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Demon Soul Magic: Ba’al (D Ranked Spells)

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#1Zanto 

Demon Soul Magic: Ba’al (D Ranked Spells) Empty Sun Jan 14, 2018 9:32 am

Zanto
D Ranked Spells:



Last edited by Zanto on Mon Jan 15, 2018 11:04 pm; edited 2 times in total

#2Venus Rosé 

Demon Soul Magic: Ba’al (D Ranked Spells) Empty Mon Jan 15, 2018 9:21 am

Venus Rosé

Hello, I'll be grading your spells.

Static:

  • Mention some kind of movement to initiate the spell.


Electric Field:

  • AoE spells have a different range compared to normal spells and D-Rank AoEs must be within 1 meter diameter. Refer to the Magic regulations for more information.


Indra's Spear:

  • Include that you can only deal 1 D-Rank damage per post.


Bolt:

  • Approved.


Flash Bang:

  • Approved.


Bump when done.



#3Zanto 

Demon Soul Magic: Ba’al (D Ranked Spells) Empty Mon Jan 15, 2018 9:40 am

Zanto
I fixed it

#4Venus Rosé 

Demon Soul Magic: Ba’al (D Ranked Spells) Empty Mon Jan 15, 2018 11:03 pm

Venus Rosé

Electric Field:


  • In the spell's description, it's stated 5 meter radius. Please fix it.
  • Could you also mention how far the spell pushes opponents back?


Bump when edited.



#5Zanto 

Demon Soul Magic: Ba’al (D Ranked Spells) Empty Mon Jan 15, 2018 11:04 pm

Zanto
Fixed it again

#6Venus Rosé 

Demon Soul Magic: Ba’al (D Ranked Spells) Empty Mon Jan 15, 2018 11:15 pm

Venus Rosé

These spells have been approved.



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