Name: Eldritch Dragon's Omnipotent Subjugation
Rank: S++
Mana Cost: 500
Requirements: Eldritch Dragon Slayer Magic
Type: Supplementary [S++: Topic Wide, Nullification Immunity]
Element: Arcane
Range: Topic Wide
Cooldown: Once Per Topic
Duration: 5 Posts
Effect: The user says the word, "Bow" and then with a snap of their finger, Eldritch Magic will immediately materialize around them and spread out in every direction for as long as the eye can see. As it passes any given target, whether friend or foe, the Eldritch Dragon Slayer Magic will coalesce around them, immediately then changing forms into becoming that of a sort of 'collar and chain' wrapped upon the individual's neck leading back to the user, like that of a long lease. While these chains exist, those bound will be blinded, deafened, and muted until the user cancels this spell. This spell overrides any sort of passive effects that the individuals may have towards those Physical senses nor will Magical Sight granted through spells function, however passive Magical Sight will still usable while this spell is active.

Name: Eldritch Dragon's Penetrating Cruelty
Rank: S+
Mana Cost: 500
Requirements: Eldritch Dragon Slayer Magic
Type: Offensive [S+: Homing | Enhancement: Damage Over Time, Armor Piercing, Spell Overcharge - Offensive]
Element: Arcane
Range: 25 Meters
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user develops an otherworldly hue as Eldritch Dragon Slayer Magic manifests all around them in an uncontrollable state as they hold up a finger towards their lips. With a snap of the user's finger, the Magic that manifested around them erupts outwards into a blast of volleys of almost arrow-like projectiles composed of Eldritch Dragon Slayer Magic that fly out in all directions towards anyone whom the user views as an enemy. For each target, there will be a volley that homes in, travels towards, and pursues them until they strike the target. Reaching the target, they will coalesce into a singular arrow-like form that will strike at the user, sending a massive surge of Eldritch Dragon Slayer Magic through their body up right to their head, inflicting 2 S-Rank worth of damage to the target's head. With each subsequent post following any targets being struck by this ability, they will suffer an additional instance of damage equal to 1 Rank lower than the previous post (2 S -> 1 S -> 1 A, etc) so long as the user wishes to sustain the damage component.

Name: Eldritch Dragon's Roar
Rank: S
Mana Cost: 500
Requirements: Eldritch Dragon Slayer Magic
Type: Offensive [Enhancement: Damage Over Time, Armor Piercing, Spell Overcharge - Offensive]
Element: Arcane
Range: 25 Meters
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The user holds a finger up to their lips while taking in a deep breath. They then exhale, unleashing a massive blast of Eldritch Dragon Slayer Magic out at a target, travelling the maximum distance of the spell, dealing 2 S-Rank damage to all targets caught within its blast proximity as it expands outward, having a maximum width of 25 meters at its furthest length. With each subsequent post following any targets being struck by this ability, they will suffer an additional instance of damage equal to 1 Rank lower than the previous post (2 S -> 1 S -> 1 A, etc) so long as the user wishes to sustain the damage component.

Name: Eldritch Dragon's Horrific Tendril
Rank: S
Mana Cost: 500
Requirements: Eldritch Dragon Slayer Magic
Type: Offensive [Enhancement: Damage Over Time, Armor Piercing, Overcharge - Offensive]
Element: Arcane
Range: 25 Meters
Cooldown: 5 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: The user swipes their hand with their index and middle finger locked together as though almost like they are cutting through the air, causing a Magic Seal to appear beneath a target. From this Seal will appear a tendril composed of Eldritch Dragon Slayer Magic that will penetrate through the target, dealing 2 S-Rank damage upon the strike while also holding the target in place unless they are capable of breaking it through either paying the associated Mana cost, destroying the tendril, or otherwise having an Intelligence Attribute higher than that of the user, or if the user were to cancel the effect and cease sustaining it. For any additional targets that the user would wish to use this spell against, they must pay an additional Mana cost, as well as towards any binding effect that takes place afterwards. With each subsequent post following any targets being struck by this ability, they will suffer an additional instance of damage equal to 1 Rank lower than the previous post (2 S -> 1 S -> 1 A, etc) so long as the user wishes to sustain the damage component.

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These spells have been denied.

For the first spell you have at least:
-Increased radius,
-multiple targets,
-increased damage,
-instant hit
-Defense ignore (if the 'this damage is unavoidable implies you're hitting through defensive spells or armor)
-sustainability,

you can only have 2 effects at most.

In case of the second one you already use the effect to redirect any damage to the head of the victim, on top of that removing all enchantments if your int is higher than the target is already questionable since Mind Break forces your enemy to tank a huge hit or have their INT be considered 0, on top of the fact that removing any perks from an opponent's magic isn't going to be allowed in the first place.

Please select another effect for that spell.

Both spells have been changed. All-Consuming Eternity has been reworked while Mental Corruption has been scrapped in favor of a different spell.

Bump. New spells created entirely.

Eldritch Dragon's Omnipotent Subjugation:

All sensory effects is too much, even Nightmare DS has that only as its signature effect, on top of it not being topic wide and not immune to nullification...

Please reduce it to one sensory being targeted.

Eldritch Dragon's All-Consuming Eternity
Damage over time halves the damage, so it starts as 2 S, then 1 S, then 1 A, then it goes onto cooldown. No 2 S each turn.

also the head being targeted specifically is a effect of its own (advanced homing), but eeh, I can live with that/will double check with the rest of staff)

Per discussions, spells have been corrected. Note, in the time between initial submission and latest bump, I have removed Debuff on Hit - Offensive as an Enhancement and replaced it with Spell Overcharge - Offensive, hence the changed modifiers within the spell text.

Approved, just note that Damage Over time only lasts for 2 posts normally, so your spells will deal S > A and then fall off entirely.

Note these spells will be under observation so you might be asked to change them down the line. but for now they are approved.