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INFERNO DRAGON SLAYER MAGIC PT. II

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#1Toga 

INFERNO DRAGON SLAYER MAGIC PT. II Empty Sun May 05, 2024 10:13 am

Toga
  • Name: Shōnetsu Ryū: Meisei [Inferno Dragon: Bright Comet, 焦熱龍: 暗夜のしぶき]
    Rank: B
    Mana Cost: 100
    Requirements:  Inferno Dragon Slayer Magic
    Type:  Buff
    Element: Fire - Inferno
    Range: Self
    Cooldown: 3 Posts
    Duration: 3 Posts
    Effect:  Erupting from within, a torrent of unbridled flames envelops Tōga, swirling around him before clenching tightly to his form like a second skin made of fire. Throughout this technique, Tōga radiates with a palpable, condensed energy, visibly enhancing his resilience. This fiery armor not only fortifies his physical endurance but also bolsters his spiritual fortitude, augmenting his Constitution by a significant 40 points.

  • Name: Shōnetsu Ryū: Nichien [Inferno Dragon: Sun Blaze, 日焰]
    Rank: A
    Mana Cost: 200
    Requirements:  Inferno Dragon Slayer Magic
    Type:  Supplementary
    Element: Fire - Inferno
    Range: 0-20 Meters
    Cooldown: 4 Posts
    Duration:  Instant [Partial blindness can last up to 3 turns]
    Effect:  Positioning both hands before his face, Tōga extends his fingers and locks them in place, focusing intently on his target. He then unleashes a massive wave of brilliant, all-encompassing light and heat. This formidable wall of fiery energy shines forward, engulfing anything in its path with intense, eye-searing light. Those unfortunate enough to be caught in the flash are subjected to a radiant solar flare. The sheer brightness of this attack poses a significant hazard, threatening partial blindness to any who witnesses or are caught within its reach. This disorienting effect can persist for up to 3 turns unless remedied.

  • Name: Shōnetsu Ryū: Kokusen [Inferno Dragon: Black Flash, 黒閃]
    Rank: A
    Mana Cost: 200
    Requirements:  Inferno Dragon Slayer Magic
    Type:  Offensive
    Element: Fire - Inferno
    Range: 0-5 Meters
    Cooldown: 4 Posts
    Duration:  Instant
    Effect:  An immense concentration of fire gathers in Tōga's hand, compressing into a dense, superheated mass. This formidable energy begins to flicker with an ominous black hue, molding tightly around his fist while intense heat and crackling static emanate from it, creating a fiery gravitational force that swells violently. With a calculated thrust, Tōga aims to strike his target with his fist, now encrusted in black flames, delivering devastating A-rank damage upon impact.

  • Name: Shōnetsu Ryū: Zesseien [Inferno Dragon: world-devouring flame, 噬世炎]
    Rank: S
    Mana Cost: 500
    Requirements:  Inferno Dragon Slayer Magic
    Type:  Offensive
    Element: Fire - Inferno
    Range: 0-25 meters
    Cooldown: 5 Posts
    Duration:  Instant
    Effect: Tōga harnesses the fiery essence within him, drawing forth heat and flame to coalesce into a dense, pulsating orb of supercharged fire cradled in the palm of his hand. This orb, voraciously feeding on the ambient energy of its surroundings, swells in size until it forms a massive sphere with a circumference of three meters. With a forceful thrust, Tōga launches this supernova-esque attack towards his intended targets. Upon reaching its destination, the orb erupts in a spectacular, stellar explosion, igniting the environment in a colossal dome of hellfire. This technique unfurls with a devastating area of effect, reaching up to a 16-meter diameter in omnidirectional force, engulfing everything within its reach in a relentless inferno. Those unable to escape the blast are consumed by the unbridled flames.



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#2Toga 

INFERNO DRAGON SLAYER MAGIC PT. II Empty Sun May 05, 2024 10:14 am

Toga
If approved, I'll be buying all these. Should cost 400,000 jewels with my Extinctas discount.

#3Alaric Holloway 

INFERNO DRAGON SLAYER MAGIC PT. II Empty Tue May 07, 2024 5:08 am

Alaric Holloway
Hey Toga!

Pretty solid spells for the most part. Just some minor issues.


1st spell - 100% good to go

2nd spell - Unless you've got the enchantment, Blind on Hit, your offensive spells cannot blind people. The spell has to either be blind-based or offensive-based.

3- It looks like you're trying to deal S-rank damage with an A-rank spell. That needs to be bumped down to A-rank. Also, you cannot deal damage and then turn it into a buffing spell. So, you'll need to pick one or the other for this spell's use.

4- Everything is fine except the paying triple mana to expand. Sadly, these sort of special effects are not allowed for things other than signature spells.



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#4Toga 

INFERNO DRAGON SLAYER MAGIC PT. II Empty Tue May 07, 2024 6:18 am

Toga
Great feedback and it makes sense!

Made the second ability Purely supplementary!

Removed the buff from spell three.

Removed the augmenting AoE from the 4th spell. :)

#5Alaric Holloway 

INFERNO DRAGON SLAYER MAGIC PT. II Empty Tue May 07, 2024 6:31 am

Alaric Holloway
These are approved and have been bought! Don't go staring in the sun for too long now.



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