Magic

Magic Name: Crystal Magic (結晶の魔法 Kesshō no Mahō)

Magic Element: Crystal (No element)

Magic Description: Users of Crystal Magic can produce and manipulate crystal for offensive and defensive spells, such as creating crystal around her fists or shins for more powerful melee attacks, creating armor, or projectiles. Small, sharp crystals can slash and pierce, while harder, sturdier crystals being better suited for blunt damage. Some spells can also restrain opponents, or crystallize them entirely, making this a highly versatile magic. For more creative options, she can crystallize her surroundings in various manners for supplementary uses, or employ her connection to the earth for sensory techniques. Crystal magic also has several uses for speed boosting, protuding crystalline rods towards the opposite direction that she wants to move and exploit the reaction force.
The color of Alisa's crystals typically varies with her mood: Though purple or pinkish is a common color, a cold mood will color them towards blue and anger redden it. Advanced spells are colored white regardless of her mood due to being flawless Diamonds.
For melee combat, she can coat or harden her limbs with crystal, or even directly crystallize opponents via touch, which deals damage comparable to being frozen solid. When clashing spells with an opponent and winning, some spells of this magic have the unusual trait of converting the vanquished spell into a crystal sculpture - like Ice magic would do - with the same happening to slain enemies.
Despite Crystal being just a different state of matter for earth - physically closer to ice than rocks - this fundamental difference means she must use pure mana instead of Earth Element, giving it no elemental advantages or disadvantages. Due to not being a form of maker magic; fully stable, detailled creations must be developed previously rather than on the fly. She's also unable to manipulate water crystals (Ice) due to those being based off a different element; thus crystallizing those two elements works by adding her own lattice onto them.

D-rank:

Name: Shatter



Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Crystal Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A (Crystal)
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: When executing an unarmed strike, Alisa hardens the attacking limb, launching a compressed crystalline orb flying towards the target. Through a combination of willpower and angle, she can curve the trajectory somewhat. On impact or when hitting max range, it shattering into a 1m fragmentation blast, dealing D-rank slashing damage, with the smaller fragments behaving like sharp grains of sand. If her attack connects before the projectile is launched, she'll instead concentrate the damage on the the impact area, narrowing the shattering effect to about twice the size of the impact. By sustaining the spell Alisa retains the hardening effect and can fire repeatedly, but can only deal 1 D-rank and switch the affected limb once each turn.

Spoiler:

Name: Reflect
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Crystal Magic
Type: Defensive
Element: N/A (Crystal)
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustained
Effect: By swiping an arm or a leg, Alisa creates a 1m wide crystalline barrier moving along the path of the activating limb anywhere within 5 meters. This can block up to 1C rank damage. Due to its mobile nature, its meant for parrying and deflecting attacks rather than outright blocking. If it survives the initial usage, Alisa can keep it active via sustain, moving it around at will.

Spoiler:

Name: Thruster
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Crystal Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A (Crystal)
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: A much faster, but single use version of Booster in which Alisa produces thrusters beneath her feet for a one time use. She must also tap her foot in a similar manner, but these can blitz her towards a target place within 5 meters, producing similar thrusters in the opposite direction at that destination in order to stop. She controls the sudden acceleration through proper balance and timing, allowing her to retain momentum from a prior movement without falling over. If she moves less than five meters in a single use, she can reactivate this by tapping her foot again, to use whatever distance she has left.

Spoiler:

Name: Dazzling step
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Crystal Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A (Crystal)
Range: Self
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: By crystallizing whatever she's standing on according to where she wants to move, Alisa constantly footing that also clings to the ground whenever possible. This lets her walk/run vertically up walls, over water, or over any terrains as if they were smooth and even (such as jagged rocky ground or her crystal constructs)

Spoiler:

Name: Push
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Crystal Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A (Crystal)
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: By clenching her fist, Alisa produces a heavy but brittle crystal rod anywhere within 5 meters that knocks her target 5 meters in her chosen direction, shattering after impact. This effect can only be used once per post.

Spoiler:

Hey there, Rowan here to grade your spells.

Shatter

• Going to need a specific damage amount listed here.

Radiant Flight

• Your requirement section is wrong here. Should be Crystal Magic.
  
• You should also list that you can only fly as high as 5 meters.

Geomancy

• Unfortunately, this spell isn't going to work as a D rank due to rank constraints. You'll have to come up with a new one.

All fixed, replaced Geomancy with Thruster

Swapped 'radiant flight' and 'Booster' with 'Dazzling step' and 'Mark of the empress'

Shatter:

• This is either Sustained or Instant. Choose one.
  
• Remove the part about being able to prematurely detonate the spell by snapping your fingers. This mechanic has been denied before.
  
• Make note that you can only deal out a single instance of D-Rank damage per post, as your last sentence indicates that it can be used numerous times per post.
  
• With mixed damages, the total damage is split, such that a C-Rank with 2 damage types would deal D-Rank of both types. As this is a D-Rank and cannot be split further, please select one type of damage.
  

Reflect:

• This is either Sustained or Instant. Choose one.
  
• How close/far from your limb is this shield?
  

Thunder:

• Please note that this relies on your Speed stat rather than Spell Speed.
  

Dazzling:

• The "without speed penalties" is a bit vague. Please clarify it as to penalties in which may be as a result of terrains only.
  

Mark of the Empress:

• Unfortunately I am going to deny this spell. Homing is a touchy topic with spells and we've granted leeway to the degree of allowing a spell to be guided through the usage of further gestures, but in this spell you have what amounts to a "smart" target in which removes that required aspect.
  

Bump when edited.

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Change the durability of the reflect and for push pick one of the two functions you've written by either having the spell from the area or body, not one or the other as mentioned in it. bump when done.

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