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Kegare: Demon Soul Starter Spells

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#1Masami 

Kegare: Demon Soul Starter Spells Empty Sun Jun 21, 2020 6:42 am

Masami
Magic:

Name: Yubikiri (指切り lit. Pinky Promise)
Rank: D-Rank
Mana Cost: 25 MP
Requirements: Demon Soul Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 05 Meters
Cooldown: 01 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The spell starts by having the user make a fist upon their left hand then raising their pinky, choosing a target by using the tip of the finger as scope; a magic circle forms at the tip. After blowing unto the finger, the magic circle immediately subdues – releasing a burst of flame with a 0.25-meter of length in a speed of 20m/s that deals D-Rank damage over the target's inflicted area.

Name: Akahitoha (紅一葉 lit. Crimson Leaf)
Rank: D-Rank
Mana Cost: 25 MP
Requirements: Demon Soul Magic
Type: Supplementary | Thermal Vision
Element: Fire
Range: 05 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user's fingers covers their eyes then creates a gap between the middle and ring fingers, summoning a magic circle right in front of both eyes, casting thermal vision. Upon casting, they may move their hands away and the magic circle will subdue; the user would then be able to see the temperature of any living thing that is around 5-meters.

Name: Akatoki (暁 lit. Daybreak)
Rank: D-Rank
Mana Cost: 25 MP
Requirements: Demon Soul Magic
Type: Supplementary | Dash
Element: Fire
Range: 05 Meters
Cooldown: 01 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user engulfs their body with a thin layer of flames by dispersing a magic circle in front of their chest, allowing them to dash at a maximum range of 5-meters. The fire does not inflict damage whatsoever, but the user may still feel the warmth of the flames – slightly applying a soft glow of flames upon themselves.

Name: Kouzan (鉱山 lit. Mine)
Rank: D-Rank
Mana Cost: 25 MP
Requirements: Demon Soul Magic
Type: Supplementary | Direction Control
Element: Fire
Range: 05 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user creates a 0.02-meter magic circle by kissing the tip of their middle and index fingers, then pointing it towards a target as the fingers face upwards. Once they point the same fingers downwards, another magic circle appears in front of the target within range at the speed of 20m/s, then dispersing into a 0.25-meter diameter hannya mask made out of flames – pushing the target towards the caster at a maximum range of 5-meters without inflicting damage, although the target may still feel the warmth of the flames.



Last edited by Masami on Tue Jun 23, 2020 11:20 am; edited 2 times in total



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#2Jan Ren 

Kegare: Demon Soul Starter Spells Empty Sun Jun 21, 2020 9:47 am

Jan Ren
Hey there!

  • Yubikiri: Mention spell speed.

  • Akatoki: Since this is a self-supplementary spell. Who's the target mentioned? If unnecessary, I suggest a reword

  • Kouzan: The wording makes it sound like an autohit. State that the circle appears over the opponent, and comes down at spell speed. It also sounds like it'd pull instead of push? Idk. Maybe I'm nitpicky there lol

  • Akahitoha: Akahitoba*. Optional. :3


Post again in Spell Review when done!



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#3Masami 

Kegare: Demon Soul Starter Spells Empty Sun Jun 21, 2020 7:37 pm

Masami
Yosh! Thanks for the review!

  • Yubikiri: Added the spell speed!

  • Akahitoha: I checked, and it's Akahitoha, a Vocaloid song! :c

  • Akatoki: Sorry, sorry! I got this confused with the Superior Spellsinger trait. Edits have been made!

  • Kouzan: I made some changes with how the spell works, I find it better this way, so I hope that works! And yeah, since it pushes the target directly towards the user, it technically pulls xD



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#4Jan Ren 

Kegare: Demon Soul Starter Spells Empty Wed Jun 24, 2020 8:19 am

Jan Ren
These spells have been approved.



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