Fire Dragon Slayer magick Vol. III

**Natsumi Duranndal** · Fri Aug 14, 2020 10:43 am

Epithet :

Salamander

Guild :

Empyrean Divine

Jewels :

1,300,000

Rank :

B-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

139,000

Reputation :

2,100

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

First Generation: Fire Dragon Slayer

Strength :

19

Speed :

8

Constitution :

32

Endurance :

14

Intelligence :

31

Mana :

1,150

Pouch :

2x Statistic Potion (22/01/2021)

Name: Fire Dragon's Roar Nova
Rank: A
Mana Cost: 200
Requirements: First Generation Dragon Slayer Magic
Type: Offensive
Element: Fire
Range: 20 Meters
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Duration: Instant
Effect: The User breaths in fire, building up a huge amount and then roars, A 2 meter diameter concentrated Fire beam is fired out, dealing A rank damage too all caught in the path of fire. During the spell the user lets out a terrifying Dragonic roar that sounds inhumane.

Jan Ren · Sat Aug 15, 2020 1:48 am

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

3,188,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

514,750

Reputation :

11,300

Class :

Spellhowler

Aura :

Empress

Strength :

123

Speed :

133

Constitution :

71

Endurance :

121

Intelligence :

205

Mana :

4,050

Hey there!

So the only real issue I see here is the 'user breaths in fire' part. It insinuates that you'll be breathing in specifically fire, which is significantly hindering since you don't just find fire laying around in places. I might be reading too literally into this, but I think if it's just 'user inhales deeply' it would be a lot simpler for you.

Just a thought, honestly. Don't mind approving it as it is though

**Natsumi Duranndal** · Sat Aug 15, 2020 3:50 am

Epithet :

Salamander

Guild :

Empyrean Divine

Jewels :

1,300,000

Rank :

B-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

139,000

Reputation :

2,100

Class :

Sorcerer

Magic :

First Generation: Fire Dragon Slayer

Strength :

19

Speed :

8

Constitution :

32

Endurance :

14

Intelligence :

31

Mana :

1,150

Pouch :

2x Statistic Potion (22/01/2021)

It was supposed to be like that, like the later roars where they don't need to clasps their hands around their mouths

Jan Ren · Sat Aug 15, 2020 4:25 am

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

3,188,000

Rank :

S-Rank

Race :

Human

Experience :

514,750

Reputation :

11,300

Class :

Spellhowler

Aura :

Empress

Strength :

123

Speed :

133

Constitution :

71

Endurance :

121

Intelligence :

205

Mana :

4,050

This spell has been approved for training.

**Karisa** · Thu Mar 04, 2021 5:39 pm

Epithet :

Megami

Guild :

Blue Pegasus

Jewels :

27,042,500

Rank :

S-rank

Race :

Ōtsutsuki

Experience :

750,000

Reputation :

54,600

Class :

Hunter

Magic :

Loki, the God of Mischief

Strength :

421

Speed :

6

Constitution :

181

Endurance :

1

Intelligence :

31

Mana :

2700

Weapon :

Head :

Body :

Ring :

Companion :

Raijin's Puppet: Offline

Pouch :

TAL-RASHA'S AGEING KEY ↂ, Eternal Bond [Partner:Dae-Seong]

The user has 48 hours to reply to this spell training thread notifying that they still wish to finish their spells before it becomes archived.

Fire Dragon Slayer magick Vol. III

Fri Aug 14, 2020 10:43 am

Sat Aug 15, 2020 1:48 am

Sat Aug 15, 2020 3:50 am

Sat Aug 15, 2020 4:25 am

Thu Mar 04, 2021 5:39 pm

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