Lucian V. Crimson wrote:Name: Genesis Force: Twin Rising Kaisers
Rank: d
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: possesing genesis force magic
Type: Offensive
Element: n/a
Range: 3 Meters
Cooldown: 2 post
Duration: Instant
Effect: By gathering his magical power into his palms and stretching out his arms. Lucian channels the genesis force and fires off two 5 meter diameter balls of energy that reach a max speed of 10 m/s that cause slight burns and minor bruises upon those that it touches. These have a concussive force.

Max size is 1 diameter for D ranks.
Remove the spell speed, cause all spells have a flat speed of 20 m/s. Due to no element you do not have elemental access to burn damage, frost etc.


Name: Genesis Force: Roaring meteor Cannon
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: possessing genesis force magic
Type: offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Gathering magical energy into his mouth, Lucian releases a beam of genesis force from his mouth that travels  at max speed of  20 m/s that is 1 meter wide. This beam if it strikes causes slight burns and minor bruises along with a concussive force that knocks the target back a meter.

Same as above remove spell speed,
since spells have a flat speed. No burns cause you choose no element. its 1 meter in diameter.


Name:  Genesis Force: Strength of the Primal
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Genesis force magic
Type: Self-Buff strength spell
b]Element:[/b] N/A
Range: self
Cooldown: 3 post
Duration: sustain
Effect: Lucian internalizes the energy from Krotodamus and uses the genesis force energy of war to create an Aura that boost his strength by +5

Approved


Name: Genesis Force: Gaia Breaker
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Genesis Force Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 1 Meter radius
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Lucian empowers his leg with the genesis force and stomps the ground causing large cracks in the earth that surrounds him. This spell rocks with a violet power causing the earth to shake mightily causing anyone caught in this general area to be disoriented for a post.

This seems to close to a Earth type spell. Elaborate on how it disorientates someone.
This comes across as more of a supplementary than a offensive.

Name: Genesis Force: Roaring Wave Cannon
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Gensis Force Magic
Type: offensive
Element: N/A
Range: Direct Contact
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Instant  
Effect: Taking the Genesis force into his arms, Lucian strikes with with a physical strike zone such as the elbow, forearm, or palm Lucian releases the magic into the target disrupting their internal magic flow. This causes the target to have to spend 3 more mana points for the next three spells.

This is denied outright, no mana disruption stuff.

Lucian V. Crimson wrote:
Name: Genesis Force: Gaia Breaker
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Genesis Force Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 1 Meter radius
Cooldown: 1 Post
Duration: Instant
Effect: Lucian empowers his leg with the genesis force and stomps the ground sending the energy surging into the surrounding earth to cause a minor earthquake in his immediate area. Anyone in the general area caught in the radius will be disoriented for a post.

^this is a no cause this is pushing into earth magic territory. Especially considering disorientation.

Name: Genesis Force: Roaring Wave Cannon
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Gensis Force Magic
Type: offensive
Element: N/A
Range: Direct Contact
Cooldown: 2 Posts
Duration: Instant  
Effect: Taking the Genesis force into his arms, Lucian strikes with with a physical strike zone such as the elbow, forearm, or palm Lucian releases the magic into the target disrupting their internal magic flow. This causes the target to lose the use of the struck limb for a post.

^this is a no cause D rank spells can't even disable limbs. Please check the damage regs in reference to what D ranks do. Not to mention your magic doesn't really encompass that.