero

Strength :

70

Speed :

169

Constitution :

6

Endurance :

12

Intelligence :

54

Mana :

2800

Weapon :

Great Katana

Companion :

Rayne

alright changes are made

**Tempris** · Wed Dec 01, 2021 7:00 am

Epithet :

Herald of Rapture

Guild :

Rune Knight

Threat :

Danger

Jewels :

2,117,500

Rank :

S-rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

1,161,875

Reputation :

20,400

Class :

Cleric

Aura :

The Fool

Magic :

Holy Flame of Illumin

Strength :

502

Speed :

121

Constitution :

148

Endurance :

72

Intelligence :

188

Mana :

3,200

Weapon Mastery :

Novice - Sword

Weapon :

Jeanne d'Arc's Sword

Head :

Black Plague Mask

Body :

Rainbow Robe

Cape :

Eshiga's Sentinel Cape

Ring :

Sea Dragon King's Coil

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Pouch :

Tal-Rasha's Wardrobe Key Wardrobe Key, Tal-Rasha's Palace Key, Anonymity Scowl

Your second spell needs to have the magic circle appear before you coat your arm in magic not after attacking. Remember, its Gesture, Magic circle, Magic

So you ball up your fist, magic circle appear, then you punch and unleash your magic

Only other issue is the grammar on your last spell. I wont deny the app because of it. but I recommend going over it one more time.

Send me a PM on the site or DM me at ZombieDesu#8867 on discord when you make the edits.

**Ghost** · Wed Dec 01, 2021 8:25 pm

Jewels :

1,453,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

541,500

Reputation :

4,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

sub zero

Strength :

70

Speed :

169

Constitution :

6

Endurance :

12

Intelligence :

54

Mana :

2800

Weapon :

Great Katana

Companion :

Rayne

Alright it should be set

**Tempris** · Thu Dec 02, 2021 6:12 am

Epithet :

Herald of Rapture

Guild :

Rune Knight

Threat :

Danger

Jewels :

2,117,500

Rank :

S-rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

1,161,875

Reputation :

20,400

Class :

Cleric

Aura :

The Fool

Magic :

Holy Flame of Illumin

Strength :

502

Speed :

121

Constitution :

148

Endurance :

72

Intelligence :

188

Mana :

3,200

Weapon Mastery :

Novice - Sword

Weapon :

Jeanne d'Arc's Sword

Head :

Black Plague Mask

Body :

Rainbow Robe

Cape :

Eshiga's Sentinel Cape

Ring :

Sea Dragon King's Coil

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Pouch :

Tal-Rasha's Wardrobe Key Wardrobe Key, Tal-Rasha's Palace Key, Anonymity Scowl

Moving this to DMs as due to a small bit of confusion.

**Ghost** · Thu Dec 02, 2021 3:49 pm

Jewels :

1,453,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

541,500

Reputation :

4,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

sub zero

Strength :

70

Speed :

169

Constitution :

6

Endurance :

12

Intelligence :

54

Mana :

2800

Weapon :

Great Katana

Companion :

Rayne

Alright it should be set

**Tempris** · Thu Dec 02, 2021 6:48 pm

Epithet :

Herald of Rapture

Guild :

Rune Knight

Threat :

Danger

Jewels :

2,117,500

Rank :

S-rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

1,161,875

Reputation :

20,400

Class :

Cleric

Aura :

The Fool

Magic :

Holy Flame of Illumin

Strength :

502

Speed :

121

Constitution :

148

Endurance :

72

Intelligence :

188

Mana :

3,200

Weapon Mastery :

Novice - Sword

Weapon :

Jeanne d'Arc's Sword

Head :

Black Plague Mask

Body :

Rainbow Robe

Cape :

Eshiga's Sentinel Cape

Ring :

Sea Dragon King's Coil

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Pouch :

Tal-Rasha's Wardrobe Key Wardrobe Key, Tal-Rasha's Palace Key, Anonymity Scowl

Spells approved for training or purchase

**Ghost** · Fri Dec 03, 2021 4:56 am

Jewels :

1,453,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

541,500

Reputation :

4,500

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

sub zero

Strength :

70

Speed :

169

Constitution :

6

Endurance :

12

Intelligence :

54

Mana :

2800

Weapon :

Great Katana

Companion :

Rayne

These are my 4 starters

**Tempris** · Fri Dec 03, 2021 9:53 am

Epithet :

Herald of Rapture

Guild :

Rune Knight

Threat :

Danger

Jewels :

2,117,500

Rank :

S-rank

Race :

Nephilim (Guardian)

Experience :

1,161,875

Reputation :

20,400

Class :

Cleric

Aura :

The Fool

Magic :

Holy Flame of Illumin

Strength :

502

Speed :

121

Constitution :

148

Endurance :

72

Intelligence :

188

Mana :

3,200

Weapon Mastery :

Novice - Sword

Weapon :

Jeanne d'Arc's Sword

Head :

Black Plague Mask

Body :

Rainbow Robe

Cape :

Eshiga's Sentinel Cape

Ring :

Sea Dragon King's Coil

Modification :

Pact of the Dead God

Pouch :

Tal-Rasha's Wardrobe Key Wardrobe Key, Tal-Rasha's Palace Key, Anonymity Scowl

Spells approved

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