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The Book of Orochi, Serpent Modifications: Chapter 1 (Starting spells)

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#1Azamuku Orochi 

The Book of Orochi, Serpent Modifications: Chapter 1 (Starting spells) Empty Sun Apr 23, 2017 9:49 am

Azamuku Orochi
Spoiler:


Name: Shincho (Elongation)
Rank: D-rank
Magic Cost: 25 mp
Element: Earth
Requirements: Serpent Modification (Book of Orochi)
Class: Supplementary, offensive 
Effect: By clapping his hands together the caster focuses his personal ethereal energy into a part of his body, giving it malleable properties. When used the caster can stretch their bodies to reach about 5 meters, or twist their body at almost any angle. By itself the spell deals no damage other than the caster's basic strength. However, it is possible for him to entangle someone with their appendages, or grapple objects with the elongated appendage. But subjects with greater strength can resist him or break free. Only one part of the body can be elongated at a time.
Range: 5 meters
Duration: Sustained 
Cooldown: +1 post 

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Name: Shizumu Karada (Sinking body)
Rank: D-rank
Magic Cost: 25 mp 
Element: Earth
Requirements: Serpent Modification (Book of Orochi)
Class: Supplementary, sustained 
Effect: Clapping his hands together which preforms the needed spell gesture, after this the caster will spread personal ethereal energy throughout his body. Using this he is able to melt into the ground or surface he is standing this allows the caster to quickly avoid incoming attacks and allowing the caster to travel by walking through the ground or the surface he has melted through. Using this method the caster can also execute surprise attacks from the ground. Although he suffers D-rank speed reduction while under the ground or surface. 
Range: 10 meters
Duration:  Sustained 
Cooldown: +1 post

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Name: Hebi no Shita (Serpent Tongue)
Rank: D-rank
Magic: 25 mp
Elemental: Earth
Requirements: Serpent Modification (Book of Orochi)
Class: Offensive, sustained
Effect: Clapping his hands together which preforms the needed spell gesture, after this the caster will spread personal ethereal ethereal energy through his mouth. Then throwing his head forward he will transmute his tongue into a rather large and thick olive green serpent. The serpent can wrap around and constrict the target for .5 D-rank damage per post, preform a quick strike and bite the target for 1-D-rank damage. The serpent can be 'killed' meaning that it will stop entangling the target by someone with 10 strength.
Range: 5 meters
Duration: Sustained, until broken
Cooldown: +1 post

Spoiler:

Name: Shita no Ken (tongue sword)
Rank: D-rank
Magic Cost: 25 mp
Element: Earth
Requirements: Serpent Modification (Book of Orochi)
Class: Offensive, sustained
Effect: Clapping his hands together which preforms the needed spell gesture, after this the caster spreads personal ethereal energy through his tongue. Using this personal energy the caster transmute his tongue into a 5 meter sword, the sword deals d-rank damage. Admittedly the sword is difficult to control and cannot be separated from the caster's body. Meaning that the caster cannot preform fancy sword play with and can only use basic slashing (Up, down, right left etc) and minor lunging. 
Range: 5 meters 
Duration: sustained
Cooldown: +1 post

Spoiler:

Name: Hebi no Uroko (Serpent Scales)
Rank: D-rank 
Magic cost: 25 mp
Element: Earth
Requirements: Serpent modification (Book of Orochi)
Class: Defensive, sustained
Effect: The caster claps his hands together which preforms the needed spell gesture, after this the caster will spread personal ethereal energy throughout his entire body. Using this the caster effectively increases the density of his skin which makes it harder, the pattern of scales would appear on his body, signalling that the spell has activated. This protects the caster from 2x D-rank spells or 1x C-rank spell.
Range: Self spell
Duration: Sustained
Cooldown: +1 post



Last edited by Azamuku Orochi on Mon May 01, 2017 6:46 am; edited 6 times in total

#2Erebus2 

The Book of Orochi, Serpent Modifications: Chapter 1 (Starting spells) Empty Sun Apr 23, 2017 11:58 am

Erebus2

Your stuff is very detailed, I'm impressed. However due to the length of each spell I will break them down one at a time for you.

Shincho:



  • Describe your hand gestures please
  • The max range is 5 meters for D-rank spells (it could be extended to 10 meters if the user adds a major drawback to the spell, such as incapability to move afterwards, long self stun etc.)
  • D-ranks always cost 25 MP, remove the 15 MP beside it.


Shizumu Karada:


  • Describe your hand gestures please
  • The max range can be 10 meters since you have a debuff in there which harms you. However, do not state it as "five points" just say you are slowed considerably. This is not a teleport by the way, and should never be mistaken as such.
  • D-ranks always cost 25 MP, remove the 15 MP beside it.


Hebi Shita:


  • Describe your hand gestures please
  • Range again needs fixing.
  • D-ranks always cost 25 MP, remove the 15 MP beside it.


After these are fixed we'll get the other two.



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#3Azamuku Orochi 

The Book of Orochi, Serpent Modifications: Chapter 1 (Starting spells) Empty Mon May 01, 2017 6:47 am

Azamuku Orochi
bump for checking

#4Erebus2 

The Book of Orochi, Serpent Modifications: Chapter 1 (Starting spells) Empty Mon May 01, 2017 1:31 pm

Erebus2

Congratulations, these spells have been approved.



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