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Water Starters [x4D]

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#1Jan Ren 

Water Starters [x4D] Empty Tue Mar 31, 2020 3:10 am

Jan Ren
Name: Water Slicer
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Water Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Water
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: A magic circle forms at the user's hands as they withdraw their arms; with a swing, the user shoots out a slice of water not bigger than the size of their palm, that deals D-rank damage to a given target. The slicer moves at a speed of 20 m/s.

Name: Blue Walk
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Water Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Water
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: As the user gathers magic power in their feet, a magic circle will appear below them as their feet will be coated with what appears to be two bubbles of water. This spell allows the user to walk on water, to a distance of up to 5 meters a post.
Unstellar, yeah, but just... Give it time, okay?

Name: Liquid Leecher
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Water Magic
Type: Debuff
Element: Water
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Thrusting their hand forward, the user expells water bodies from their forearm and finger onto a single target; once hit, the water will push down against the target in several points on their limbs, inflicting a D-rank debuff to their speed for the spell's duration. This also makes the target uncomfortably wet.

Name: Shot Drop
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Water Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Water
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user points their finger outwards and makes out the shape of a gun with their hand. The magic circle appears at the tip of the finger as the user shoots out a small water bullet barely the size of a ping-pong ball, that deals D-rank damage to a target. The bullet travels at a speed of 20 m/s. Great for party tricks.



Last edited by Jan Ren on Tue Mar 31, 2020 3:59 am; edited 2 times in total

#2Yuno 

Water Starters [x4D] Empty Tue Mar 31, 2020 3:37 am

Yuno
Water Slicer

  • Please choose a location for your spell origin (either from a body of water or from yourself, I suggest the latter though).
  • I also suggest that you change the magic circle's location from under your feet to maybe in front of your hands (it's hard to imagine how slices of water are coming out of a magic circle that you are currently standing on, thus leaving no room for anything to come out).
  • Please reduce number of slices to 1 slice of water that deals D-rank damage. If you want to have more than one slice, you can make this a sustained spell instead of an instant one, which would allow you to send a slice of water once per post. Sustain Mana cost must be applied
  • Clarify that spell travels at 20m/s!

Art of the Flow

  • What exactly is the purpose of this spell? Carrying a magical bucket of water around that does nothing to help you or your allies seems like a waste of mana, lol.
  • Also, if you are controlling the movement of the water with your handmovements, you must a) be in range of the body of water and b) pay double mana cost and sustain this spell since you are controlling its trajectory.

Spell Regulations wrote:Spell Trajectory: All spells move in a trajectory described in the spell description upon casting.

You may control the trajectory of your spell after casting it instead of giving it a pre-defined trajectory. If you choose to do that, the spell must be sustained and it will cost double the mana. This must be mentioned clearly when applying for the spell. The control cannot be done in your mind and will require obvious hand gestures.

Liquid Leecher
  • Approved!


Shot Drop
  • Please define spell speed of 20m/s again.
  • Please give info on the size of the bullet!


Bump when changes have been made!



#3Jan Ren 

Water Starters [x4D] Empty Tue Mar 31, 2020 3:59 am

Jan Ren
FIXED.
Who needs moving water around anyway.



Water Starters [x4D] 2_1
Clickey for sheety
#4Yuno 

Water Starters [x4D] Empty Tue Mar 31, 2020 4:24 am

Yuno
These spells have been approved.



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