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#1Ghost 

Below Zero  Empty Wed Jul 17, 2024 7:37 am

Ghost
Name: Below Zero:Flash Freeze
Rank: S
Mana Cost: 500
Requirements: Sub-Zero Magic
Type: Supportive-AOE
Element: Ice
Range: 50 Meters
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: By simply flicking his fingers in a fast motion. A Magic seal that is 20 Meters long and 16 Diameter will appear. Everything within the range of this spell will become frozen to the touch and bind by Frost Magic for a post count of 4.


Name: Below Zero:Frozen Cacoon
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 250
Requirements: Sub-Zero Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Ice
Range: 20 Meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: By stomping his feet a Magic seal that is 7 Meters long and 4 diameter will appear. As the ice rushes at the target at A tier speed upon catching them the Sub-Zero Magic would start to spread over the target body. Instantly doing ice damage to them. As the user would then walk pass them finishing the freezing of the target with the Sub-Zero Magic.



Last edited by Ghost on Fri Jul 19, 2024 11:13 am; edited 6 times in total



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#2Tae 

Below Zero  Empty Wed Jul 17, 2024 12:36 pm

Tae
Hi @Ghost, nice spells! There are just a few things we need to discuss before we can get these bad boys approved!

Flash Freeze: The mana cost for this S-Rank spell should be 500 mana. Typically, unless it’s an Ultimate spell or attached to an exclusive magic, S-Rank spells function one-dimensionally. Flash Freeze can bind, blind, and apply a debuff. Due to your magic, offensive spells automatically include a speed debuff, which is beneficial but doesn’t apply here since this is a supportive AoE spell. Additionally, Frost magic doesn’t instinctively blind opponents. Therefore, it would be best to adjust this spell to only bind opponents.


Frozen Cocoon
: Similar to the above spell, this one does damage and binds. We’d need to pick one or another, but if you do damage with this and forego the bind, you can at least get the innate speed debuff upon contact. Cooldowns are also 4 posts for A-rank spells.

Let me know if you have any questions. 😊




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#3Ghost 

Below Zero  Empty Wed Jul 17, 2024 1:03 pm

Ghost
Ok I fixed it up and changed the Meters a bit.

Bump



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#4Tae 

Below Zero  Empty Fri Jul 19, 2024 6:49 am

Tae

We’re almost there!

For Flash Freeze, it still says “Blind”. Please correct that to “Bind” and you’re ready.

For Frozen Cocoon, the debuff itself isn’t necessarily a product of it being frost magic, but rather Sub-zero magic. It’s innate to your specific magic type. You don’t have to put the debuff in there specifically, but if you do, just change frost to say sub-zero to make it clearer. 😊

@Ghost




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#5Ghost 

Below Zero  Empty Fri Jul 19, 2024 11:13 am

Ghost
Ok I did it

Bump



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#6Tae 

Below Zero  Empty Mon Jul 22, 2024 8:20 am

Tae

Look's good!

Do you plan to purchase these outright or train them?

@Ghost




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#7Ghost 

Below Zero  Empty Mon Jul 22, 2024 9:19 am

Ghost
I will be training them...



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#8Tae 

Below Zero  Empty Tue Jul 23, 2024 7:03 am

Tae

Approved for training! @Ghost




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#9Tae 

Below Zero  Empty Sat Aug 17, 2024 6:17 am

Tae

@Ghost has trained "Flash Freeze"!




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