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#1Leika Earthe 

Leika's Starter spells Empty Wed May 27, 2020 6:24 pm

Leika Earthe
Name: Nature's Roots
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Nature Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Nature
Range: 1 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Leika's eyes glow red as she squats on the ground, legs spread at a feral shamanistic pose. She waves both of her hands above the ground, her palms barely touching any present blades of grass. Her hands move in circles toward her core, first the right hand then the left. They continue this rhythm until the roots, seeds, and vines underground stir and sprout forth life. She then places her palms flat onto the ground to summon them. This creates a 1-meter trap around Leika. Any enemies who step within the area will suffer a bind effect.
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Name: Pack Unity
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Yasha Ookami
Type: Defensive
Element: Nature
Range: 1 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Leika snaps her fingers, her eyes flashing red for a brief moment. A 0.25 diameter barrier forms around her and any of her companions within range. While within the barrier, they are protected from C Rank damage. If hit by anything stronger, the barrier will be destroyed.
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Name: Nature's Blessing
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Nature Magic
Type: Healing
Element: Nature
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Laika raises her hand and points to the target companion she wishes to use this spell on. A green beam of light will emenate from her fingertips and heal her companion of choice. This can only be used on a single companion of her own at any given time and does D Rank healing.
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Name: Wild Howl
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Yasha Ookami
Type: Other-Buff
Element: Nature
Range: 1 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Leika howls like a wild wolf and her eyes glow red causing her companions to glow with a yellow aura. All of her companions within range of this effect recieve a D-Rank buff in Strength.



Last edited by Leika Earthe on Fri May 29, 2020 9:12 am; edited 5 times in total

#2Jan Ren 

Leika's Starter spells Empty Thu May 28, 2020 11:02 am

Jan Ren
Hey there! :3

- Nature's Roots:

  • As all spells require a visible cue for activation, eyes glowing is too insignificant of an indication. I'd suggest a wave of the hand or something similar

  • D-rank spells have a maximum AoE size of 1 meter diamater; also note that it's a diameter around you. Fix accordingly.

  • D-rank spells have a cooldown of 1 post. The cooldown comes into effect once the spell is no longer sustained. Fix cooldown to 1 post!


-Pack Unity:

  • D-rank spells have a maximum dimension of 0.25 meters. This means your barrier would be at most 0.25 meters in overall diameter. Do mention that in your spell!

  • D-rank spells maximum range is 5 meters. If your spell is intended to be an AoE, it's again, 1-meter diameter around you. Clarify and fix!

  • Defensive spells also can't move around unless they are wielded by the user; so your companions wouldn't move around with shields either.

  • Mention that its blocking power equals up to C-rank! Defensive spells can block up to 1 rank higher than their rank.

  • Change cooldown to 1 post!


-Healing Wave:

  • Unless enhanced or mentioned through class bonus, healing spells can't heal the user. So this would be a single-target on your companions or allies instead. Remove the bit about healing herself.

  • Mention that it holds D-rank healing.

  • Change cooldown to 1 post and range to 5 meters!


-Wild Howl:

  • Type should be listed as Other-Buff.

  • Range is at most 5 meters. Though if this is a multi-target spell, it would have to be AoE; which means maximum diameter of 1-meter radius around you.

  • Mention that the companions boosted receive a D-rank buff in strength!


Post in spell review when done!



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#3Jan Ren 

Leika's Starter spells Empty Fri May 29, 2020 7:56 am

Jan Ren
Hello again!!

Nature's Roots: Only need to specify that it inflicts a Bind effect on whoever steps in!

Post in spell review when done!



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#4Jan Ren 

Leika's Starter spells Empty Fri May 29, 2020 9:31 am

Jan Ren
These spells have been approved.



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