Leyaria wrote:Name: White Dragon Slayer Secret Art: Heaven's Genocide
Rank: S
Mana Cost: 400
Requirements: White Dragon Slayer Magic
Type: Offense
Element: Light
Range: 25 Meters
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: White Dragon Slayer Magic permeates through Leyaria's body for a brief moment before it is continually expulsed from her body, materializing in the form of swords of light, no greater than 1 meter in length composed of White Dragon Slayer Magic, which appear several meters above her, remaining within a maximum proximity of a diameter of 16 meters with her as the epicenter, the blades freely able to freely materialize within that designated region. Each post for as long as she is willing to invest MP to sustain this spell, Leyaria is capable of further creating and having a sword quickly and violently launch in the direction of the target, to which through the usages of hand gestures she may freely manipulate the blades' trajectory, enabling them to move or otherwise hone in the direction of the respective target of her choice, aligning and honing in at them and exploding in a 16 meter diameter at the point of impact with the target, dealing S-Rank bludgeoning damage to the target and any other individuals within the explosion radius or otherwise enter it at time of impact. Following the blast, there exists numerous fragments of light which persist and attach themselves to anyone struck or who happen within the blast zone immediately following, dealing additional instances of S-Rank burning damage for each post, for each application of the fragments of light applied, following until they are destroyed by the target casting an offensive spell of equivalent or greater strength.

Permeating through your body isn't really a trigger. So this spell needs a true trigger for usage. How many blades do you create. More blades = more division of power. Ex. You have four blades each one does B rank for a total of one S. How do you control this? Body movement? Cause just saying telepathically won't really fly per sei. Also having added instances of burning damage is a no.
Cause you have the S rank of damage but then saying you do a extra S on-top? No.

Name: White Dragon's Holy Roar
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: White Dragon Slayer Magic
Type: Offense
Element: Light
Range: 20 Meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Leyaria takes a deep breath as White Dragon Slayer Magic builds within her chest, being released as she exhales in an unrelenting blast - consisting of numerous layers of intense light energy - extending outwards to a distance of 20 meters, having a width and height of 5 meter, dealing A-Rank bludgeoning damage to those struck by this blast or otherwise come into contact with it as it travels its duration. Upon reaching the conclusion of its route, the beam will explode into a large explosion which encompasses an area of 8 meters in all directions, dealing A-Rank burning damage to those in the proximity of the explosion, those who come into contact with the blast as it travels its duration or otherwise enter the explosion upon its detonation.

Approved

Name: White Dragon's Zealous Crucifixion
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: White Dragon Slayer Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Light
Range: 20 Meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: White Dragon Slayer Magic begins to extrude from Leyaria's body, causing her own body to appear as she is becoming consumed in it. Provided she is able to make physical contact with the ground, she is able to transfer the Magic that has built up outwards through the ground towards a target of up to 20 meters away, at which point it upon reaching the target it will protrude upwards from the ground, materializing in the form of a cross having a maximum height of 2 meters which will bind the target's arms and legs to it, with both legs bound together while the arms will be spread out, emulating the appearance of the target being crucified to a cross. The target will remain bound to the cross in this position unless they are either able to break the bindings through A-Rank strength excluding that of what a weapon may provide.

I am guessing the energy coming from your body is the trigger? Otherwise spells need some form of trigger to activate. It just doesn't just build up on a whim. A rank strength,
or A rank spell to break it.

Burning Damage: Fourth-degree burns: These are the first burns that cause damage that reaches deeper than skin and affect the organs beneath the skin, such as muscles, ligaments and tendons.