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Fire DS 2A's and S Spells [Done]

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#1Lee Nakamura 

Fire DS 2A's and S Spells [Done] Empty Sat May 08, 2021 9:13 pm

Lee Nakamura
Name: Fire Dragon: Roar
Rank: A-rank
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: First Gen: Fire Dragon Slayer
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 20 Meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The caster puts both hands into a fist and puts them together against their mouth to cast the spell. A 2 meter in diameter magic circle will appear in front of the caster upon casting. A stream of fire that's 2 meters in diameter will shoot from the user causing A-rank damaged to all that touch it.

Name: Fire Dragon: Mine
Rank: A-rank
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: First Gen: Fire Dragon Slayer
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 20 Meters
Cooldown: 4  Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The points the user points their finger with their right hand at where the spell would be aimed. A red magic circle will appear in the area that is pointed or aimed area that's 2 diameters in area. This is a sustained spell, upon releasing within the magic circle this will cause A-rank damage.

Name: Fire Dragon: Wing's Protection
Rank: S-rank
Mana Cost: 500
Requirements: First Gen: Fire Dragon Slayer
Type: Defensive
Element: Fire
Range: 25 Meters
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The caster opens their palms upward to the sky, side-by-side. A red magic circle about 4 diameters will appear right under the caster. Two wings of fire will cover the whole caster's body becoming immobile. This can withstand one 2 S-rank worth of damage.

Buying the S-rank spell and one of the A-rank spells.

Training the last A-rank



Last edited by Lee Nakamura on Tue May 11, 2021 2:13 pm; edited 1 time in total



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Character Sheet
One must emulate both the fox and the lion, because a lion cannot defy a snare, while a fox cannot defy a pack of wolves.
#2Akushitsuna 

Fire DS 2A's and S Spells [Done] Empty Mon May 10, 2021 11:09 pm

Akushitsuna

While I understand the general idea of these spells, some are lacking just a tad bit of information for me to approve them. Please forgive my attention to detail, but I would like to help you word these more accurately for those who might be on the receiving end of them.

Name: Fire Dragon: Roar : "A red magic circle in front of the caster is a 2 diameter." Might I suggest something more along the lines of 'A 2 Diameter red magic circle forms in front of the caster.'

"A stream of fire magic comes from the caster at a 2 diameter. This will cause an A-rank in damage that travels 20 m/s." Once again just gonna shoot a general idea that is a bit easier to understand for the reader, because while I got the gist upon a second glance, some may have trouble with this.

'A stream of fire 2 meters in diameter shoots forth, traveling at 20 M/s while dealing A-Rank damage to anything it touches.'
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Name: Fire Dragon: Mine : 'the points their finger', You just forgot user in there, no biggie.

"This is sustained until the user releases it causing A-rank damage." Just a simple change here, where you note that upon releasing it the mine explodes within the magic circle, which deals said A-Rank damage.

Name: Fire Dragon: Wing's Protection : This one is perfect as is!

#3Lee Nakamura 

Fire DS 2A's and S Spells [Done] Empty Tue May 11, 2021 2:13 pm

Lee Nakamura
Thank you for your help, Aku. All spells are revised and edited!



Fire DS 2A's and S Spells [Done] Tumblr_oua5s27DHT1v5lsxco4_r1_500
Character Sheet
One must emulate both the fox and the lion, because a lion cannot defy a snare, while a fox cannot defy a pack of wolves.
#4Akushitsuna 

Fire DS 2A's and S Spells [Done] Empty Tue May 18, 2021 10:41 pm

Akushitsuna

These spells have been approved for training.
Lee purchased Fire Dragon: Roar, and Fire Dragon: Wing's Protection for 450,000
Moving this to trained until she trains Fire Dragon: Mine Via Word Count.

#5Lee Nakamura 

Fire DS 2A's and S Spells [Done] Empty Thu May 20, 2021 8:55 pm

Lee Nakamura



Fire DS 2A's and S Spells [Done] Tumblr_oua5s27DHT1v5lsxco4_r1_500
Character Sheet
One must emulate both the fox and the lion, because a lion cannot defy a snare, while a fox cannot defy a pack of wolves.
#6Günter Von Wolf 

Fire DS 2A's and S Spells [Done] Empty Mon May 24, 2021 7:42 pm

Günter Von Wolf

These spells have been approved.

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