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Masado's Starter Spells

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#1Masado Faithe 

Masado's Starter Spells Empty Mon Jun 08, 2020 11:34 am

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Name: Lightning Rush
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Type: Self-buff (Speed)
Element: Lightning
Range: 5 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Sustain
Effect: Masado raises his hand (or sword if he has one) above his head and calls down lightning from the sky. The lightning engulfs his body causing him to glow in a yellow aura of energy that grants him a D-Rank speed boost.
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Name: Storm Flash
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Type: Supplementary
Element: Lightning
Range: 1 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Masado slams his fist (or shield if he has one) on the ground creating a flash of light that momentarily blinds the opponent for one post.
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Name: Thunder Crash
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Range: 1 Meters
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Masado raises his hand (or sword if he has one) above his head and calls forth the power of lightning. He will then slam his fist (or shield if he has one) onto the ground causing lightning to crash down at 20 m/s, with a chance of hitting any enemy target in range.
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Name: Lightning Charge
Rank: D
Mana Cost: 25
Requirements: Lightning Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Lightning
Range: Touch
Cooldown: 1 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: Masado charges toward a single target, lightning surrounding his body or his shield if doing a shield charge. The attack slams his body or shield into the target dealing Drank damage.



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#2Jan Ren 

Masado's Starter Spells Empty Wed Jun 10, 2020 1:18 pm

Jan Ren
Hey there!


  • Storm Flash: Change type to Supplementary and cooldown to 1 post.
    In addition, if it's an AoE, range should be 1-meter diameter.

  • Thunder Crash: AoE and as such, range should be changed to 1-meter diameter. Cooldown change to 1 post.
    Also, wording makes it sound like an auto-hit spell. It's minor, but should still be addressed. State spell speed.

  • Lightning Charge: If this is intended to be a slam spell, change range to Touch.
    As it's offensive, it can't have an extra effect like knockback just yet so... Remove that bit please.

  • As a general note, I love the naming sense. Had to say that lol


Post again in Spell Review when done!



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#3Jan Ren 

Masado's Starter Spells Empty Sat Jun 13, 2020 4:52 am

Jan Ren
Hello again!


  • Thunder Crash: All spells move at a static (or maximum of) 20m/s speed. Change the D-rank bit into that!

  • Lightning Charge: Change cooldown to 1 post and state the damage rank.


Post again in Spell Review when done!



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#4Jan Ren 

Masado's Starter Spells Empty Sat Jun 13, 2020 8:26 pm

Jan Ren
These spells have been approved.



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