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Celes'tiells Hemocraft Magic 4 D Spells

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#1Celes 

Celes'tiells Hemocraft Magic 4 D Spells Empty Wed Mar 09, 2022 7:21 am

Celes

Name: Bloody Bubbles
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hemocraft Magic, a gun
Type: Offensive
Element: Water
Range: 5 Meters (1 meter after impact)
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user cocks his gun and points towards a target. A blue magic seal aparates, from which a Bloody Bubble shoots towards the pointed targets direction(speed 20m/s). The bubble (size 0,25m) explodes upon impact, damaging all creatures in a 1 meter radius.

Name: Bloody Geyser
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hemocraft Magic, a Gun
Type: Offensive
Element: Water
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user points the gun on a surface and shoots in that direction. On The surface or area a seal appears which turns into pool of water from which a Bloody Geyser gushes out. Anyone who is in the 1 m Diameter Geyser is damaged.


Name: Bloody Shield
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hemocraft Magic, gun
Type: defensive
Element: Water
Range: 5 meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: sustained
Size: 1 by 1 meter
Effect: The user shoots towards one of the limbs or bodily areas of a character. On the shot area a seal appears from which a Bloody Shield surges and sticks/imbeds itself around that area. The Shield moves with the targeted area of the Body on which it's attached to.

Name: Bloody Jett
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Hemocraft Magic, gun
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: self
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: instant
Effect: On the users gun, the muzzle a Seal appears, from which he shoots a bursts of streaming bloody water which redirects his movement during a run in the opposite direction.



Last edited by Celes on Thu Apr 07, 2022 11:57 am; edited 8 times in total

#2Khnurn 

Celes'tiells Hemocraft Magic 4 D Spells Empty Thu Mar 31, 2022 11:24 pm

Khnurn
  • Bubble:
    • Missing a magic seal
    • How large are the bubbles.
    • Since this spell is coming from the gun, list the weapon in the requirements of the spell.

  • Bolts:
    • Missing a magic seal
    • Keep in mind that the spell can not travel further than 5 meters away from you the caster, even if you should activate it in a puddle that is 4 meters away.
    • How many bolts are coming out the water.

  • Shield:
    • Missing a magic seal.
    • Missing casting motions.
    • Missing the location of the shield.
    • Defensive spells can not move unless they're directly attached to you.

  • Jet
    • Missing a magic seal.
    • Missing casting motions.
    • Include travel speed.
    • Can not make spells that fly at D-rank. Earliest you can fly is at B-rank.

#3Celes 

Celes'tiells Hemocraft Magic 4 D Spells Empty Sun Apr 03, 2022 5:23 am

Celes
Bubble ✔
Bolts ✔
Shield ✔
Jet ✔
I hope I wrote everything alright.

#4Sho 

Celes'tiells Hemocraft Magic 4 D Spells Empty Thu Apr 07, 2022 9:08 am

Sho

Bloody Bubbles: Good

Bloody Bolts:

  • Even though its flavor text you can only really shoot one bolt because you can't really split a D rank spell.
  • Not to mention it could be considered confusing if you fire multiple bolts from one spell but only one counts as damage remove the multiple bolt thing.


Bloody Shield:

  • It needs a size for the shield and it can't be full-body due to those only being available at S rank
  • Also per rules unless the shield is 1 by 1 meter it can't move


Bloody Jet

  • Need to be a bit more specific as to how it redirects your movement. During a dash? Run? Or just standing still etc.



#5Celes 

Celes'tiells Hemocraft Magic 4 D Spells Empty Thu Apr 07, 2022 11:59 am

Celes
Scraped the bolt idea, made a Geyser ✔
Bloody Shield is specifically stating its Size to be 1 by 1 m, I Added a section in the Spell called Size so it's easier to spot ✔
Jet has been more specified ✔

#6Sho 

Celes'tiells Hemocraft Magic 4 D Spells Empty Thu Apr 07, 2022 12:58 pm

Sho

These spells are approved



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